[Tai] Trials of the Noldor

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Meliodas waited on the border of Lothlorian, it was time he took responsibility for his clan once work and trained them in the new ways of the clan, a unique style of taijutsu that would help enhance their close quarter combat with the power of the elements. It was a great asset but a hard one to master. Meliodas had learned it all from the creator of the style, Zenryoku, a great sage of the close combat arts and a true master of meditation, and he can honestly say how much he valued these teachings. He stood looking around waiting for his two student to arrive, though, one was quite full of himself thinking he was better than everyone else, and the other, well, he was a bit too snobby, but eh, it is what it is at the end of the day.
 
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Laxus walks in with his hands in his pockets his coat hanging off his shoulders with his headphones on his ears with no care in the world. As he got closer he was more than ready to get this over with. Laxus wanted to be the strongest. He was already more powerful then most in the clan. That he was sure of, but he knew there were still much he needed to learn. Even then he still didnt have much patience and was ready to get started. Unfortunately for him he had to wait till everyone was present.

Is this everyone? Let's get started already!
 

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Thranduil walked through the borders of Lothlorien, all he wore was relaxing ropes of dark blue and white colors. His white hair he had adjusted behind his elven ears, while his blue eyes penetrated the landscape. He knew Meliodas since they both were very young and knew he could be quite childish, however he was the Clan Leader. Thranduil saw him as still a child, just like Meliodas saw him as a snobby man who saw himself above others to some extent. Thranduil prepared for the worst when meeting up with his old friend and the other clans man Laxus.

"Meliodas I'm curious as to why you have chosen to meet us here and not somewhere deeper into our own territory? and Laxus I have heard few good things about you, hopefully you won't bring shame upon the Elves."
 

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Thranduil walked through the borders of Lothlorien, all he wore was relaxing ropes of dark blue and white colors. His white hair he had adjusted behind his elven ears, while his blue eyes penetrated the landscape. He knew Meliodas since they both were very young and knew he could be quite childish, however he was the Clan Leader. Thranduil saw him as still a child, just like Meliodas saw him as a snobby man who saw himself above others to some extent. Thranduil prepared for the worst when meeting up with his old friend and the other clans man Laxus.

"Meliodas I'm curious as to why you have chosen to meet us here and not somewhere deeper into our own territory? and Laxus I have heard few good things about you, hopefully you won't bring shame upon the Elves."
Thranduil spoken to Laxus and said something that he didnt approve of but he didnt let it show. Instead, he chuckled to himself while crossing his arms before his chest in a casual manner. He carelessly shifted his head to the side as he responded to Thandruil

The only thing this clan should be shameful of is how weak they seem dispite having the Holy light's power, but that's none of my business.

With his fire chakra he simply lit a small flame on his index finger while lifting a cigar out of coat pocket before bringing it before the flame and inhaling thru the other end lighting it before inhaling so more taking the cigar away from his face and exhaling smoke.
 

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Meliodas looked around as they both arrived, both acting in their same old manor, well you couldn't change who somone now could you? He leaned back with his hands behind his head with a huge grin on his face, and now it was time to taunt the both of them

The only sad think about our clan is that you guys can't fight haha... i've seen toddlers with better form than you guys hahaha...

He was aiming the taunt them to see how they would react and maybe even test their form.
 

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Meliodas looked around as they both arrived, both acting in their same old manor, well you couldn't change who somone now could you? He leaned back with his hands behind his head with a huge grin on his face, and now it was time to taunt the both of them

The only sad think about our clan is that you guys can't fight haha... i've seen toddlers with better form than you guys hahaha...

He was aiming the taunt them to see how they would react and maybe even test their form.
Hearing Meliodas' taunt made him choke on the smoke he recently inhaled once again, causing him to cough uncontrollably as he beat his chest to help get all the smoke out of his lungs. Once okay he was able to look at his father wide eyed and jaw dropped before he quickly defended his pride.

I have the second best form in these grounds. Behind you, of course! I could defeat anyone in this clan in hand to hand combat without using my full strength!

Laxus pointed at Thandruil frantically as he made his plea to Meliodas.
 

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Hearing Meliodas' taunt made him choke on the smoke he recently inhaled once again, causing him to cough uncontrollably as he beat his chest to help get all the smoke out of his lungs. Once okay he was able to look at his father wide eyed and jaw dropped before he quickly defended his pride.

I have the second best form in these grounds. Behind you, of course! I could defeat anyone in this clan in hand to hand combat without using my full strength!

