"Utopic Monkeys" - Chapter 9.. **** Liquor - Open till Dawn
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Okay.. It`S been ageeeeeees now. Did you die or something? You haven`t been online for a looooooooooong time, at least you haven`T responded to anything what so ever in a looooooooong time.
Any luck with chapter 10 BEFORE 2011?xd
Just don`t wait too long Mr. Golden Boy..
Any luck with chapter 10 BEFORE 2011?xd
Just don`t wait too long Mr. Golden Boy..
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He's barely in home nowadays.Okay.. It`S been ageeeeeees now. Did you die or something? You haven`t been online for a looooooooooong time, at least you haven`T responded to anything what so ever in a looooooooong time.
Any luck with chapter 10 BEFORE 2011?xd
Just don`t wait too long Mr. Golden Boy..
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You are something else. Just some posts above you are bitching because he doesn't post in a while than you post crap like that with an "attitude".
I`m not bitching, it`s just that everyone are waiting, and you said that he hasn`t been around for awhile and when he finally posts something he only says:
Most peoples would expect something like
... but you don`t have to wait much longer now/... But you`ll have to wait a little while longer/.. Will take awhile before next chapter. For instance.
It was like his post was incomplete, that`s why i said "and", so that he can say: And the next part will... something
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I`m not bitching, it`s just that everyone are waiting, and you said that he hasn`t been around for awhile and when he finally posts something he only says:
Most peoples would expect something like
... but you don`t have to wait much longer now/... But you`ll have to wait a little while longer/.. Will take awhile before next chapter. For instance.
It was like his post was incomplete, that`s why i said "and", so that he can say: And the next part will... something
It's all i have to say.King Dante
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Really?? What do you think?You and your brother, you never know if you`re being sarcastic or not.
You were sarcastic weren`t you?
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Thanks, glad you like it!
Same here
Same!! Very glad you like it, thanks.
I'll do it when the time is right.
... criticism only, no malice intended...
just read it... wasn't a fan... you just basically copied the p*ssy bit from dusk till dawn... and then say you were inspired by tarantino , that part is border-line plagiarism imo... and in my opinion it's vulgur fanfic about two people getting drunk at strip joints trying to fit in as many swears as possible.
as a film... i'd expect it'd be the kind young kids would sneak in to watch... however wouldn't appeal to normal adults.
that's the audience i see for it, this is merely personal opinion.
(btw before you start criticising my writing ability... as i've seen you do previously to bad criticism as i read through the thread. my fanfics aren't supposed to be masterpieces, merely a dedication to friends.)
just read it... wasn't a fan... you just basically copied the p*ssy bit from dusk till dawn... and then say you were inspired by tarantino , that part is border-line plagiarism imo... and in my opinion it's vulgur fanfic about two people getting drunk at strip joints trying to fit in as many swears as possible.
as a film... i'd expect it'd be the kind young kids would sneak in to watch... however wouldn't appeal to normal adults.
that's the audience i see for it, this is merely personal opinion.
(btw before you start criticising my writing ability... as i've seen you do previously to bad criticism as i read through the thread. my fanfics aren't supposed to be masterpieces, merely a dedication to friends.)
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This was answered already through the thread. So many directors and writers pick up in stuff from other writers, directors.
He didn't made anything different there, also it seems like you only read one chapter, this chapter. Which makes your post kind of silly.
don't worry... i've read your posts too and you're obviously a friend, so i take your post with little regard. yes some writers do take inspiration such as artists do... however that scene isn't so much inspiration as a modified copy. i am not saying that it is bad... i just feel it is more aimed towards an immature audience... people who think that it's funny to either write countless swears and constantly say the word "p*ssy".
i am merely stating my own opinion, which is that it seems an immature fanfic for me, where as i feel the writer wanted to aim at a mature audience he seems to have got caught too much in others' work and lost sight of what he wanted to create.
in my eyes a true artist need not mimic another style... true revolutionaries create their own style... do me the favour of at least trying to absorb some of these words and think before replying my friend...
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