"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger - Sacrifice "
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Chapter 7 will only be OUT by tomorrow.
Today i'll re-edit Chapter 2,3 & 4 to my current style of writing and formating.
Name of the Chapter 7 is:
"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Seven.. " A New Mission - Part 1 "
Today i'll re-edit Chapter 2,3 & 4 to my current style of writing and formating.
Name of the Chapter 7 is:
"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Seven.. " A New Mission - Part 1 "
Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger - Sacrifice "
making it a manga would ruin it for me i like to imagine the charichters for my self itsawsome imaganing what they look like and the cenaery i think if its not broke dont fix it but its whatever you want to do i guess anyways good chapter i like the cliff hanger ending
making it a manga would ruin it for me i like to imagine the charichters for my self itsawsome imaganing what they look like and the cenaery i think if its not broke dont fix it but its whatever you want to do i guess anyways good chapter i like the cliff hanger ending
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nice read, the descriptions of the attacks are great and make the fight imaginable and easy to read. sujiro is a cool guy too, even if i think that it would help him to be more sarcastic.
i dont think that cho died, you could have made his death clear if you wanted to, but instead you gave him the knife, so he still has a little role left
i think the smell is some enemy (zombie), sujiro is too exhausted to fight and we will see another character come and fight them. on the other hand if it is a common thing that would be a surprise^^
nice read, the descriptions of the attacks are great and make the fight imaginable and easy to read. sujiro is a cool guy too, even if i think that it would help him to be more sarcastic.
i dont think that cho died, you could have made his death clear if you wanted to, but instead you gave him the knife, so he still has a little role left
i think the smell is some enemy (zombie), sujiro is too exhausted to fight and we will see another character come and fight them. on the other hand if it is a common thing that would be a surprise^^
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger - Sacrifice "
Come to think of it. Are you starting a new arc called A New Mission now?
Does that mean, that the last arc was named Ch? The Avenger? Damn i`m good!
Regarding Ch?, i can only think of two outcomes.
1: He playes the same role as Zabusa did in Naruto:-/
2: or he will somehow come back and get the name of: Ch?, the armless knightxd
Come to think of it. Are you starting a new arc called A New Mission now?
Does that mean, that the last arc was named Ch? The Avenger?
Damn i`m good!Regarding Ch?, i can only think of two outcomes.
1: He playes the same role as Zabusa did in Naruto:-/
2: or he will somehow come back and get the name of: Ch?, the armless knightxd
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger - Sacrifice "
Come to think of it. Are you starting a new arc called A New Mission now?
Does that mean, that the last arc was named Ch? The Avenger?
Regarding Ch?, i can only think of two outcomes.
1: He playes the same role as Zabusa did in Naruto:-/
2: or he will somehow come back and get the name of: Ch?, the armless knightxd
Actually no. "Ch?, The Avenger" it's only a segment of the Prologue of the First Arc.
We are in the Prologue which is actually the first arc of my Fiction.
So i can say this Fiction will contain 4 Arcs.
We are in the Prologue which is actually the first arc of my Fiction.
So i can say this Fiction will contain 4 Arcs.
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Em. Sorry, but what did you say this arc was called again?
Ah, so that`s how you are steering things around here?
Em. Sorry, but what did you say this arc was called again?
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Ah, so that`s how you are steering things around here?
Em. Sorry, but what did you say this arc was called again?
So Far.
Arc 1 - Prologue
1. Introduction
2. Ch?, The Avenger
3. A new mission
4. ???
5. ???
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Arc 2 - ???
Arc 3 - ???
Arc 4 - ???
Chapter 7 will be out in 1 hour or 1H 30 minutes.. Stay tuned.
Arc 1 - Prologue
1. Introduction
2. Ch?, The Avenger
3. A new mission
4. ???
5. ???
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Arc 2 - ???
Arc 3 - ???
Arc 4 - ???
Chapter 7 will be out in 1 hour or 1H 30 minutes.. Stay tuned.
Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger - Sacrifice "
Anyway, it doesn`t really matter, all i care about now is part 7
Almost tricked you into answering there
Anyway, it doesn`t really matter, all i care about now is part 7
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger - Sacrifice "
Almost tricked you into answering there
Will start the posting now.
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Re: "Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter Six.. " Ch? The Avenger - Sacrifice "
Chapter 7 is OUT!!!
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"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter 9.. The Infamous Chapter that was banned by the Forums
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