What brings you here, you old geezer?Hei Uzumaki in Sig'. Akatsuki ring on left little finger and Dollmaster on my back.. who's starting?
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Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Quick fingers and an eye for detail were the Dollmaster's trademarks. But only once did he use his skills to create a weapon. This was the result, as colossal as his dolls were delicate. In a small town once known as "Arashi" lived a man known as the Dollmaster, he was well known for his craftsmanship, building and designing anything from furniture to houses but nothing compared to his Dolls, every single doll different in detail from it's previous. ranging in sizes and styles. Over the years he made thousands of Dolls, all made for his private collection. Every year during the week long "Festival of Lights". The Dollmaster placed is Dolls out on display to shine under the fireworks. After seeing the delicate Dolls, the Leader of the town admired his craftsmanship and asked the Dollmaster to make a Sword for him. Although the Dollmaster had never made a sword, he was excited to take on the challenge. Over the fallowing weeks, the Dollmaster spent most of his time on the sword, he crafted an unique blade. Upon finishing it's final details. the Dollmaster was killed by having his neck slit, his blood spilling out over the blade, his body lied bleeding out over the blade for weeks until he was found in his workshop under his home. it is unknown why the Dollmaster was assassinated. Later, after the creation of the Ninja Villages, the remaining Dollmaster's Dolls where collected and put on display in a museum located in the Land of Waves. his sword was placed as his most regarded piece of work and held as his homesteads most prize treasure. After seeing the Blade and unknown Ninja stole it for himself, only then did he learn the blade's Dominic past. Hearing the Dollmaster's voice echo throughout his mind.
Abilities Notes:
-Because of the Blood absorbed from the Dollmaster, this blade gained his chakra and soul, allowing for the sword to contaminated with it's user as if it was the Dollmaster himself. This allows the Dollmaster's Blade to alert it's wielder of anyone up to a Mid-range area.
-Once per battle the Dollmaster is able to Infuse his Chakra into it's wielder. by using this foreign Chakra the Dollmaster is able to dispelled any Genjutsu up to A-rank, giving it's wielder a clean slate.
-The Style of it's blade, is unique as it is a chain blade, allowing it's wielder to extend it's reach and un-extend it's reach up to a Mid Range area.
-Because of the Dollmaster's eye for detail, this blade is razor sharp and made out of an unknown metal that and never dulls, it is as sharp as it was the day it was forged.
Restriction Notes:
-Can only Extend reach once per turn.
-Can only Un-extend reach once per turn.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (-10 Ninjutsu Cost)
Damage points: N/A
Description: One of the ten Akatsuki Rings worn on the left little finger. This Ring is made out of an Indestructible light-green stone that increases the Ninjutsu ( Basic, Advanced + Elemental ) abilities of the user decreasing the amount of chakra needed by 10, with the exception of E and D rank technique, without altering the damage output. All Ninjutsu technique's Handseals are decreased by 1/3. This ring produces a hidden frequency received by other rings providing a hidden form of communication among ring bearers. Five times per battle, it can be used to create S ranked constructs of chakra attached to the ring that is able to drain chakra on contact, gaining up to 50 chakra each strike. However, after using, the user's ring backfires from chakra overload and cause all ninjutsu to require an additional 10 chakra for the next turn.
Note:
-Can only be worn by a Member of Akatsuki
"Hey, who are you calling old?" Hei replies comidicly as if insulted. As the battlefield is engulfed in smoke, hindering Hei's sight, he begins channeling chakra into his breath granting him another prospective of the battlefield. Through this, he notices himself surrounded by a spiked dome around him with three holes on the ground. "Tempting escape route, but predictable." Hei thinks as he dashes forward using his ring to erect a blue drill of pure chakra around himself that rapidly spins. This will shred through the spiked dome and allow Hei to escape before dispersing. (see "Akatsuki Ring: North" for detals and this will happen before the fire reaches him if you still use it.) "In fearful day, in raging night, With strong hearts full, our souls ignite. When all seems lost in the War of Light, Look to the stars, for hope burns bright!" Hei says jokingly as he breaks out of the dome. As his drill disperses small amounts of electricity would shock him as it erupts form the unstable crystal. "What the hell?" Hei thinks, analyzing the situation. (20 damage equal to D-rank) This will slightly stunt him but nothing fetal or too much of a hindrance.What brings you here, you old geezer?
