[CJ] Training of the Scorching cloud

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(Katon: Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand seals and the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streamed intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit/ seal of the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot. While also heated air directly above, will be creating a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages.

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns.
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn


- Positive points of this technique?
- Negative points of this technique?
- Combinations/Elemental usages?
- How to counteract the move?
- What your opinion is on the move?

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Ikiru awaits to meet a follow clan member, the area seem vacant of any other shinobis as Ikiru waited.
 

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The tempuraure here was too cold for one young girl alone to handle, though the view was outstanding. Annabel wasn’t a fan of happy things but for once in a while she needed small vacation from her village. She was about a few miles off the lands in this waterfall oasis with a rainbow gracefully dancing with the falling water. It was calm but Annabel wasn’t in a happy nor angered mood since simply came here to learn a new jutsu from a fellow clansman. She walked into the area and simply stopped as she saw him and without any emotion she simply walked towards him and sighed.

I’m sorry for keeping you waiting.

She said placing her sword on a tree nearby as she looks towards her clansmen and activated her Sharingan. The three tomoes swirled to life as she waited for him to begin the session.
 

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The tempuraure here was too cold for one young girl alone to handle, though the view was outstanding. Annabel wasn’t a fan of happy things but for once in a while she needed small vacation from her village. She was about a few miles off the lands in this waterfall oasis with a rainbow gracefully dancing with the falling water. It was calm but Annabel wasn’t in a happy nor angered mood since simply came here to learn a new jutsu from a fellow clansman. She walked into the area and simply stopped as she saw him and without any emotion she simply walked towards him and sighed.

I’m sorry for keeping you waiting.

She said placing her sword on a tree nearby as she looks towards her clansmen and activated her Sharingan. The three tomoes swirled to life as she waited for him to begin the session.
Ikiru catches her make her way here, he then performs the Boar → Tiger hand seals and then inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streamed intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. Then after the directly above air creates a powerful a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages. *coughing* "well, quite a show, eh? Ann, mind explaining the jutsu before I had over the jutsu scroll?"
 

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Positive points of this technique: Is perfect to set up for genjutsu user like myself since It can make false images of the user or anything Im hoping. The hand seal count is low as well, making it easier for us Uchhiha to use. It can stop water techniques up to A-rank as well which is a nice feat. It also provides a good counter to people who like to escape into the air.

Negative points of this technique? No much as that its S-ranked but othr then that it’s a pretty solid jutsu.

Combinations/Elemental usages? Genjutsu works well with the afterimage aspect of it. Can also work well with earth techniques that sends a targeti nto the sky like moving core etc,

- How to counteract the move?: Im sure a water technique with enough power can douse the flames with ease, and rain techniques will weaken it over time
- What your opinion is on the move?: It’s a very solid technique , I like it.


She answered plain and simple with no emotion as she registered the jutsu in her mind with her eyes, though the scroll will add some refinement when actually learning it.
 

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Positive points of this technique: Is perfect to set up for genjutsu user like myself since It can make false images of the user or anything Im hoping. The hand seal count is low as well, making it easier for us Uchhiha to use. It can stop water techniques up to A-rank as well which is a nice feat. It also provides a good counter to people who like to escape into the air.

Negative points of this technique? No much as that its S-ranked but othr then that it’s a pretty solid jutsu.

Combinations/Elemental usages? Genjutsu works well with the afterimage aspect of it. Can also work well with earth techniques that sends a targeti nto the sky like moving core etc,

- How to counteract the move?: Im sure a water technique with enough power can douse the flames with ease, and rain techniques will weaken it over time
- What your opinion is on the move?: It’s a very solid technique , I like it.


She answered plain and simple with no emotion as she registered the jutsu in her mind with her eyes, though the scroll will add some refinement when actually learning it.
Passing on the scroll and waving to her leave, "Well thanks for insight, I hope you find it useful."

Jakai peeps in and notices his fellow Uchiha. He walks in and speaks. Hey there! So, what's going on bud?
"Yo, am sure you saw the show, so wanna tell me about this jutsu before I hand out the scroll?" he says with a big happy grin.
 
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Passing on the scroll and waving to her leave, "Well thanks for insight, I hope you find it useful."

"Yo, am sure you saw the show, so wanna tell me about this jutsu before I hand out the scroll?" he says with a big happy grin.
Jakai noticed his good friend teaching a unique Fire jutsu to a fellow Uchiha. He then responded to him. Sure did! Nice technique bro! Jakai took a moment and thought of everything he needed to say.

