Time to finish raiton

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here you go.

Thank you for accepting me.

**sit and waits for sempai*
Good. I saw you left off at Chidori Nagashi.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.
This is a non-focused version of the Chidori technique you have learned. It allows you to release electricity as a current around you. The current can be passed through air, ground (reaches mid-range if it does), and weaponry so that it can paralyze when it makes contact with opponents. Due to it not being focused, it can't kill, only paralyze. I want you to perform this jutsu in 3 methods, an aerial current, a ground current (reaches mid-range), and channeling it into a weapon of yours.
 

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**I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra*
** i pull out a kunai and hold it in my hand. After gathering a large amount of raiton chakra, i release it from my body.*
** the raiton generates from my body with any form of shape manipulation, i then stream some of the raiton into the kunai and throw it at a tree.*

** i then pour more chakra into the tech*
** i stream more raiton from my body, then crouches and channels raiton accross the ground. It cracks up the ground as it travels accross it.*

** I then take flight by jumping into the air. i exert more raiton from my body.*
** the raiton forms string-like electricity cords as it flow out of my body*
 

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**I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra*
** i pull out a kunai and hold it in my hand. After gathering a large amount of raiton chakra, i release it from my body.*
** the raiton generates from my body with any form of shape manipulation, i then stream some of the raiton into the kunai and throw it at a tree.*

** i then pour more chakra into the tech*
** i stream more raiton from my body, then crouches and channels raiton accross the ground. It cracks up the ground as it travels accross it.*

** I then take flight by jumping into the air. i exert more raiton from my body.*
** the raiton forms string-like electricity cords as it flow out of my body*
If you throw your kunai, your nagashi won't be effective once it passes short-range. Try again but just use it to stab your opponent. You have to touch the ground to stream it into the ground. Make sure that you have full control over the stream as well. You don't have to jump up to initiate the aerial version. You can just release the electricity into the air. Make sure that you don't use just chakra but actual electricity formed from your chakra. Do the weaponry and ground method again.
 

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** i create a clone*

**I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra and convert it to electricity*
** i pull out a kunai and hold it in my hand. After gathering a large amount of raiton chakra, i release electricity from my body.*
** the raiton generates from my body without any form of shape manipulation, i then channel some of the raiton into the kunai, and charges at the clone and stabs it. The clone becomes paralyzed*

** i then pour more chakra into the tech*
** i exert more raiton from my body, and crouching down, i slam my hands to the ground and stream the electricity accross the ground, using manipulation, i control the wild frenzy of raiton*
 

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** i create a clone*

**I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra and convert it to electricity*
** i pull out a kunai and hold it in my hand. After gathering a large amount of raiton chakra, i release electricity from my body.*
** the raiton generates from my body without any form of shape manipulation, i then channel some of the raiton into the kunai, and charges at the clone and stabs it. The clone becomes paralyzed*

** i then pour more chakra into the tech*
** i exert more raiton from my body, and crouching down, i slam my hands to the ground and stream the electricity accross the ground, using manipulation, i control the wild frenzy of raiton*
Okay, first off raiton is Lightning Release which is the name of Lightning-natured jutsu. So saying you release Raiton doesn't make much sense does it? So I would describe it as your lightning chakra taking the form of actual electricity.
 

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** i create a clone*

**I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra and convert it to electricity*
** i pull out a kunai and hold it in my hand. After gathering a large amount of raiton chakra, i release electricity from my body.*
** the electricity generates from my body without any form of shape manipulation, i then channel some of the electricity into the kunai, and charges at the clone and stabs it. The clone becomes paralyzed*

** i then pour more chakra into the tech*
** i exert more electricity from my body, and crouching down, i slam my hands to the ground and stream the electricity accross the ground, using manipulation, i control the wild frenzy of electricity*

you are a pretty good sempai, i love how you explain stuff, hope you become a senseixd
 

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** i create a clone*

**I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra and convert it to electricity*
** i pull out a kunai and hold it in my hand. After gathering a large amount of raiton chakra, i release electricity from my body.*
** the electricity generates from my body without any form of shape manipulation, i then channel some of the electricity into the kunai, and charges at the clone and stabs it. The clone becomes paralyzed*

** i then pour more chakra into the tech*
** i exert more electricity from my body, and crouching down, i slam my hands to the ground and stream the electricity accross the ground, using manipulation, i control the wild frenzy of electricity*

you are a pretty good sempai, i love how you explain stuff, hope you become a senseixd
Thanks ^^ now do it again, without copying and pasting with a few edits.
 

