[Suiton] Training with Akatsuki

[Gααrα]

Waaiz perfroms the Tigee handseal and applies nature transformation to his chakra and change it in to suiton chakra and send it inside the ground in front of him and then he applies shape manipulation to the suiton chakra and turns it in to a pressurized jet of water then he aims at the boulder with Izuna Uchiha's face on it then he releases the jet towards it the jet was travelling furiously towards the boulder as it hits the boulder it gets destroyed in to pieces.
Advantages
Requires a single hand seal and water source , a powerful technique.
Disadvantages
As it is a projectile-based technique it can be easily countered.
Offensive Usage with Combos
To pierce through my opponent in a CQC battle because it requires a single hand seal and can be performed quickly in short ranges. As my opponent will be on short range I'll use a doton tech to trap my opponent and then I'll use it.

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Waaiz performs the hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon while applying nature transformation to his chakra and turning it in to suiton chakra and then he sends his suiton chakra towards Tobirama who was standing five metres away from Waaiz after sending his chakra , he materializes water and then he performs shape manipulation to the water and shape it in to a column of Water shaped like a snake with a gaped (opened) mouth and then he send the snake towards Tobirama as the snake eats him then the snake turns in to a river and takes Tobirama with him.
Advantages
Requires no water source.
Covers all the ranges
Can be used in two ways. first, it will take the enemy away. Second, it will turn in to a river that can be used as a water source for the water source based techs. (Maybe)
Disadvantages
Requires six hand seals
How'd it will aid me in battle
Um, I will use it when I would have a water affanity coz it requires 6 hand seals , and I would usually use it in short ranges that will give me an upper hand in the fight.

 

[Edward]

"Yeah, it is a stream based technique but just be sure to remember that it travels through the ground. The second, i suppose it would be useful as a water source, just keep in mind that it wont be able to support higher-ranked water techniques due to it not having enough waters. It depends on the water technique you are to use. Furthermore, don't forget to include why it will give you an upper hand in the fight."

"This next one is one that i like, but don't use in battle too often. The concept of it is very simple. You create a pillar of water to rise up from below you target to imprison them. This is done by perform nature transformation on your chakra in order to change the nature of it into the properties of water, the 'free-flowing and wet' properties of water. Send the water chakra underneath your target, in which you'd create your own water from nothing." Tobirama pitches in a training dummy, with ze face of your arch enemy. "Alright, remember this guy? z_z Perform the technique on the training dummy. Once you've materialized the water underneath it, perform shape manipulation to have it rise up and shape into a sphere of water, that traps the target making it hard to escape. Keep in mind, you need constant chakra manipulation to keep this technique going, therefore you are unable to perform other techniques so long as you want to keep the sphere present, unless the prison is completely created. That's a disadvantage, i suppose. It's like an advanced version of water prison technique without the need of hand seals. Once you've performed it on the training dummy, give me Creative usages in battle, and how would you defend against it?"

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

"Another... boring one. For you, probably. The concept of this technique is one that we've been through multiple times but of course, it is simply a stronger version of the pass techniques." Tobirama performs a set of three hand seals as an example to the student and points it at the amazing portrait he created earlier. "Dragon, Tiger, and Rabbit. These are the three hand seals required for this specific technique. While performing the hand seals, use nature transformation to change the nature of your chakra into the properties of water. Send the chakra in your mouth and once the hand seals are performed, release the chakra in the form of water. Release it forcefully to create a large and forceful jet of pressurized water. It is stream based, of course and the power is enough to deal a great amount of physical damage. Perform it destroy some of those training dummies and give me advantages, offensive usages, and what do you think would happen if the enemy was struct by it?"

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(Suiton: Mizurappa) - Water Release: Water Horn
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After waving the Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit hand seals, the user creates a big jet of water that is launched from their mouth. This technique works exceptionally well with Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique to help it become like cement.

 

[Gααrα]

Waaiz focuses on his raw chakea and applies nature transformation to it and turns it in to suiton chakra then he sends the suiton chakra underneath the training dummy and the he applies shape manipulation to it and make it rise up in a form of a water pillar taking the dummy in the air then he again applies shape manipulation to it and turns the pillar in to a sphere that traps the training dummy and Waaiz keep sending his chakra in to it to maintain the water sphere.
Creative Usage
Well , I would obviously use it to trap my enemy.
I will also use it when my opponent is on short range to me that will shock him and as it will trap the opponent near me I will quickly disperse the sphere and use my gentle fist to finish him off (Oh Yeah! XD)
How'd I defend against it
As the water pillar will take my in the air I will substitute myself with something
As I am trapped in the sphere , I will use the water gun technique to make hole in it and get out of there.

