vengance ( a possible one shot) warning large amount of blood and gore

should i keep going

  • yes and make it like your other series

    Votes: 1 33.3%
  • yes make it a little differnt

    Votes: 1 33.3%
  • wait for next one to make a judgement

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • no keep to the one you got going on now

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • stop and delete

    Votes: 1 33.3%

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ever wondered what normal is? do you ever know a day without hate?. Okami a young man will have to face the darkness and triumph or forever loose him self to blood lust

* 3 years ago*

okami on what?
jashin 3
okami feels the rage burn in his body, they stand at a murders door ready to cut him down
jashin 2
okami hands grow claws and he begins to develope pointed ears, he become more muscular
jashin 1!
bam the door flys across the room, a man goes for his gun but is caught by jashin before he could get near it
hanzo who are you? *in a cowarding voice*
jashin throws him on the ground near okami
okami your death *in a growling tone of voice*
hanzo NO no please *he is crying now and shaken*
okami for the murder of a innocent girl.
he digs his claws into hanzo guts, large amount of blood comes flying into okami's and jashin's face, they grow cannines and "feed" on the murder
hanzo *screams in agony* HELP HELP *he despartly screams*
okami puts a claw to his throat and rips it out, after they were done hanzo's body was nothing but insides flayed about
jashin remember okami he deserved to die for the murder of the little girl. *in a cold tone*
okami may he burn in hell for it *in a dark tone*

3 years later a disagreement broke out between okami and jashin each went their own way, okami now is under the watch of the JDF ( japanese defense force)

*in a military base*
*15 year old okami*

okami is working out on a bench, he is currently benching 400 on the 12th rep
okami no use staying in the shadows when i can smell you. *in a dark tone*
nashira well at least you can act suprised *in a cheerful yet sadden tone*
she throws him some papers, he reads them
okami MOTHER
nashira i know i know *in a calm voice*
okami does command ever listen to me *in a irritated tone*
he puts the bar back on the bench
okami whats the mission, another assassination, sabotage O i know escort. well tell them to shove it *in a dark tone*
nashira none of the above infiltration *in a joking tone*
okami sighs
nashira well its kinda of special, people are being killed on school grounds simular to how we work you know us "wolf people"
okami gets up now on alert
okami where?
nashira osaka high school
okami when?
nashira 1200 hours
okami packs up his "stuff" a akira mk 5 rifle and a katana plus a couple of 50 cal DE's

*12 hours later*
nashira what the hell okami *in a angry tone*
he looks at her confused
nashira no guns man or well keep the katana their allowed because of kunjutsu teaching *in slight ellivated tone*
he throws the rest of the stuff out of the car
okami there gone and forgotten *in a joking tone*
they arrive withing a few hours
okami what strange smells
nashira o my god *in dishearten voice*
a girl walks up to them
izanami hi *in a shy voice*
okami hello?
izanami can-can you tell me were class 10b is *in a shy voice*
okami no we just got here ourselves, my name is okami this nashira my sister
nashira *god**** it okami im going to kill you* nice to meet you *in a cheerfull tone*
izanami mine name is izanami nice to meet you *in a shy voice*
she looks at okami and blushes
izanami i need to get going
she runs off, as okami turns around BAM right in his face nashira punches him
okami what the hell *in a angry tone*
nashira are you nuts sister SISTER *in angry tone*
he gets back up, he smells a familiar smell but dismisses it, the day starts off as normal he goes to biology, then math when at the class change to history in the hallway
*distant arguing*

izanami LEAVE ME ALONE *she shouts to the top of her lungs*
??? whats the matter sweet cheeks gotta problem
??? shes just a lowlife wannabe asura
asura i know that but she needs to learn to shout her mouth
he grabs her and throws up against a locker, okami follows the noise of tears to her location
asura you killed them you piece of SHAA
BAM! okami hits him right in the dome and sweeps off the floor with a kick, his friend trys to join in but he gets his arm broken in the process
asura you little low life how dare you *in a angry voice*
okami did not listen he was checking on izanami
okami are you ok?
izanami im fine *in a shy voice*
asura listen you little mut hear me when im
okami picks him up by his collar and now the feeling of blood lust enters his vains. he drawed his hand back but tosses him away
okami if you ever do this again i'll won't hold back
he storms of angry

*3 hours later at night*
okami gets out of bed to a strange smell like a rotting corspe he opens his room door there lyes asura gutted and butchered by his feet and his friend blood writes on the
welcome back brother

end of chapter 1
 
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okami translates to wolf people thats why i name him this anyway this will be my 2nd series in between chapters of the my naruto rise of the uzumaki dynasty series anyway i have a poll up to see if i should continue the story and if so do it like my other series right now
feed back a must
 
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