Positive Points — This technique can effectively prevent the opponent entering the sky, it can prevent rain usage briefly, dry up high level water techniques (up to A-Rank), and can creating images that would work like Genjutsu.
Negative Points — This technique also prevents the user from entering the sky as well, as doing so would burn himself.
Combinations/Elemental Usages — I'd use this mainly in conjunction with Genjutsu, since the mirages can properly fool the opponent
Counter — I'd counter with a high level water technique to douse the flames in the sky
Opinion — Love the move. Very useful technique


With that, Jakai looked back at his fellow Uchiha.

(Katon: Gurēto-en Kuraudo no Jutsu) — Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand seals, the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streams of intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit/seal the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot. Also, the heated air directly above will be creating a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages.

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn

 

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Jakai noticed his good friend teaching a unique Fire jutsu to a fellow Uchiha. He then responded to him. Sure did! Nice technique bro! Jakai took a moment and thought of everything he needed to say.

Positive Points — This technique can effectively prevent the opponent entering the sky, it can prevent rain usage briefly, dry up high level water techniques (up to A-Rank), and can creating images that would work like Genjutsu.
Negative Points — This technique also prevents the user from entering the sky as well, as doing so would burn himself.
Combinations/Elemental Usages — I'd use this mainly in conjunction with Genjutsu, since the mirages can properly fool the opponent
Counter — I'd counter with a high level water technique to douse the flames in the sky
Opinion — Love the move. Very useful technique


With that, Jakai looked back at his fellow Uchiha.

(Katon: Gurēto-en Kuraudo no Jutsu) — Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand seals, the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streams of intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit/seal the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot. Also, the heated air directly above will be creating a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages.

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn

Nodding in awe, "erm, yea" Ikiru surely didn't think of more about jutsu itself. Laughing as hands out the scroll. "Just know this;
"It can make false images of the user or anything I'm hoping."

I feel like I'll get in trouble for not specifying; it will make you seem closer than you really are, so will the kunai/ anything also you can mask yourself within the Mirage but, reconsider the fact if they get close enough they'll see you clearly . meanwhile for creating anything is false.
 

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(Katon: Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand seals and the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streamed intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit/ seal of the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot. While also heated air directly above, will be creating a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages.

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns.
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn

Positive Points — This technique can dry up water techniques (up to A-Rank) becomes a good set up for a genjutsu combo and restricts the opponent from entering the sky.
Negative Points — Not much negatives tbh , only thing to note is that it not only restrict the opponent travel to the air but the users as well Combinations/Elemental Usages — Its a great setup for a Genjutsu, since you can combine the mirages with a gen.I would use this to counter a water tech being the first step in a 2 move genjutsu combo.
Counter — I would try to overpower it with a strong enough water attack creating a mist in the process
Opinion — Love how you combined fire and illusions
 

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(Katon: Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand seals and the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streamed intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit/ seal of the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot. While also heated air directly above, will be creating a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages.

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns.
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn

Positive Points — This technique can dry up water techniques (up to A-Rank) becomes a good set up for a genjutsu combo and restricts the opponent from entering the sky.
Negative Points — Not much negatives tbh , only thing to note is that it not only restrict the opponent travel to the air but the users as well Combinations/Elemental Usages — Its a great setup for a Genjutsu, since you can combine the mirages with a gen.I would use this to counter a water tech being the first step in a 2 move genjutsu combo.
Counter — I would try to overpower it with a strong enough water attack creating a mist in the process
Opinion — Love how you combined fire and illusions
"You have mastered the art." hands out the scroll.
 

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(Katon: Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand seals and the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streamed intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit/ seal of the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot. While also heated air directly above, will be creating a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages.

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns.
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn
 

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Understood.

I do have series of question though.

-The damage point. How does this manifest. The heat wave above carries 80 damage? If yes, is the heat wave visible or its a cloud of fire? What color? How high is this above us?

Can it be canceled anytime? Does this clear rain clouds or form clouds used for Kirin?

Can we move the cloud to another position?
It does not say anything about usages. Does this mean you can use it more than once?
 

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Understood.

I do have series of question though.

-The damage point. How does this manifest. The heat wave above carries 80 damage? If yes, is the heat wave visible or its a cloud of fire? What color? How high is this above us?

Can it be canceled anytime? Does this clear rain clouds or form clouds used for Kirin?

Can we move the cloud to another position?
It does not say anything about usages. Does this mean you can use it more than once?
The heat (invisible) above is scotching enough to localize the clouds, if you deem it to be. Therefore, if your opponents are above you, they'll burn from within their bodies alive. It manifests as flames at first, before fading to become heat which influences the area. The sky (cloud height) will inflict damage but not below, thus N/a below/ground level. It affects area only thus won't move, much like rain tiger at will. Yes, you can use it more than once :)


Mastered Jutsu.

Thus concluding 6/6 slots!
 
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