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Waits for myself >_>














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Alright, so I have some to teach you friend so if you have any questions at any time, use this thread and I'll answer them to the best of my knowledge.


What you will be learning today:

3. (Kaminokaze no danmaku) - Divine Wind Barrage
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of chakra to the blades of two swords while gripping the handles and while still in their respective scabbards. The user then quickly unsheathes the swords which are imbued with a red-like glow. The user then bends his dominant right leg slightly and towards the back, allowing the left leg to move forward slightly. The user then points the swords in an eastward position, his right arm holding the sword parallel to his stomach and the left hand holding the sword above and parallel to his head. The user then motions his right hand back, using it as a momentum builder so that once it comes back to its eastward position it propels the user into a spinning motion, slashing the opponent about four times. While spinning, the user places the weight of the body onto the left leg, spinning on it as he continues slashing and tilting slightly as well at a sort of sideways angle. After the fourth slash, instead of another slash, the user kicks the opponent in the face in a sideways motion similar to one of the sword slashes just performed, dropping the opponent into the floor and ending the technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation

4. (Suwarō Bonnaban) - Swallow Leap Forward
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a frontal flip and while in midair above the opponent, skewers him with his sword. Using the momentum from his leap and sword skewering, the user continues his flip, in turn flipping the target, causing him to be thrown onto his back. As the user completes his flip, he lands on the target's chest forcibly, causing a near fatal kick.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation

8. (Raiton: Raijū no Fukku)- Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Hook
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After channeling chakra to one's dominant hand, the user extends it and releases the chakra in the form of a lightning rod protruding from the palm of his hand which the user then grips. By applying shape manipulation and bending the tip into a pseudo hook, the user then spins himself and hooks onto the opponent. As he spins, the opponent is caught on the hook and is hurled by the user in whatever direction he chooses. This jutsu is best used in conjunction with taijutsu or freeform taijutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note Can only be taught by Izzeh/Deviation

9. (Ninpō: Orihime) - Ninja Art: Weaving Princess
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 per turn
Damage: N/A (+60 if used with Lightning)
Description: Utilizing normal, durable ninja wire, the user channels chakra to it and utilizes it to bind his opponents. The user can elect to increase the friction the strings, making the wire hotter and able to case burns, making it a good technique to use for torture and information gathering. The strings can take on whatever form the user wishes making it quite a versatile technique to use with ninja wire. By channeling lightning-type chakra to the wires the user can increase their cutting power to cut through solid earth of A-Rank and lower. The user can also elect to not channel chakra to the wires and instead use a more suitable lightning technique to fit his situation. The strength of the binding is A-Rank. The technique itself does no damage until combined with lightning.
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation

What I want from you is its strength and weakness. Not expecting a novel but don't want one word for it either. Got it? Get crackin'!
 

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i apologize deeply for the extreme delay and that i never replied to the first one. but here we are back at it.

alright here goes.... searches through your customs...

so...

Water Wave Strike, Rising Sun...

think that is all the cj in which you have that i would like unless something is missing from your list or something :p
 

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i apologize deeply for the extreme delay and that i never replied to the first one. but here we are back at it.

alright here goes.... searches through your customs...

so...

Water Wave Strike, Rising Sun...

think that is all the cj in which you have that i would like unless something is missing from your list or something :p
Sorry I dont have much to offer aside from summon cj and kg cj.

Anyways, give me your critique of the cj to see how well you understand them and then they are yours, officially.

(Suiton: Mizunami Kiri) - Water Release: Water Wave Strike
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Using a water source as a basis, the user slashes his sword at it, releasing several large, crescent chakra waves. The chakra waves then break through the water source, and take on the properties of water waves, growing in size the farther the opponent is from the user. The waves however travel in a linear motion, aren't able to break through very dense water, and can't be controlled once breaking through the water source.
Note: Requires a water source
Note: Must be taught by Deviation
Note: Can only be used on existing water source.
Note: The water that is sent at the opponent itself has no rank, as there is no chakra infused directly into the water.

(Raiton: Asahi) - Lightning Release: Rising Sun
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user dashes forward towards their opponent whilst channeling lightning-type chakra to their sword. The user unsheathes his sword and performs an upwards slash that releases a lightning shuriken that launches the enemy upwards and continues traveling past him. The user jumps in the air and performs several slashes with their sword, the final attack being the shuriken coming down and striking the enemy towards the ground ending in an explosion of lightning. The shuriken itself acts as a sort of boomerang, being willed by the user's chakra. This allows him to direct it's course in short range should the enemy be able to move but can only be done while airborne.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note: No Lightning Release techniques in the same turn
 

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the first one is very simple but could do with a buff. the cj is very simple and as far as i understand you can use it like while its raining for example or through a thin wall of water etc. However this tech could be made cool and maybe have some more use :D

the second one so after you make an upwards slash the lightning shuriken is released upwards in a straight line so it comes straight back down, and while this happens you jump in any fashion you wish while slashing at the target before the shuriken comes back down resulting in a lightning explosion upon the target. if im not mistaken?
 

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the first one is very simple but could do with a buff. the cj is very simple and as far as i understand you can use it like while its raining for example or through a thin wall of water etc. However this tech could be made cool and maybe have some more use :D

the second one so after you make an upwards slash the lightning shuriken is released upwards in a straight line so it comes straight back down, and while this happens you jump in any fashion you wish while slashing at the target before the shuriken comes back down resulting in a lightning explosion upon the target. if im not mistaken?
Great. Thanks. Consider yourself "legal".

[insert legal meme]

Edit: On "rising sun" remember that as the shuriken comes back down and while airborne, you can manipulate its path downward however you like. So even if they dodge the strikes, the lightning will surely get them. ;3
 
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