[CJ] Training of the Dragoning Chirp

[RuckenTM]

(Ration: Doragoni Chāpu)- Lightning Style: Dragoning Chirp
Type: Offensive/ Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 (+10 per turn to sustain)
Damage: 60
Description: The user starts by channeling his Ration chakra in one or both of his arm(s). Using shape manipulation, they can release the lightning chakra in the form of a claw that they can manipulate to stretch out on their arm to only equal 15 inches before full-release. While in this state, the initial standard form will appear as a clawed form of ration in their user's arms, in that state of a hardened crest that covers the user's arms. Whenever the user releases the Lightning Dragons, the ration chakra appearing as crests cracks as it vibrates at a high frequency, it creates a short loud strained-bird roar chirp-like sound. S/he can create up to 4, blue-lightning dragon creatures, which emanate at a different vibration then a regular Lightning jutsu. This different vibration of lightning chakra will have a spring coil likeness to it. These dragons are each 3 feet in length and 2 feet in diameter thickness (when 4 have been released, but as one, x4 each width & length). These dragons can chase up to 4 shinobi(s), as they'd split up the target(s) upon themselves. The spring like coil and hoping state of this lightning jutsu, gives the miniature-like dragons ability to outwit objects in the way as they head forward only. They behave much like pawns on a chess board, moving only forward and never backwards toward their enemy when released from the hands of the user. These Dragons once released, they will lock on and track the target, till they shock them, unless the target(s) manages to get passed them. With each dragon made reduces the power of the whole jutsu and ultimately ends it, 1 = A-rank, 3 = B-rank, 4 = C-rank, the user can also choose to release 1 = C-rank up to 4 in-total allowing them to sustain the jutsu, till the initial releases are equal to 4. Choosing to do so, they'll not be able to launch above C-rank types. Given that they don't kill on contact but, will rather shock the enemy also paralyze them. The user also can install the jutsu's launched dragons with kunai(s), shuriken(s) and similar weapon size-like entities launching them in unison.

Note: User can only sustain the jutsu, in the standard form for up to 3 turns.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Once shocked paralyzation lasts 1 turn if successful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty.Note: This jutsu will only avoid preexisting obstacles in the way as they move onward. The user can command or let the jutsu decide the course of path only before launching (mentally).
Note: User must be a Lightning Specialist to utilize this jutsu.

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Ikiru awaits to meet a follow friend, the area seem vacant of any other shinobis as Ikiru waited.

 

[Deviation]

Aight so what do you require of me?

 

[RuckenTM]

Aight so what do you require of me?

Analyze the jutsu, strengthens, weakness, opinion and that's it.

 

[Deviation]

(Raiton: Doragoni Chāpu)- Lightning Style: Dragoning Chirp

First of all...lots of misspelled words especially "Raiton" which you spelled as "Ration". xD

Sorry for taking all this time. I was hesitant to touch based on I was confused on what you actually do with the technique. From my understanding, you create lightning blades on each side of your forearm which makes it ideal to use in taijutsu and/or CQC situations. That I understood.

What confused me is the release of lightning dragons. I thought this was just lightning blades? Do the lightning blades turn into dragons? If so, you release 4 in total that you can send towards your enemy. Considering how you wrote your cj, it appears that the dragons travel up to mid-range. The fact that you made it so it can work/attach it itself with ninja tools (shuriken, senbon, kunai, etc.) gives it more variety. However I wonder, can the dragons guide the tools once attached to it or do the tools travel their own trajectory? While you made this technique to extend past short range, IMO I would better classify this as a short range technique (despite the dragons that go into mid range), using it mostly for use in conjunction with taijutsu related techniques that don't require chakra as this specific technique you need to maintain. If you plan to update this technique, I would suggest you attempt to make the "lightning claws" cover more of your body. That would make it a full body surge which you can later use for substitutions for Kai. The fact that you don't have to use handseals makes it that much more better.

I hope that was sufficient.

 

[RuckenTM]

(Raiton: Doragoni Chāpu)- Lightning Style: Dragoning Chirp

First of all...lots of misspelled words especially "Raiton" which you spelled as "Ration". xD

Sorry for taking all this time. I was hesitant to touch based on I was confused on what you actually do with the technique. From my understanding, you create lightning blades on each side of your forearm which makes it ideal to use in taijutsu and/or CQC situations. That I understood.

What confused me is the release of lightning dragons. I thought this was just lightning blades? Do the lightning blades turn into dragons? If so, you release 4 in total that you can send towards your enemy. Considering how you wrote your cj, it appears that the dragons travel up to mid-range. The fact that you made it so it can work/attach it itself with ninja tools (shuriken, senbon, kunai, etc.) gives it more variety. However I wonder, can the dragons guide the tools once attached to it or do the tools travel their own trajectory? While you made this technique to extend past short range, IMO I would better classify this as a short range technique (despite the dragons that go into mid range), using it mostly for use in conjunction with taijutsu related techniques that don't require chakra as this specific technique you need to maintain. If you plan to update this technique, I would suggest you attempt to make the "lightning claws" cover more of your body. That would make it a full body surge which you can later use for substitutions for Kai. The fact that you don't have to use handseals makes it that much more better.

I hope that was sufficient.

It would guide the tools that are within the dragons. I'll think on the surging type, might have it. I wonder though, by "cover more of your body" do you mean claws coming out of the body everywhere, at the same time?? Besides, the blades do turn into dragons that can be launched.

You've mastered the Jutsu.

 

[Deviation]

It would guide the tools that are within the dragons. I'll think on the surging type, might have it. I wonder though, by "cover more of your body" do you mean claws coming out of the body everywhere, at the same time?? Besides, the blades do turn into dragons that can be launched.

You've mastered the Jutsu.

Yeah that goes hand in hand with the surging capabilities.

Thank you. <3

 

[Robot Boy]

*Appears*

 

[RuckenTM]

*Appears*

Analyze the jutsu, strengthens, weakness, opinion and that's it.​

 

[Robot Boy]

Pretty cool technique. I imagine myself combining these with the weapon-based jutsu in the canon list. I got a few of questions. Can I combine this with kunai/shuriken that are already coated in lightning or another element? And can we use the claws for cqc? And the last question, "Note: User must be a Lightning Specialist to utilize this jutsu." Does my bio have to have it as a primary or can it be secondary?

 

[RuckenTM]

Pretty cool technique. I imagine myself combining these with the weapon-based jutsu in the canon list. I got a few of questions. Can I combine this with kunai/shuriken that are already coated in lightning or another element? And can we use the claws for cqc? And the last question, "Note: User must be a Lightning Specialist to utilize this jutsu." Does my bio have to have it as a primary or can it be secondary?

You can use it on a weapon that is already coated in another form of element. However, logical elemental interactions apply so don't think you can use it well with fuuton coated kunai fyi. The claws can be used in CQC, and as long as your a specialist (either main or second) its assumed you are able to unitize it.

If no other questions, you've learned the jutsu.

 

[Robot Boy]

All right thanks. So where do I post the cj you want?

 

[Jᴀʏ]

I'm here!

 

[RuckenTM]

I'm here!

Any questions? If no, you've mastered the jutsu.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

Any questions? If no, you've mastered the jutsu.

Nope read it a few times, got it, and thanks.