House passively activates his byakugan then puts together three handseals and summons quartz through the whole area (long range). The whole range of the field will appear to you in quartz while lots of giant pillars laid down (covering your eye sight from me) as the smoke dissipates. However, as the smoke dissipates you'll notice that you're encased in a large spiky inside and out quartz dome. The quartz dome will be 3 meters in diameter with you in the center. The quartz underneath you appears to have three big holes after a rather immense amount of smoke. After the creation of my quartz, I form a handseal thus stomp the ground and causing three fire pillars to emerge from underneath you through those holes. As the fire appeared, the heat distorts the quartz thus causing an s-ranked unfocused lightning to fill the room electrfying you and frying you with the pillars from underneath.
After the fire, Dante lets out a huge chakra burst thus launching him mia-air towards you in an arc.
(Sekieiton: Shivua no Mauntensanku)- Quartz Release: Shiva's Mountainous Sanctuary
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+40 to go long range) (+20)
Damage Points: N/A (+20 if disrupted)
Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and slam their hands on the ground, releasing a barrage of Quartz chakra through out the terrain. The user will be able to create a large source of Quartz on the terrain, where before it appears, the user will be able to manipulate it. This is signaled by a large poof of smoke that appears, similar to regular summonings, before the smoke clears to show the newly found terrain. This technique allows the user to create various terrain based areas composed mainly of Quartz, such as large mountain structures, a complete flat plain composed of Quartz (layering the ground), even things as ancient as a Colosseum. The feature he basically needs for battle such as pillars, gorges, canyons, mountains, simple plains, etc. Initially the user can only change the terrain at most up to mid range, but through extra chakra exchange can exert the terrain manipulation up to long range. The user can also decide to change the appearance of the terrain, by performing two hand seals, and slamming his hands on the ground, the user can re-manipulate the terrain, by changing its design. The user when defeated, when the terrain is destroyed, or when the user wants to, can end the terrain alteration. This terrain allows the user to take advantage of the fight, create Quartz techniques out of the terrain, or aid with preexisting Quartz jutsus already present. Techniques coming out of the ground will likely meet with the Quartz layering, preventing it from being completed. However, this also creates the same drawback for the user as well. A special property of this terrain is Quartz natural ability to release electricity when distorted. Any time the terrain experience a certain amount of stress, or pressure, it will naturally release this unfocused electricity from the spot of distortion, numbing, and inflicting pain to anyone unlucky enough to be in that vicinity. This goes the same for techniques/materials on the surface of the Quartz. This technique is essentially attached to the user, when pieces of the terrain is destroyed, the user can inject their chakra into the damaged area, allowing the crystals to reform, and fix itself due to the chakra consumption (+20 needed), this happens passively.
Note: Lasts four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No S-Rank or above Quartz jutsu on the turn this is deactivated
( Katon: Gōka Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fire Flame Pillars Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their fire chakra and release it into the ground by stomping down their leg and then causing three pillars of fire several meters tall spaced out evenly. The Pillars of fire can act as a defensive wall against incoming techniques or targets or used to attack low aerial targets.
(Hakke Eien no) - 8 Trigrams Eternal
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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique will enable the user to release a series of large amounts of chakras from his chakra points on the tips of toes or exerting from his palms (incase he is standing on his hands) enabling the user to move at fast speeds when he kicks/pushes off the ground or kicks/pushes onto a direction within mid-air in order to evade an incoming jutsu, or to move into hand-to-hand combat.
Note:
-This jutsu won't deal any damage.
-Can be taught by Dr. House
My CW in my right hand,
Sumitsukigasa - Dante's Horn of Sorrow
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (-10 each turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: It has yet been said within many dusty old books that a great man named Dante Alighieri has gone to save his loved one from the great evil toad of Myobokuzan, Gamafer. Dante had gone down into the pit of death, into Gamafer's lair. After 7 days of a bloody fight, Dante failed to save his flower, and he showed no mercy to Gamafer. After the bloodbath, Dante carved a blade from Gamafer's mighty horn and he took these pieces to be forged by Hephaestus, the nearby blacksmith. He had forged the mighty double-bladed sword, and named Sumitsukigasa. The double-bladed sword is made of mostly unbreakable bone, harder then steel. Because of the blade part is made of bone, and most of it's parts, the weapon weighs almost half of it's size, and can be handled in order to reach high speeds. The -10 chakra in each turn is because Sumitsukigasa sucks the user's chakra in order to maintain it's ability, which is being always in the state of having itself imbued with wind chakra, quite similar to (Fūton: Kaze Kyōka no Tsūru) - Wind Release: Wind Enhanced Tools, and it won't stop until the double-bladed sword is out of short range from the user. If the user wishes, he may channel more of his chakra into the sword, which is an additional -10 chakra in each usage, in order to extend the pre-existing wind chakra inbued within the sword, onto 5-6ft. As the wind chakra has been extended on the sword in order to reach 5-6ft, the blade becomes an S-ranked wind blade, but for only once a turn. Since the sword has an affinity for Wind, and as the sword's inbued abilities will travel onto the user's hand giving him a uniqueness of enabling him to seal a mere handseal for any wind jutsus. When the user performs any wind jutsus, the inbued chakra will add it's own inbued wind chakra from the sword (10 chakra which been sucked off from the user, every turn) into the technique completely, (transfering that sucked -10 chakra into the technique) having the sword lose its inbued wind chakra for that turn.