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Waaiz starts to perform the hand seals Dragon → Tiger → Rabbit while focusing and applying nature transformation to his raw chakra and turning it in to suiton chakra and then he channels that suiton chakra to his mouth and then he applies shape manipulation to it and pressurise it and then he releases towards the training dummy in a form of pressurized jet of water that uproots all the training dummy.
Advantages
Requires no handseals, a powerful technique , deals heavy damage.
Offensive Usage
I would use it when my opponent is mid range coz it requires 3 hand seals and no water source , offensive Usage will be that to focus the point or aim at a specific part of my opponent's body.
What will happen
It will be able to give a severe injury and if keep it going on a specific part, maybe it will be able to break through it.

 

[Edward]

"If i recall correctly, the water gun technique is a C-rank technique so i dont think it would work. Furthermore, because it is a projectile based technique, the enemy can just maintain the hand seal like they originally would and have the gushing water imprisonment imprison you yet again. A defense would be the wind, B-rank, "Peacock Whirlwind Formation" - it is an omnidirectional burst of wind which should disperse the water. And good job on the second technique. Though it does have a fairly wide range, so you'd be able to attack at a wider range.

"The next technique is one of the most used, and extremely useful technique. It's power is enough to crush the enemy from its force." Tobirama places several training dummies around the battlefield, about thirty and all within mid-range. "Okay, slam your hands on the ground as you perform nature transformation to change the nature of your chakra into the properties of water. Once you've done that, send the water chakra above your opponent, in this case, the area above all the training dummies. This technique requires a vast amount of water chakra because of the amount of water it produces. Make sure it is about 10 meters above your target, and once it does, use the water chakra to materialize water from thin air. They're unfocused and shape manipulation is not needed, however the large mass of water makes up for it. This technique relies on the brute force and density of water to deal its damage and with gravity, the speed in which the water falls should create enough force to crush the target if they do not defend from it properly. Perform it over those training dummies, and give me advantages, disadvantages, and how you would use this offensively in battle. It should have enough force to crush the dummies." Tobirama walks behind the student as he analyzes his performance.

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.

"This following technique is quite an interesting technique." Tobirama points at the water scattered around the battlefield from using the first technique. "Stand on that water source. Once you do that, channel chakra throughout your entire chakra points while performing nature transformation to change the nature of the chakra into the properties of water. Once you do that, send it outwards around your body making your body compatible with water. Step into the water source which would allow you to seemingly 'step inside' the water and simply blend in. It would look like the normal water source, but in reality, you would be inside it. Pretty neat, huh? Anyways, feel free to ask question as it was a pretty confusing technique. Blend in with the water source and give me advantages and disadvantages and how you would use it strategically in battle. You can perform this on even small water sources like puddles, but nothing less than the size of puddles. Also, keep in mind you will still be able to be seen and located by dojutsu users who are able to locate your chakra."

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(Suiton: Mizugakure no jutsu) - Water Release Hidden Amongst Water Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then blend in with a water source to be undetected by the enemy for a short period of time. However Sensory Ninja and Doujutsu users can find the enemy easily within the water source.

 

[Gααrα]

Before performing the technique Waaiz asks,"Where do you get so many training dummys , sensei" then Waaiz focuses on his raw chakra and turns it in to suiton chakra by applying nature transformation then he slams his hands on the ground ans releases his vast amount of suiton chakra over the training dummies exactly 10 metres above then he materializes water from the air and then he make it fall over the training dummys in a good speed as the water falls were them , they get crushed due to the brute force of the water.
Advantages
Requires no hand seals.
Requires no water source.
A good speed technique
Range is also good.
Disadvantages
When we slam our hand on the ground at that time my gUard is down and enemy could evade or get ready for a defense.
Offensive Usage
As I drop it over my enemy and he get crushed plus he will be wet also at that time I will use a Raiton technique that travel through ground and finish my enemy.

