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[Lord of Kaos]

Experimenting with different forms of poetry at the moment. Here's my take on a sonnet poem. I don't think it matches up to my past work but ehhh...

Can a man's soul be re-deemed
If he doesn't have a soul to be sold?
Can he save himself from being condempted
If he doesn't have a story to be told?

Men search their whole life
Looking for the one thing they are wasting
They deal with turmoil and strife
For thinking the world is theirs for the taking

A soul can be as empty as
The Mind that it occupies
As spirits speed by fast
The mind watches as the soul flies by

Whether or not humans can save their own soul
This should be their goal, whether they die young or old.​

 

[ackeem1992]

very good keep it up

 

['Kurapika]

+rep , too keep the base creative

 

[BlacKing]

Not bad LoK. Makes me want to pick up writing again....but I'm more of a spur of the moment poet, not a do it when I think about it poet. lol. I have to be inspired by something or something tragic happens. The last one I wrote was when a friend of mine passed away two years ago.....

 

[Vroqrak]

keep it up

 

[Lord of Kaos]

very good keep it up

+rep , too keep the base creative

keep it up

Merci beaucoup.

Not bad LoK. Makes me want to pick up writing again....but I'm more of a spur of the moment poet, not a do it when I think about it poet. lol. I have to be inspired by something or something tragic happens. The last one I wrote was when a friend of mine passed away two years ago.....

Grazie. I like to think of myself as an all-around artist. I draw, write poetry, write stories, sing/rap, play instruments, and act. Kinda like a package deal it seems.

 

[Igneel]

lol..nice LOK ....... but i don't like this as much as your last few works

 

[Lord of Kaos]

lol..nice LOK ....... but i don't like this as much as your last few works

Grazie, amico mio. I agree sadly.