Note:
-Because of the sword's abilities, only a Sannin may hold the sword.
-Because of it's wind affinities, only who mastered wind may use it.
-If user wishes, the wind chakra imbued within the sword can be extended so that it will reach onto 5-6ft.
-Only may Dr. House use this, and who he allows.
-If someone tries to hold it, the sword will start sucking most of his chakra out of him, leaving him with a feeling of drained.
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(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the dōjutsu kekkei genkai of the Hyūga and Ōtsutsuki clans, inherited from Kaguya Ōtsutsuki. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, shinobi with have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters and Otsutsuki clan members will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. Not only can they see chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu (even of their own). Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if they're a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot; slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backwards. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away.
Note: For Hyugas, activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
Note: Hyugas must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Its tracking abilities are equal to that of 3 Tomoe Sharingan.
Note: Only Hyugas possess the ability to utilize Jyuken, However, all Otsutsuki clan members possess the ability of passive activation.
Hei keeping close watch on his opponent as they near each other notices the aura form as the opponent begins to kick with their right leg. Using the boosters on his back Hei slightly changes his momentum as he focuses chakra into his left arm. Hei will trust his palm forward upon the kick and releases a sonic palm thrust that will disperse into the rhino of chakra. This will cause a clash of chakra's creating a nulled blast of sound/chakra (This is not harmful to either of us) between the users pushing them both back to a Mid-ranged area. As Hei is blasted back he uses his back boosters that he was already adjusting to slow his momentum maintain flight and staying away from the ground.As Dante sees this mist not having any chakra within it and his chakra flow being disturbed, he corrects it by poking his own chakra pathway and sending a wave of chakra through himself. Then as he flew close range of you, he creates a chakra shroud around his legs and using his right leg, he lands a right kick to your side, launching you to my left with great injuries.
(Chakra Zesei ) -Chakra correction
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Rank: S
Type: defense
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points: N/A Description: The user focuses and
compresses the chakra in their
thumb,then poke theirselves with
it,thus sending in a wave of chakra
into their body to correct their chakra
flow, if previously disturbed. -Must be a hyuuga clan member
-3 times per battle
-Must be taught by Magic..
(Juho Tsuin Raino no Ashi) Gentle Step Twin Rhino Feet
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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Similar to (Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists, the user forms two large rhino head-shaped shrouds of chakra around their leg, and as the user strikes his feet onto the opponent, crushing him into the ground. As where the user kicks, it causes great internal bleeding/damage to the opponent.
Note:
~Can be used 4x
~Must be taught by Dr. House
~Must master and have a great control over Jyuuken
~Only may sannin use this.
As the crystal forms around the water containing it, as well as Hei and Ouji, Hei quickly leaps to his side and Ouja opens his mouth and catches Hei within providing a defense and keeping a pocket of air for Hei to breath. Hei once inside Ouja's mouth will clasps his hands together conjuring fourth a casket that releasesAs I'm flying backwards, I ease myself down onto the quartz platform with freeform chakra release. This warrior isn't playing... Dante thought to himself. As the enemy summoned the eel, Dante signs a handseal and creates a rather large sphere of quartz all around the eel and you, morphing out of the quartz layer beneath thus holding all of your water within this sphere as it's trying to spread. This sphere closed around you but one small hole where you may barely fit through. Once you're drowning in the quartz sphere, I'll release another huge chakra burst to propel me towards you within air. As Dante boosted himself up, he signs a mere handseal and sends electricity within the clouds to come down striking from above you. The electricity will strike within the very hole I created, thus electrifying the whole body of water and you with it.