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Waaiz goes to the water source as Tobrirama directed him then Waaiz focuses on his chakra and send it all of his 361 tenketsus then Waaiz performs nature transformation to that chakra and turns it in to suiton chakra and then he steps inside the water source, as he stepped in it he blends in it and cannot be seen through his normal eyes and Waaiz completely blend himself inside the water source.
Advantages
NO hand seals
Can fully hide ourselves even in a small pond, not too small.
Disadvantages
A water source based technique.
Dojutsu users can see us i.e. can track our chakra.
How'd I use
Firstly , I will use stream based technique that will make the terrain wet and will have some ponds then I will merge in it and get close to my enemy without letting him know. Or I would use the above technique that I just learned to create a wet land or some ponds.

 

[Edward]

"Let's just say I have some connections." She scoffs. She attentively listens to the students response and then replies, "I s'ppose your disadvantage is valid, though I'd like more next time. We're in B-rank techniques, so I can't just have one disadvantage per technique. Alright, more disadvantages would be it could affect you if you were within range, as well as any allies. The sound of rushing water above you is audible, so you're able to hear it and it is a warning for the target that something is coming from above. Nice combionation, by the way. Anything to attack from below while the water is traveling above is also good. Alright as for the second technique, keep in mind if you are evaporated with fire, then you are gone. It is a risky technique because they see you touching the water and merging into it, so yeah. Just use that one with caution, its generally not the most useful nor the most practical technique to use."

"Moving on. An extremely large-scaled and powerful technique that is low-ranking. Now, this technique requires the rat hand seal." Tobirama performs the single hand seal, as an example for the student. He proceeds to tap on his shoulder, in which he'd use his teleportation abilities to teleport the duo to a new terrain: A Barren wasteland, with some bumps/small hills across the land. "See this dry area?You're going to fill it all with water! This is done by performing nature transformation on a large amount of chakra to change the nature of your chakra into the properties of water. Then, tilt your head downwards in which you'd convert the water chakra into actual water, releasing an extremely large amount of water downwards which would easily lift you up and create a large wave that covers the area fast. Keep in mind, you need to continuously release the water to create a larger water source. You can use the large waves as transportation, to travel towards an enemy at fast speeds and the amount and density of the water should easily crush them. It should be able to fill this area and create a mini-ocean, so perform it, give me advantages and disadvantages and how you would defend against it! As a bonus, say, you use this technique and the enemy creates a pit underneath you, which immediately sucks in all the water, along with yourself, how would you react?" Tobirama uses magical powers to fly up and avoid being crushed by the water.

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(Suiton: Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs the snake hand seal and creates a large volume of water from their mouth spilling it toward the ground and lifting them up into the air. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to travel at high speeds and attacking the enemy. The user can create a small ocean worth of water even in barren conditions and can use the water for additional techniques.

"Next up, another useful technique. You should be familiar with the concept of rain tiger at will, i assume." Tobirama teleports the student back to the training grounds and points at the required hand seals for the technique. "While preforming the hand seals i pointed out, perform nature transformation on your chakra to change the nature of your chakra into the properties of water. Send your water chakra and manipulate it to accumulate large storm clouds around the training grounds, which would produce rain. This creates rain in large quantities, and with enough time, the rain should be enough to make waves that would easily sweep the target off their feet, making it hard to move with the water around them. Manipulate the properties of the raindrops to allow you to absorb the chakra from the targets it touches, taking out 50 chakra points per turn, so long as they are trapped by the water. Perform it to leech some chakra from me, give me advantages and disadvantages and what do you think about this technique?"

(Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu) - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20 (-50 per turn while trapped in the vortex of waves)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Dog hand seal and release his chakra into the atmosphere which will then create an accumulation of large storm clouds in the sky, which in turn produces rain. The large amount of rain falling all around can then be turned into a large wave of water which sweeps the enemy off their feet while wrapping around him and binding him in the flow of water around him. While the targets are trapped in the water, their chakra will slowly be drained away. The water vortex can be sustained and controlled for up to two turns as long as the user keeps the dog hand seal made.

