to have a true love.

[izinagi54]

She walks with the fields of tiger lilies.
She dances as the moon arises in the skies above.
She will tire and set like the sun at dusk till dawn.

Oh she be the angel in the skies, the tear that may flow'th from me eye.
More beautiful then ones own eyes and that into the shining seas.
more precious then gold or diamond, more does it not require not the same valient effort like a miner.

See it is all just a simple struggle of wills, time and time again we may fail.
however into the end of time we will always find our love.
A dove that we can nurture and take care of.
For we as men never truely die, never not even till the end of time itself.
For i and who ever shall i meet to be my love will always be in memory of others that we carry on our backs.

that i believe to be love is the thing we cherish most.
Life and that Life itself may be govern by a powerful need. the need of true love.
is more stronger then any dark night or cold winter.
but more hotter then any sun or desert.

 

[izinagi54]

hope you all like it

 

[Legendary Broly]

Nice poem ^^

 

[KiraGirl K]

I love it! <3

 

[izinagi54]

you are very welcome. im trying to find my inner light when it comes to this. i intend to make a masterpiece tonight

 

[PrimeOfTheSixPaths]

I like it dude! Thumbs up, haha.

Heres something I wrote a couple years ago.

Truths light behind a wall of lies
Lies dark as night. No sky
Defies self limits, don't cry.
Sweat-less eyes of mine, proof.
Abysmal home, Sidewalk roof.
So don't spook buttons to nuke
Realities spoof of opinions new
Given to the nude moods of few.
Empathy's curfew cut short.
So don't cry, strong fort.
Stay true, don't fork
When facing a choice of right or wrong.
Dig yourself out, improve the moods of ones who long
For a care in their world. Save time from King Kong,
Break the wall, reach limits higher without the bong
And just make yours and another persons day brighter.

Like, a longggg time ago, when I thought poems were just rhyming, hahaha.
Be kind please ._.

 

[izinagi54]

I like it dude! Thumbs up, haha.

Heres something I wrote a couple years ago.

Truths light behind a wall of lies
Lies dark as night. No sky
Defies self limits, don't cry.
Sweat-less eyes of mine, proof.
Abysmal home, Sidewalk roof.
So don't spook buttons to nuke
Realities spoof of opinions new
Given to the nude moods of few.
Empathy's curfew cut short.
So don't cry, strong fort.
Stay true, don't fork
When facing a choice of right or wrong.
Dig yourself out, improve the moods of ones who long
For a care in their world. Save time from King Kong,
Break the wall, reach limits higher without the bong
And just make yours and another persons day brighter.

Like, a longggg time ago, when I thought poems were just rhyming, hahaha.
Be kind please ._.

i do not judge poetry for it in itself is someone soul given words to be able to express to mortal eyes.
however it is a good ryhme and i will love to see more.

 

[izinagi54]

this is nirvana

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[AirWind]

wow....

 

[uzumaki antonia]

wow that was an awesome poem

 

[Scooby Doo]

Hm, nice poem about love, but the ending is a little bit cliché-d to me. (And there are some grammar mistakes)

 

[Rorasa]

you're getting better,i see, keep it up

 

[Arcaneos510X]

Wow i love the company of other poets here