Laxus pointed at Thandruil frantically as he made his plea to Meliodas.
Not even allowing his eyes to glance at Laxus his pride was still intact because he knew he could defeat him with all his power if need be. However not feeling that irritated by Meliodas, he was too used to his taunts, laughter and sometimes annoying attitude.

"Look Meliodas I'd rather not stand around and talk perhaps you should get to the point, and Laxus should perhaps be a bit more polite towards someone of higher skill and stature"
 

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Not even allowing his eyes to glance at Laxus his pride was still intact because he knew he could defeat him with all his power if need be. However not feeling that irritated by Meliodas, he was too used to his taunts, laughter and sometimes annoying attitude.

"Look Meliodas I'd rather not stand around and talk perhaps you should get to the point, and Laxus should perhaps be a bit more polite towards someone of higher skill and stature"
I am being polite to my father. But I must agree I also would like to get to the point of this meeting.

Laxus then takes another puff of his cigar before exhaling the smoke and waits for Meliodas
 

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Meliodas explains that he has a new form of training. In this style. He is going to make you both sparing partners. You will gain access to NB taijutsu up to and including B rank, in order to show your understand. This will allow you to use basic tai, freeform and Nb tai up to B rank but not the elder teachings. He will judge the fight move by move and he wants to see variety. He will put on a referee shirt and after each of you makes a move he will comment on your moves.

OOC: You will spar, make one move each, and i'll comment. If you have any questions about the jutsu you use, please post them at the end of your move. I'd like Gutsy to start. Short range 5m from each other, solid stone martial arts arena.
 

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Change of plan, this is too much effort, we are going for basic analysis, 3 jutsu at a time, i'll post them, you break down how they work, and post any questions you may have, no RP needed.

( Toppyoushimonai Okane ) - Crazy Monkey
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: Crazy monkey is a form of Chinese martial arts. It is an aerial attack where the user jumps to head height and double kicks the target in the chest with enough strength to break bones, reminiscent of a monkey.

( Akurobachikku Sanjuu Rakka Ashige ) - Acrobatic Triple Drop Kick
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user jumps into the air and performs a front flip, kicking the target three times during the maneuver. Each successive kick is lower than its predecessor, but equally powerful.

( Kyuuki Ashige ) - Crane Kick
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user positions themselves in the crane stance, lifting one knee to its maximum height while holding both arms parallel to the ground. In this stance the user is able to deliver powerful kicks with their raised leg
 

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alright the first technique Crazy Monkey seems very simple and easy, you simply jump into the air and kick the opponent dead in the chest with both your legs at the same time with enough force to break their ribs.

acrobatic triple drop kick, simple as well, flip forward, so you basically do a triple front flip while delivering a kick to the opponent each time you come around in your flip. Each kick delivered to different areas of his body.

Crane Kick, taking the crane stance in front of your enemy, you raise one knee with arms out to both sides, you can deliver a front kick to any area of the enemy, of course the crane stance could be used in mid air as well in a sense.

- dont see how much more break down they need to be honest, and they are way easy to understand ._.
 

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for the first technique the user would push off the ground with both feet onto the targets chest. from there he would push off the targets chest with both feet with more than enough strength to knock them down. most people jump back or to be flashy they perform a back summersault before landing.

with the second technique the user pushes off the ground with both feet performing a summersault where at the apex of it they kick the opponent three time starting with the initial foot, the alternating foot and the initial foot once again. i would attack the nose, the chest, and the abdomen

I have a feeling i am going to be using this technique a lot because the crane is used well in Taekwondo which i have done extensive research on. the user lift one knee as high as he can which is usually up to his navel. with his hands out to his sides. From there, they can perform a variety of kicks like a snap kick, push kick, or a rising spike kick.
 

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alright the first technique Crazy Monkey seems very simple and easy, you simply jump into the air and kick the opponent dead in the chest with both your legs at the same time with enough force to break their ribs.

acrobatic triple drop kick, simple as well, flip forward, so you basically do a triple front flip while delivering a kick to the opponent each time you come around in your flip. Each kick delivered to different areas of his body.

Crane Kick, taking the crane stance in front of your enemy, you raise one knee with arms out to both sides, you can deliver a front kick to any area of the enemy, of course the crane stance could be used in mid air as well in a sense.