 

[Gααrα]

Waai, performs the rat hand seal and tilts his head and applies nature transformation and turns it in to suiton chakra and then he releases a large amount of Suiton chakra downwards in form of water that lifts Waaiz up that creates a large water body beneath Him i.e. a mini ocean.
Advantages
Requires a single hand seal
Can create a good water source abd it will help in performing the water techniques that requires a water source.
Very simple technique , it very easy to perform.
Disadvantages
If I am on a water source and my opponent used a Raiton technique even he doesn't have a mastery over it I an dead.
If my enemy can use the water source it is a disadvantage and a question can he ?
How'd I defend against it
I will use (Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart to raise a large earth structure in front if me or underneath me and I will use (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique to suck the water source.
Bonus
I will use a water pillar and jump of it to get away the pit.

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Waaiz performs the dog hand seal and performs nature transformation to his chakra and turns it in to suiton chakra and send it upwards in the sky that brings stormy clouds and then it starts raining heavily as the rain touches Tobirama it leaches some chakra out of Tobirama.
Advantages
It requires a single hand seal and no water source.
It doesn't have a usage limit or that how much turns it will be activated.
It drains our opponents' chakera at the rate of 50 per turn so it is a good technique.
Disadvantages
-20 chakra per turn ?
User cant use any Raiton technique that is unfocused because if they use it User will harm himself.
Opinion
I like this technique it is simple and effective also , I would definitely use it in a battle coz it drain my opponents' chakra. I want to ask that why in chakra cost it is written -50 per turn instead of -50 to opponent ?

 

[Edward]

"Yes, the enemy can use the water source and it is meant for the opponents' chakra points, not yours. Keep in mind the 50 only applies when it is the full on vortex. The 20 is the 20 chakra points it costs to use the technique."

"And, let's move on. Here, catch!" Tobirama instructed, as he throws a katana towards the student. "Alright this technique requires some physical strength and swordsman skills, but not too much. I want you to channel chakra through your katana while performing nature transformation to change the nature of the chakra into the properties of water. Once that is done, very quickly jump up and stab the ground with the katana, while using it as a medium to channel water chakra through and into the ground. Have the water chakra spread around you, and use the chakra to materialize water from the ground and have it abruptly rise up around you, creating a pillar of water (with shape manipulation) that would repel the enemy. It's a simple technique and concept that you should have no trouble performing. Once the enemy is within range, which i suppose should be 1-2 meters, 2 meters maximum, you'd be able to perform this and actually harm them." Tobirama creates three water clones, one is 5 meters in front of you, and the other is on its side. "Run up and jump closer to my clone so they are a meter or two away, perform this technique to push them back and cause them to disperse. Afterwards, give me advantages, and how you would use this in battle, oh and add a way to defend against it too!"

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( Suiton: Suishinshū ) - Water Release: Water Quaking Pillar
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user jumps into the air and then stabs his sword intothe ground, where he causes water to burst up around him and creating a pillar of water to rise up in the air repelling the enemy.

"This next one is REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY cool! It's more awesome than Sodachi. Aha." Tobirama sarcastically explained. "Just kidding. The concept of it is over used and something that you should be very familiar with by now. Channel a large amount of chakra in both your palms while performing nature transformation to change the nature of your chakra into the properties of water. From both palms, extend it outwards towards your target and release a spiralling torrent of water that would spiral around each other, creating a fairly large stream-based technique from your hand, making it a better 'stream' based technique than your average stream, i guess. Keep in mind this only extends up to short-range, so it is a good technique for enemies who attempt to engage in close combat, and like most water techniques, this relies on the water elements' brute force o deal the damage." Tobirama creates yet another clone made of water in front of the student, about three meters. "Perform it towards my clone to push him meters back, which would also cause him to disperse. Give me the usual advantages, disadvantages, and how you would use it in battle!"

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( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.

 

[Gααrα]

Waaiz grabs the Katana and starts running towards the clone of Tobirama , while running he starts to focus on his chakra and applies shape manipulation to his chakra and turns it in to suiton chakra, as he reached close to the clone he jumps up with the katana aiming at the ground and then he stabs the katana and sends his suiton chakra in to the ground through his katana and then he materializes water from the ground and applies shape manipulation to it and raises a water pillar around him and the clone gets pushed away.
Advantages
It requires no handseals , that helps us it performing quickly.
Really a simple technique can be performed easily
Effective technique while fighting with clones.
How'd I use it in battle
I would use to aid against Taijutsu because if my opponent came close to me I'll use it to repel him.
Defense
As I will see water rising I'll jump backwards and get away coz the range is too short.

