[Adventure] Unforgiven

[Yüme1]

Note: I don't do poetry, or haven't really done it... Ever, this is basically my first real shot at it. Figured i'd try...
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I know what you said,
I know what you did,
But no tears will be shed,
And those tears will be hid.

You're an evil, slippery, hideous scum,
Though the wrong that you did me will smother in rum.
Look what you've done, see how I've shrunk,
I've withered to nothing, I'm just an old drunk.

But I still won't cry, nor will I fret,
I'll never forgive, and I'll never forget.

Spoiler

Yeah... Deep u_u

The story behind it is, there was a boy and his brother. His brother did something terrible, that changed their lives forever. And the effected brother became a hermit. u.u

Edit: Adventure is the wrong tab as well...

 

[LastGREATEST]

Thankx I can use this for English!!

 

[uchihamad]

I like it

 

[Ryóma]

Good work. And the rhyming is good.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

nice

 

[Mis]

I especially like the "Look what you've done, see how I've shrunk," part, as it is very relatable.
Good job! :3