"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

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"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

"Utopic Monkeys"

Utopic Monkeys - Chapter 1 - " The Legendary Knight "



Utopic Monkeys - Chapter 2 - " Ch? The Avenger, Introduction "


Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

" When the world is filled with evil. Warriors of hope appear.
The Utopic Knights.
Long ago a virus has spread over the entire Earth. Most of the population
was dizimated. Only the stronger & the richer survived.
Chaos begun to rule the world. Destruction is the every day breath of the sole survivors and the richer got even richer and more corrupt, creating an entire new Utopic world shaped to their greed, desires and interests.
That's when the Knights of Hope appeared. They were called Space Monkeys.
With their bodies as their weapons; Their fists can rip the sky and reach the gods.
Their feet can split the ground and cause an Earthquake. And now,
these Knights with Bravery, proud and power have appeared once again as the new Space Monkeys.."​

Babilon A.D. , 2287 ( Utopic Future )

- Back in Bunny Larry's place. In a deserted,dark and messy living room.
A severed and mortified body surrounded by a pool of blood landed in the ground.
A huge and deep cut slitted around his throat, the blood keeps keaving the wound.

Dante - AHHHHHHH!!!

Dante Screams in fear!!​

Blood and more blood is spilling and dripping in the ground.


Ch? - Ahhh!! My hand..

A Voice is heard.

Voice - Seems like you won't be able to do ugly, nasty things with that right hand for a while..

The misterious man who just saved Dante laughs.​

Dante - SUJIRO!!

Dante shows an expression of relief​

Sujiro - So what's happening here?? Seems like a real party.
Can i join you guys??

Sujiro is one of the best friends of both Dante & Shura. A cheerful man who shows great concern for his teammates.
He's funny and sarcastic and likes to mess around much like our hero, Shura.
Sujiro is just as devoted to his friends as Shura.

Sujiro has a slightly feminized air with short black hair and big brown eyes.

He's about 5'9 and 165 pounds.

Ch? - Let off of my hand. I'll kill you both!!

Sujiro - As you wish, princess.

Sujiro retires the applied pressure from Ch?'s hand and let him go. Ch? takes 3 jumps backwords​

Ch? - You guys just keep on appearing but it's of no use. I'll kill you both.

Sujiro - I'll be your opponent from now on. Little Dante here was not born to fight.

Dante - Be cautious, Sujiro. He's dangerous.

Ch? - You think you can beat me. Just because you blocked my Hydra Fang Attack and broke my right hand?
I wasn't expecting such sneak attack, that's why you managed to succeed on your little trick.
But you can't do anything now that i accounted for your presence, you missed your big chance..

Sujiro (Thinking) - This guy uses Lightning based attacks. I have to account for that.
Plus many Infected ones were surrounding the house and can break in at any moment.
A scratch or a bite from those things and we get into Living Dead corpses as well & Dante cannot defend himself.
Situation is not good. I don't have many time and must defend Dante as well. On a more bright side at least i
was able to break his hand and that will play in my favor to end things quick.


Sujiro - Let's end this, snow flake. What you think?

Ch? - The Hydra needle

Ch? starts attacking​

Ch? strikes a laser type of Lightning based attack fired from his left index finger called The Hydra Needle but misses as Sujiro avoids it by jumping to the wall to his right.

The Hydra Needle

Element Style:Lightning
Type:Attack
Rank:C
Range:Short/Mid/Long
Speed: Mach 1

Sujiro (Thinking) - What was that?

Ch? - You avoided the Hydra needle.
Pretty good but let's see if you can keep up with an hundred of them.

Ch? starts striking Hydra Needle Attacks left and right, everywhere. Sujiro is running and jumping all over the living room trying to evade Ch?'s blows.

Sujiro (Thinking) - At this rate i'll have to upgrade my speed to Mach 1.5 level.

Sujiro (Screams to Dante) - Dante block the door to the house with something and hide yourself. The infected ones
will try to break in at any moment.

Dante - Ok, Sujiro.

Dante proceeds to block the main door with a car hoods that was laying around in the living room & hides himself next to
a shelf from the battle that is happening between Ch? and Sujiro​

Ch? stops executing his Hydra Needle Attack.

Sujiro - Seems like i evaded every single one of your hundred Needle attacks.

Ch? - I beg to disagree. Look at your right shoulder.

A small, deep hole can now be seen on Sujiro's shoulder.​
.

Sujiro - What the..??
( Thinking - But when did he?? I was pretty sure that i'd evaded every single strike )

Ch? - The Hydra needle is such a small and fast attack that it's impossible to dodge every single one of them.
You were carefree and reckless.
Now your central Nervous System is affected and you won't be able to move for a while.
Your brain electrodes are all messed up and won't obey to your will until your body starts aknowledge
danger and creates a defensive system.