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Waaiz focuses his chakra on his palm and applies nature transformation and turns it in to suiton chakra then he releases it through his palm towards the clone as he releases it he applies shape manipulation to it and turns it in to a spiralling torrent of water as it extends towards the clone and as it hits the clone , the clone goes back several metres and disperse in to water.
Advantages
Requires no hand seals, it can be performed quickly.
A powerful stream based technique
Disadvantages
Range is short
If the opponent used a Raiton tech I will be dead.
How'd I use it in battles
I wilk use it aid myself with Taijutsu.

 

[Edward]

"Jumping backwards - sure, so long as you have a technique for it, otherwise it would be freeform evading. But, you understand the basic way to defend from it - by moving back through any means, like creating a pillar of water angled away to push you back, etc. And yeah, you got the disadvantage part of the second technique because there is a large amount of water, but then again, they may be hit by the electrocuted water if it is close enough, so defenses for that particular technique usually does not include lightning."

"Guess what? This is the last of the B-ranks we'll be learning, and soon enough, we'll move on to A-ranks." Tobirama says, as he pitches one training dummy three meters away from the student. "This technique is a technique that comes from your hand, and it is a streaming based technique but the way it is performed is different. Perform nature transformation on your chakra to change the nature of it into the properties of water. This should be easy by now, since we've been doing this for quite some time. Once you create water chakra, send it towards one of your hands and concentrate it in your palms, where you would create an orb of water to act as a water source for the stream. With the orb of water, perform shape manipulation to shape out multiple spearing stream which you'd be able to manipulate with your chakra to attack the target from different directions, or have each stream spiral around each other. Alright, perform it and beat that clone up, give me advantages and disadvantages, and how you would use this in battle offensively!"

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( Suiton: Shizuka Yari ) - Water Release: Droplet Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Using their skills with water release, the user creates an orb of water in their hand which they can then release in the form of multiple spearing streams, that they can use to attack their enemy from multiple directions or in spirals.

"And the last B-rank water technique!" Tobirama announces enthusiastically as he pitches in another training dummy, with the face of your rival (whoever it is). "Alright. Perform nature chakra on your normal chakra to change the nature of it into the properties of water. Gather it in one of your hand with with a hand movement, create an arc. As you create the arc, release the water chakra in the form of water whilst using shape manipulation to shape it into a cresent blade, which would be shaped depending on the arc you created with the hand movement. This technique relies on the brute force it exerts when it makes contact with a target, so it won't necessarily pierce them despite its shape. You can strike an enemy at different angles, depending on the arc you create with hand motions, from the side, from above, from the other side, etc. And, by swirling around on your foot, you can create a cresent-shaped blade to erupt from your hand as you are swirling to attack the enemy if you are surrounded. Perform it on the training dummy and create an arc with your hand movement to hit the training dummy on its head. Give me advantages and disadvantages afterwards, and how you would use it offensively in battle!"

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( Suiton: Nagareru no Yari ) - Water Release: Flowing Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates crescent shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements attacking opponents infront of them or they can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around them.

 

[Gααrα]

Waaiz focuses on his chakra and then he applies nature transformation to it and changes it in to Suiton chakra then he send that suiton chakra to his right arm and then he releases that water chakra and applies shape manipulation to it turns in to an orb made of water then Waaiz aims at the sensei's clone and releases a stream of water from the towards the clone the hits it on his stomach then He again releases another stream from the orb aiming at the head and then he Again releases a stream that he send behind the clone hits him at the back then he controls 3 of the streams and Send it towards the clone from three different angles as they hit the clone it Poofs away.
Advantages
Can be performed very quickly because no hand seals
Multiple Attacks from different angles, that can be controlled
Powerful technique
Disadvantages
The power of the technique will be decreased if the user take out many many speard from the orb as it is of B-Rank and if we divide it in to many spears its power will be decreased.
Offensive Usage
Well, I would like to use it in short range because it will act as a surprise attack and give my opponent less chance for countering.