(Sekieiton: Shivua no Mauntensanku)- Quartz Release: Shiva's Mountainous Sanctuary
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+40 to go long range) (+20)
Damage Points: N/A (+20 if disrupted)
Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and slam their hands on the ground, releasing a barrage of Quartz chakra through out the terrain. The user will be able to create a large source of Quartz on the terrain, where before it appears, the user will be able to manipulate it. This is signaled by a large poof of smoke that appears, similar to regular summonings, before the smoke clears to show the newly found terrain. This technique allows the user to create various terrain based areas composed mainly of Quartz, such as large mountain structures, a complete flat plain composed of Quartz (layering the ground), even things as ancient as a Colosseum. The feature he basically needs for battle such as pillars, gorges, canyons, mountains, simple plains, etc. Initially the user can only change the terrain at most up to mid range, but through extra chakra exchange can exert the terrain manipulation up to long range. The user can also decide to change the appearance of the terrain, by performing two hand seals, and slamming his hands on the ground, the user can re-manipulate the terrain, by changing its design. The user when defeated, when the terrain is destroyed, or when the user wants to, can end the terrain alteration. This terrain allows the user to take advantage of the fight, create Quartz techniques out of the terrain, or aid with preexisting Quartz jutsus already present. Techniques coming out of the ground will likely meet with the Quartz layering, preventing it from being completed. However, this also creates the same drawback for the user as well. A special property of this terrain is Quartz natural ability to release electricity when distorted. Any time the terrain experience a certain amount of stress, or pressure, it will naturally release this unfocused electricity from the spot of distortion, numbing, and inflicting pain to anyone unlucky enough to be in that vicinity. This goes the same for techniques/materials on the surface of the Quartz. This technique is essentially attached to the user, when pieces of the terrain is destroyed, the user can inject their chakra into the damaged area, allowing the crystals to reform, and fix itself due to the chakra consumption (+20 needed), this happens passively.
Note: Lasts four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No S-Rank or above Quartz jutsu on the turn this is deactivated
(Hakke Eien no) - 8 Trigrams Eternal
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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique will enable the user to release a series of large amounts of chakras from his chakra points on the tips of toes or exerting from his palms (incase he is standing on his hands) enabling the user to move at fast speeds when he kicks/pushes off the ground or kicks/pushes onto a direction within mid-air in order to evade an incoming jutsu, or to move into hand-to-hand combat.
Note:
-This jutsu won't deal any damage.
-Can be taught by Dr. House
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.
too long for a VM so I'm posting here for you to see xDAs House sees that this eel absorbed his lightning attack, he channeled his CW special ability within him (boosting his next attack) then set another set of lightning into his hands thus releasing all of the electricity within the sphere as House is mid-air near the hole he left open. Instantly as House began releasing his boosted lightning stream, he applies Thunderous Recreation where his lightning technique gets duplicated as House is streaming the lightning towards the eel. As the 250 damage lightning instantly travels through the water and rips through the eel and along with you and Kirabi, it'll easily go through the quartz and have the massive sphere of quartz starting to collapse underneath Dante. He'll jump off and ease himself down with freeform chakra.
(Mai· Sōru jihi o motte iru!) Have Mercy Upon My Soul!
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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Himself
Chakra Cost: 30 (See Description)
Damage Points: +15 Ninjutsu
Description: Once the user is wielding Sumitsukigasa for the minimum of 2 turns, he may use the chakra of the sword for his own advantage. The sword sucks 10 chakra every turn, but it leaves excess chakra behind. When the user wishes after the 2 turns, he may harness this chakra and the chakra absorbed within that turn onto his own advantages, boosting his power. Once this system has been broken, the sword becomes unbalanced in the same turn when this chakra has been harnessed, the sword becomes useless in the same turn. Because of the unbalance of the sword, user will receive -10 health damage in the same turn. As it tries to suck it back the taken chakra at once what has once left the sword, in the next turn, user suffers -30 chakra loss. As the sword has sucked back an enormous amount of chakra in that turn (meaning 30 chakra), activating itself once again, a furious wind will surround it, leaving the area in a really windy environment for when it sucked back the 30 chakra. This means that no raiton attacks of S-rank can be made from the user in that turn when there is a windy environment. As the sword becomes out of control when it sucks back the chakra, having an S-ranked fuuton chakra surround it, only Kage or higher may be able to handle it.
Note:
~Can be used 1x
~The sword won't be useable in the same turn as this technique.
~Only Kage or higher may use this.