Ch? - Seems like you were an easy prey after all.

Ch? - Rest for all eternity with the Medusa Spit.

Sujiro (Thinking) - What?? This guy also possess the Stone element in addition to Lightning Based attacks??
Is he?? The disciple of the??
I have to dodge that or this place will be my grave.


The Medusa Spit is a Stone Based Attack that turns into stone everything that the saliva touches.
The target will be turned into stone for all eternity and can only be reverted back to normal if the executer
of the attack dies.

Medusa Spit

Element Style:Stone
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short/Mid
Speed: Mach 0.5

Ch? - The MEDUSA SPIT!!!

Ch? spits an noticeable amount of saliva right at Sujiro with an immobile Sujiro right in front of him.​

Sujiro ( Thinking ) - The end is near........

What's going to happen to Sujiro??
Who is Ch???
Stay tuned for the Next chapter of "Utopic Monkeys"..


Enjoy!!!​
 
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

You gonna kill Sujiro right off the bat?
I'm betting big that Shura appears to save the day. That Cho guy is overpowered lol.
Attacks that imobilize + attacks that turn his targets into stone = instant win :D
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

You gonna kill Sujiro right off the bat?
I'm betting big that Shura appears to save the day. That Cho guy is overpowered lol.
Attacks that imobilize + attacks that turn his targets into stone = instant win :D
Nah i don't think it's the end of Sujiro, either Dante, awakens some powers that he doesn't know he has(Just like Gohan from DBZ) or Shura saves the day just like you said. Seems like Cho might be a disciple of The Legendary Knight and if Cho is this strong, boy how strong is TLK? Seems interesting..
 
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

why at one piont dose dante tell himself to be carefull??

"Be cautious Dante. He's dangerous." this is a quote frome the story
 
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

Seems no one mentioned so far but this FF has Fcken Zombies going around eating people.
How badass is that?
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

I just finished reading the third chapter and you are talented in this field ^.^ I like the main characters, Shura being the main protagonist is perverted to the extreme lol Dante is that pacifistic, caring character with his head on straight and Sujiro is a free-spirited hero-like character. Ch? the antagonist is that enemy you love to hate and the other characters yet to be revealed I?m sure will be awesome in their own way. I have to agree with Ruler Michael as you created a Fanfic outside of a manga, etc. I loved your quote where you seemed shocked that readers were really getting into Dante?s character as I suppose you probably thought they would have rather liked the main protagonist or the antagonist. I already am taken with a character thus far and it is Dante because he has the characteristics that I like. I?ll be awaiting the next chapter good luck and keep it up! Boku no tomodachi (my friend).​
 
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

I just finished reading the third chapter and you are talented in this field ^.^ I like the main characters, Shura being the main protagonist is perverted to the extreme lol Dante is that pacifistic, caring character with his head on straight and Sujiro is a free-spirited hero-like character. Ch? the antagonist is that enemy you love to hate and the other characters yet to be revealed I?m sure will be awesome in their own way. I have to agree with Ruler Michael as you created a Fanfic outside of a manga, etc. I loved your quote where you seemed shocked that readers were really getting into Dante?s character as I suppose you probably thought they would have rather liked the main protagonist or the antagonist. I already am taken with a character thus far and it is Dante because he has the characteristics that I like. I?ll be awaiting the next chapter good luck and keep it up! Boku no tomodachi (my friend).​
Thanks a lot Kuroi my friend. You have been a support since the very beginning.
And a huge friend when i was sick last year even if we don't know each other personally.
Yeah i'm kinda surprised that 80% of the readers are so hyped up with Dante.
And you made a very nice description of the characters so far.

Keep your eye open because a new chapter will be posted Tonight and will be one for the ages.

Also i'll be posting my drawings of the characters soon for you guys to picture them in your head better.

Kuroi, Dante is already drawed and i'd say that he's definetely your type of character not only in personality and psychologically but also physically.
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

I just finished reading the third chapter and you are talented in this field ^.^ I like the main characters, Shura being the main protagonist is perverted to the extreme lol Dante is that pacifistic, caring character with his head on straight and Sujiro is a free-spirited hero-like character. Ch? the antagonist is that enemy you love to hate and the other characters yet to be revealed I?m sure will be awesome in their own way. I have to agree with Ruler Michael as you created a Fanfic outside of a manga, etc. I loved your quote where you seemed shocked that readers were really getting into Dante?s character as I suppose you probably thought they would have rather liked the main protagonist or the antagonist. I already am taken with a character thus far and it is Dante because he has the characteristics that I like. I?ll be awaiting the next chapter good luck and keep it up! Boku no tomodachi (my friend).​
very well said ;)
 

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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Three.. " Ch? The Avenger, Medusa Spit "

nice man! great imagination. it never dawned on me that an electrical attack could target the nervous system but it makes total sense.
 
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