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Waaiz focuses on his chakra and applies nature transformation to it and turns it in to Suiton chakra and the he sends it to his right then he moves his arm from up to down releasing the water chakra as the he releases the water chakra He applies shape manipulation to it and turns it in to a crescent blade whose end was aiming at the head of the training dummy as it hits the dummy brute force of water uproots it.
Advantages
Doesn't requires any hand seals thus making it a pretty fast technique.
Doesn't need a water source.
Can attack at different angles of the opponent
Disadvantages
Doesn't deal heavy damage like piercing through opponent or killing the opponent in a single blow.
Can be dodged easily as we see the water releasing from the hand, who has good knowledge in Suiton can e easily get away.
Offensive Usage
Well, like I said above I'll use it in short ranges coz it is a fast technique that would surprise my opponent.

 

[Edward]

"Fantastic job. Remember, the first technique, you cant split it into like twenty different spears. I would say it should be around five-ten. now onto A-ranks. By the end of A-ranks, i'd like to battle you, just to make sure you're learning all these properly. I'd do it now, but I don't see enough versatility in the B-rank techniques since most of them were repetitive. Anyways, A-ranks naturally require more nature transformation and shape manipulation, something that we've been practicing for quite some time." Tobirama starts to walk towards a lake, a large lake that would provide the two with a large water source. He then tells the student the long list of hand seals required for the powerful technique, and performs it himself to set as an example. "Alright, this technique is going to be the first 'advance ninjutsu' technique you'll learn, In the Water element at least. Perform the required hand seals that we went over, and as you do that, muster up an enormous amount of your chakra and perform nature transformation to change the nature of your chakra into the properties of water. Once you do that, channel the water chakra into the lake, and manipulate the large amount of water available to create a ring of water in front of you with the use of shape manipulation. Once the ring has been made, manipulate the water from the water source to add onto the ring and have the ring extend outwards, resembling an extremely large torrent of water. Send it out towards your target and as it makes contact, manipulate it to rise up, about several dozen meters up in the sky. Once you've reached that height, have it collapse downwards, pushing the enemy down to the ground in which he'd experience massive damage to the body and bones. Alright perform it on the clone over there, twenty five meters away. Keep in mind this technique has a humongous reach and it is pretty fast, so it shouldnt be too difficult. Attack that dummy and lift it up in the air, and have the torrent collaps downwards in which it would create a large crater and massive waves upon crashing down. Furthermore, this technique relies on the brute force that it exerts, so a direct hit may be fatal. Perform it and give me advantages, disadvantages, and how you would use this in battle offensively! The aftermath should resemble the effects of a natural disaster. Alternatively, you can exhale from your mouth that amount of water but i personally prefer using the water source."

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(Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu) - Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After doing the needed hand seals Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Ram → Boar → Ox → Horse → Monkey → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Bird, the user will form a gigantic vortex of water in the form of a ring in front of him. It will then shoot a gigantic torrent of water that extends water over a large scale, surges upon impact and rises up to several dozen meters high only to collapse down, forming massive waves all around as it does. The effect is such that as its collapsing it resembles a waterfall, hence the name of the technique. In doing so, it resembles a huge wave, with tremendous power that can hollow out the ground. What remains after that technique's utilization is reminiscent of no less than the aftermath of a natural disaster. This is a considerably advanced ninjutsu, and activating this technique requires a fair amount of chakra. The normal use of the technique requires a water source which is manipulated into the technique but some users have shown the ability to use the technique as a water stream exhaled from the mouth and forming more of a gigantic barrage/stream/wave of water rather than the more intricate and complex use of the main application of the technique.
Note: Can be used with a water source or by using one's own chakra to exhale the technique without the need for a water source nearby.

 

[Gααrα]

Waaiz performs the hand seals Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Ram → Boar → Ox → Horse → Monkey → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Tiger → Ox → Monkey → Rabbit → Bird and focuses on his chakra and applies nature transformation to it and turns it in to Suiton chakra and sends his enormous amount of chakra in to the lake he was standing and now he was able to manipulate the large water body then Waaiz applies shape manipulation to the water source and creates a huge ring in front of him then he adds more water to the ring that makes it grow outwards 25 metres towards the clone of his sensei as it gets in contact of the clone Waaiz makes it rise up using the water chakra taking the clone with it too as the ring torrent reaches several dozens of metre above the ground Waaiz makes it fall down on the ground as it collapse on the ground it makes a big crater on the ground and makes the clone poof away.
Advantages
A very powerful technique.
Covers all the ranges (Short-Long)
Doesn't requires a water source (Debatable)
Disadvantages
It requires many handseals.
Requires a water source but can also be ussd with a water source by exhaling the water from their mouth but that would take much time so I think it is a disadvantage.
How'd I use
I would use it when my opponent is at mid range to me coz it is a very fast technique and a very effective technique.