- dont see how much more break down they need to be honest, and they are way easy to understand ._.
for the first technique the user would push off the ground with both feet onto the targets chest. from there he would push off the targets chest with both feet with more than enough strength to knock them down. most people jump back or to be flashy they perform a back summersault before landing.

with the second technique the user pushes off the ground with both feet performing a summersault where at the apex of it they kick the opponent three time starting with the initial foot, the alternating foot and the initial foot once again. i would attack the nose, the chest, and the abdomen

I have a feeling i am going to be using this technique a lot because the crane is used well in Taekwondo which i have done extensive research on. the user lift one knee as high as he can which is usually up to his navel. with his hands out to his sides. From there, they can perform a variety of kicks like a snap kick, push kick, or a rising spike kick.

Like you both say, rather simple, but they can be really useful :)

( Marui Sumai Ashige ) - Round House Kick
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user pivots on one foot and swings their leg, delivering a powerful roundhouse kick to the target. The power of the kick is enough to send most opponents flying.

( Tora Tsume Hiza Sumasshu ) - Tiger Claw Knee Smash
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user pounces on the target, forming tiger claws with their hands and clasping them by the neck or shoulder region. Using great strength the user then pulls the target towards them while simultaneously delivering a devastating knee strike.

( Hiji Ken Hiza Konbo ) - Elbow and Knee Combo
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user jumps towards the target, raising both arms up while baring their elbows down towards the opponent’s head. At the same time they bring their knees up towards the target’s jaw, resulting in a pincer-like strike.
 

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NB tai, advanced taijutsu yet simple XD

well first one you can go clockwise or counter-clockwise as you pivot on either foot delivering a roundhouse kick directly to their side, chest etc. sending them flying with great force.

Second technique you leap at your opponent with your arms extended and hands like claws you grab onto the target however you wish and force them towards you while delivering a powerful knee to their chest knocking the air out and possible breaking ribs?

first i was like what, but i think i get it you jump into the face of your enemy, while raising your knee to strike their jaw from below but at the same time you also drop one or two elbows down on top of their head smashing them together at the same time.
 

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these techniques are funny because i use most of these techniques freeform.

for the first technique as you pivot one leg the other leg is elevated and positioned laterally before the user swings the leg, fully extending it to hit the target at the side to send them flying, the head to send them into a tailspin or cause them to twirl in the air

for the second technique the user make their hands to resemble the claws of a tiger before using them to dig deep into the trapezious muscles of the target to pull them down while raising a knee to strike the opponent

the user pushes off the ground with both feet to leap to the opponent head height where they will bring down both elbows to the crown of the head while rising both knees to the lower jaw of the target to smash the opponent's head. basically a double interception method to the head.
 

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They can't all be 5 element F ranks that blow up half the planet xd

Anyway, first few are simple concepts but with power greater than freeform:

( Tetsu Kashira ) - Iron Head
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate earth chakra into a layer around their head, which enhances their durability and gives them an iron-like head, then they head-butt their target causing major damage. This technique is, alternatively, capable of breaking though C-rank earth techniques.

( Fuujinken ) - Wind God Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user focuses wind chakra into their feet and then, crouching and dashing at the target with great speed, the user coats their arm in wind chakra. Utilizing this to enhance their attack the user then thrusts upwards into the stomach of the target, releasing the accumulated wind to send them flying upwards several feet.

( Shouryuken ) - Rising Uppercut
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: This attack is a jumping uppercut in which the user utilizes a spin to increase the reach and speed of their jump. This attack is an excellent anti-air move capable of sending a target flying several feet.
 

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when it comes to Iron head, first you must mold earth chakra and focus it to the forehead and the crown of your head because you use it as a headbutt to someones face resulting in facial fractures for the opponent or you can use it to shatter C-rank earth coming at you.

If i didnt know better i would say that this is the weaker version of the vortex punch. after the user focuses wind chakra to his feet and dashes and crouches to the target, the descriptions are almost verbatim.

Understanding the description of the final technique gets me excited because this sounds like the Shoryuken! im about to be the next Ryu up in this joint! just saying
 

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Iron Head, cool name. Well simply enough gathering earth chakra within my forehead, i enhance it to the point where it becomes like iron, can also be done to the entire head before i forcefully headbutt someone straight in their chest or head, literally enough to break or knock them out.


Dashint towards my opponent with great speed after focusing wind chakra into my feet and coating my arms with wind chakra, i utilize it to dash into them delivering two forceful upwards thrusts right to the stomach sending them flying several feet away.


Finally the rising uppercut, quickly leap through the air spinning upwards delivering a powerful uppercut straight to the opponents chin sending him flying even further into the air.
 
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