Turu Taraki - revised

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Basic Information
Name: Turu Taraki
Nickname: Turu
Gender: Male
Age: 5

Looks: Turu is 4’10” with brown skin. Known for his big smile and the fact he’s always smiling even in the middle of battle. Turu has a thin muscular build. He wears the Kumo-nin flak jacket with a black shirt with the color popped underneath (similar to Darui). His head protector is on his belt buckle. He wears black pants. He has shortly shaved black hair. He has a defining scar up his left arm that he received while fighting Zabuza the devil. The scar which is 4” thick goes from his left wrist to the top of his left shoulder.

Personality: Turu is disciplined and determined despite his all smiles attitude. Turu follows the footsteps of his sensei Killer Been in goofing around. Turu is loyal, dependable, and always early.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kumogakure
Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Turu is an earth user.
Your ninjutsu:
-His speciality ninjutsu is Earth Style Devastation
-Earth Style Devastation causes the ground underneath an opponent to explode sending the earth in all directions. This move at the moment is only effective about 7 feet or less from the target.
-Turu is skilled with any sword from his training will Killer Bee.

Background Info.
History: Turu Taraki wasn’t raised in a ninja family. His parents owned the local scroll shop and wanted Turu to grow up and take over the shop. Unfortunately for them Turu had a natural gift for taijutsu. At age 5 he encountered Killer Bee and told him he’d be a great ninja like Bee and A. Killer Bee said “hey kid I believe that’s true, show me what you can do.” Turu then bested two genin, who Bee asked to challenge him, using only taijutsu while they were attempting to use their lightning jutsu. After that a brash Turu challenged Killer Bee only to have each of his moves shut down with Bee’s left hand. Killer Bee said, “hey kid if you want to be great like A or me, you gotta go to the academy. When you’re done with that I’ll be you sensei, then you’ll be endlessly more powerful than today.” After the academy invite from Killer Bee, Turu’s parents agreed to let him become a ninja. Turu graduated the academy before age 6. Turu had a natural infinity for Earth Style which developed quickly. He joined Team Killer Bee as a genin.
Other
Turu doesn’t use kunai he actually uses metal needles similar to Genma. He carries a 3 foot long katana that normally stays holstered at his side. He learned from Killer Bee a way to instill faith in everyone who crosses his path. His main failure in battle was not knowing how to react at age 5 when Zabuza the devil trapped him in the Hidden Mist Technique. Zabuza nearly killed Turu with his Beheader and would have if Killer Bee didn’t knock him out of the way. Zabuza, attempting to behead Turu, started cutting up his left arm and reached his shoulder before being stopped by Killer Bee.

Battles

Won: 1 B Class, 10 D Class, 18 E Class
Lost: 1 B Class
 

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You ave to delete a lot...The age first..I tink he is very very too young to had training with Killer bee and stuff..Also there that you have the Element just writte "Earth"...You dont have speciality since you have not recive any training yet,so delete those thing you have from speciality,i think you can write only "speed"..You also need to make a lot of things in History...Also in the battles that you have won and that you have lost they mean the battles with the bio..You dont have fight so you must write in both of them "None"..Special the thing with Zabuza..Thats totally wrong..He couildnt fight Zabuza if he is 5 years old...Zabuza the devil vs 5-years-old kid =winner 5 year old kid= FAIL...delete it...In the background info you could tell that his parents had the scroll shop,but he wasnt ike the oters kids he was more talented and stuff...He joined Academy and graduate and stuff in small age...It is more reliable and believable...But speciallyincrise the age...No offence my friend..If you need any more help with the bio just PM me :D!!
 

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You ave to delete a lot...The age first..I tink he is very very too young to had training with Killer bee and stuff..Also there that you have the Element just writte "Earth"...You dont have speciality since you have not recive any training yet,so delete those thing you have from speciality,i think you can write only "speed"..You also need to make a lot of things in History...Also in the battles that you have won and that you have lost they mean the battles with the bio..You dont have fight so you must write in both of them "None"..Special the thing with Zabuza..Thats totally wrong..He couildnt fight Zabuza if he is 5 years old...Zabuza the devil vs 5-years-old kid =winner 5 year old kid= FAIL...delete it...In the background info you could tell that his parents had the scroll shop,but he wasnt ike the oters kids he was more talented and stuff...He joined Academy and graduate and stuff in small age...It is more reliable and believable...But speciallyincrise the age...No offence my friend..If you need any more help with the bio just PM me :D!!
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