 

[Edward]

"Alright, i'm going to need you to put real advantages, disadvantages, and combinations please. The ones you've put are basically a given. Like i've expressed in the past, its alright to put details like it is long range as an advantage, so long as you have other relevant points too. Please redo this one, but only the advantages disadvantages and combinations."

 

[Gααrα]

"Sorry, Sensei ;_;"
Advantages
It can go upto short to long range, It can alsp be a surprise attack as we start by making a ring that extends outward towards the opponent that may shock our opponent, It is a very fast technique when it starts to become a torrent towards our opponent giving them less chance to evade and this can also be used as a water source for the other suiton techniques we will perform.
Disadvantages
Well it would be like if we aren't a dojutsu user or a sensory type to track our opponent because the ring is created in front of us blocking our view coz if we miss our opponent it will be very difficult to find them in the middle of the chaos, it also requires many hand seal that may give us a doubt to use this technique but when we have a Suiton mastery a primary affanity it will be very easy to use this technique.
Combos
I will use a large scale futom jutsu that is of A-Rank: (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage , this will increase the pressure and brute force of the technique and this will make the jutsu become S-Rank.
And Maybe a Raiton technique of the same rank can also be use to shock our opponent.

 

[Edward]

"Perfect! The disadvantage especially. Just remember with the lightning, you would need Yin-yang or an ally to perform it with you... Now have you learnt the Rasengan technique?"

 

[Gααrα]

"Nope, I am at C-Ranks in Ninjutsu"

 

[Edward]

"This next technique is a great technique, however it is only usable depending on your enemies position. When the enemy is standing on a water source, you will perform nature transformation on normal chakra and transform the nature of your chakra into the properties of water. With the newly created water chakra, make contact with the water source with your hand and channel the chakra into the water. Use your chakra to perform shape manipulation and shape out four average-sized sharks that would be shaped around you. Make it as dense as possible so when it makes impact with a target, the brute force it exerts will be immense. As they are created, use your chakra to have them quickly swim towards the target and once the sharks get close, instruct them, with your chakra, to rise up from the water to knock the target upwards. Like i explained earlier, the sharks should be pretty compressed therefore the physical force they create would be high enough to break several bones of the target. This would knock the enemy up meters in the air, in which you'd be able to follow up with other techniques." Tobirama creates a single clone and has it stand up on the water source, five meters away from the student. "Alright. Perform it on my clone and give me disadvantages and how you would defend against this technique."

(Suiton: Senkogenma Kujo) – Water Release: Flash Grinding Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage point: 60
Description: As his opponent is standing on a source of water, the user will create. four sharks of water. Those sharks will rush at their target, come out and knock the opponent high into the air. breaking several of his bones in the process. Then, as his enemy is in a very vulnerable position, the user can freely attack with swords or other ninja techniques.
Note: Requires a water source.

 

[Gααrα]

Waaiz focuses on his chakra and applies nature transformation to it and turns it in to Suiton chakra and then he places his left arm on the water source and releases the chakra in to the water source then he applies shape manipulation to the chakra he released in the water source before and shapes out Four average sized, densed and pressurized Sharks around himself then He aims at the clone of his Sensei and then he commands the sharks to move towards the Clone using the water chakra the sharks starts to move towards the clone as they get close to The Clone, Waaiz makes them rise up and hit the clone making him airborne and poof away. ..
Disadvantages
1. It requires a water source, not a small one , a big one like lake or an ocean as the sharks move forward.
2. It is short ranged, i think it is a disadvantage because if the enemy just get out of the range he would have counter it, and if it can go mid or long range it will make the technique a lot effective IMO.
Defense
Let say, I see sharks coming towards me when I am at short range I would like to use a quick technique to get away from this so would use The Water Pillar jutsu to get up high and get out of their range.

 

[Edward]

"Okay, now imagine you are at the center of a lake, and sharks are surrounding you. They are swimiming quickly... now how would you defend against that? Water pillar thrust is a simple counter, but not a permanent one. You are fated to fall back down to the lake. So, how would you defend against it then?"