~Sumitsukigasa must be wielded.
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~Won't be able to sign handseals in the same and the next turn.
(Raiton:shainingu boruto ) - Lightning style: shining bolts
Rank: forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: long
Chakra Cost: 50 Damage points: 90(10 to user) +20 (from the quartz sphere being disturbed) +15(CW special)=125 x2 thunderous recreation = 250 damage.
Description: The user focuses a large amount of
lightning chakra and trasmits them into both
hands whilst stretching forth his/her hands,he/
she gathers a pool of shinning lightning energy
in his palms,then releases them in many shinning bolts that travells and with an insane
speed.
-Once per battle
-No A-rank and above next turn
- this shinning bolts has the ability to temporalily blind anything that makes eyecontact with it,thus the are blinded for a turn(This goes for the user also).
(Raiton: Kaminari no Yōna)- Lightning Release: Thunderous Recreation
Type: Offense/Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Depends on technique)
Description: An elemental lightning technique based around shape manipulation, a concept deprived from Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation and the Lightning Shadow Clone. The basic concept is, the user will either release unfocused lightning onto a conductible material (either through touch, or sending a bolt through the air, or ground), or inject this jutsu into preexisting lightning to harness the lightning technique/material. The user is able to create duplicates of the original jutsu. The appearance of the duplicated jutsu is exactly the same as the previous technique, their damaging property, rank, size, and purpose of jutsu is relatively the same as well. This technique can be used on streams, projectiles, humanoids, self-sustaining techs, etc. Most of the time "shocking" to touch, the lightning duplicate will have a certain amount of tangibility to remain in shape. The user can create an extra beast for attack, or another spear of lightning. Alternatively, when used on jutsus/weapons with lightning conducted on it, the user can create a duplicate from that as well (only tangible elements). The difference between using this jutsu on already existing lightning, or on conducted lightning, is that the conducted lightning (such as a kunai with nagashi), will appear to be an exact copy, its internal body composed of electricity, but in appearance looks regular as ever. And when struck, reverts back to a regular state of pure lightning. To the opponents eye's, this method would look simply like a clone of the original technique, though this might not fool some forms of sensory, and dojutsu. These duplicate jutsus can be controlled as a streaming, or can be aimed as a projectile. The duplicates are created short range of the original jutsu, but the user can inject/use this jutsu on techniques from virtually any range. The power of the duplicates is equally divided between the numbers created if needed by the user. A drawback to this jutsu is shape matters, it can be used on shaped/tangible lightning techniques, or tangible materials conducted with lightning. This can not be used on one's self with lightning armor based jutsus.
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: A duplicate can last up to two turns max
Note: Can not be used with natural lightning (e.g. Kirin), because of its scarce and how limited it is to control
Note: A duplicate can only be used on one technique at a time, if the user wants to use this technique on another, they would have to re-perform this technique
Ah thank you for explaining that for me. Let's go with having two 105 damage each ligthning strike each. I just added them upbecause they do kinda come from the same direction. And also, it doesn't really specify the manner of the release of the technique, I mean I could just be releasing the bolts in a straight manner right into the hole and have my hands right infront of the hole.too long for a VM so I'm posting here for you to see xD
Lmao no. few things before I reply. First being damage stacking. We both know the rules on boosting attacks, and that is "one passive boost and one active boost." You cannot stack multiple active boosts to gain a higher damage output. In the case of multiple active boosts on the same technique, the strongest boost is the one that is active. Second, your crystal being disrupted doesn't boost your attack by a +20. It's a separate form of attack that has a 20 damage output (D-rank). When combining attacks you don't add the total of the damage. (example: A-rank + A-rank = S-rank. This means 60 Damage + 60 Damage = 80 Damage.) In other words, the damage output of an A-rank technique only boosts a +20 to the combined technique. So adding the C-rank damage isn't going to give the same enhancement as an A-rank. This brings me to my third and final point. the x2 from cloning the technique. That also isn't how your technique works. You clone the technique making two separate techniques. You don't multiple the damage. one of two things will happen. First being, you now how two separate techniques that are forbidden ranked (105 damage) or a combination of the techniques which as shown earlier wouldn't double the overall damage output.
Oh, last thing. The whole you left open is small, as you said it's only large enough for Hei to fit through. the attack you are making is spread "widely". This means that they would hit your dome which will act as a shield for me.
So, I know that isn't your intent so It's up to you. I can reply to this current move or, You can edit a new move for me to reply too.