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-I create a clone-

-I gather a large amount of raiton chakra. I mold it in my stomach and convert it to electricity. I exert it from my body and the electricity flows around and i manipulate it so it won't be out of control.-

-i take out a kunai and hold it in my hand, as the electricity generates from my body, i channel some of it into my kunai and charges at my clone.-
-Stabbing the clone, it becomes paralyzed.-
-inserting more raiton chakra into the tech, the electricity becomes much more powerful, it looks like strings of energy. I then slam my hands to the ground, and stream electricity accross the ground. Using manipulation, i control the frenzy of electricity.-
 

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-I create a clone-

-I gather a large amount of raiton chakra. I mold it in my stomach and convert it to electricity. I exert it from my body and the electricity flows around and i manipulate it so it won't be out of control.-

-i take out a kunai and hold it in my hand, as the electricity generates from my body, i channel some of it into my kunai and charges at my clone.-
-Stabbing the clone, it becomes paralyzed.-
-inserting more raiton chakra into the tech, the electricity becomes much more powerful, it looks like strings of energy. I then slam my hands to the ground, and stream electricity accross the ground. Using manipulation, i control the frenzy of electricity.-
Better.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
This jutsu allows you to perform the hand seals; Ox → Rabbit → Ram → Dog → Monkey. You will then place your hand on the ground while releasing a massive amount of chakra that will change into an enormous bolt of lightning. The lightning is shaped into a triangle at the lead of it and due to this shape, it has a great amount of power and is capable of ripping through the earth. The lightning also seems to generate a high amount of heat.
 

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This jutsu allows you to perform the hand seals; Ox → Rabbit → Ram → Dog → Monkey. You will then place your hand on the ground while releasing a massive amount of chakra that will change into an enormous bolt of lightning. The lightning is shaped into a triangle at the lead of it and due to this shape, it has a great amount of power and is capable of ripping through the earth. The lightning also seems to generate a high amount of heat.
-I gather a large amount of raiton chakra, i focus all the energy built up. I then make Ox → Rabbit → Ram → Dog → Monkey handseals and place my hand to the ground. Doing so, i release a large amount of chakra that takes the form of an enormous lightning bolt. Using shape manipulation, i change the lead of the bolt of lightning into a triangular shape, i direct my attack at my clone. As the bolt of lightining fires at my clone, the ground begins to crack up and heat rises around the area the bolt is heading at. The bolt hits my clone destroying it-
 

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-I gather a large amount of raiton chakra, i focus all the energy built up. I then make Ox → Rabbit → Ram → Dog → Monkey handseals and place my hand to the ground. Doing so, i release a large amount of chakra that takes the form of an enormous lightning bolt. Using shape manipulation, i change the lead of the bolt of lightning into a triangular shape, i direct my attack at my clone. As the bolt of lightining fires at my clone, the ground begins to crack up and heat rises around the area the bolt is heading at. The bolt hits my clone destroying it-
Good.

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.
This is a reshaped Chidori in which you will form the lightning into multiple small needles. The needles of course can't kill, much like Nagashi, but they can cause numbing in the opponent's body as well as pierce normal metals.
 

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-makes a clone, i feel sorry for my clones-

-I build up raiton chakra and convert it to electricity. I channel the electricity to my right hand. I then focus the electricity and pour more raiton chakra into it, raising its power. I reshape the electricity in my hands, I then face at my clone and swing my righ hand, releasing electricity i use shape manipulation to make it into needles, the needles fly at high speed hitting my clone different parts of the body and making him unmoveable-

- i then take out a kunai and throw it to the sky. Doind so, i fire the senbons at it and it pierces through it.-
 

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-makes a clone, i feel sorry for my clones-

-I build up raiton chakra and convert it to electricity. I channel the electricity to my right hand. I then focus the electricity and pour more raiton chakra into it, raising its power. I reshape the electricity in my hands, I then face at my clone and swing my righ hand, releasing electricity i use shape manipulation to make it into needles, the needles fly at high speed hitting my clone different parts of the body and making him unmoveable-

- i then take out a kunai and throw it to the sky. Doind so, i fire the senbons at it and it pierces through it.-
Good.

(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.
Basically form a small compressed ball of lightning chakra and release the compression while slamming it into your target which will cause an explosion.
 

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-i make a clone-
-I begin to gather raiton chakra, i then release it into my hand and using shape manipulation, it takes the form of the ball. I then compress that ball of energy in my hands. i charge at my clone slamming the ball of energy into it causing a huge explsoion-
 

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-i make a clone-
-I begin to gather raiton chakra, i then release it into my hand and using shape manipulation, it takes the form of the ball. I then compress that ball of energy in my hands. i charge at my clone slamming the ball of energy into it causing a huge explsoion-
More description.
 

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-makes a clone-

-i gather my raiton chakra, i then focus and mold it while building high concentration for the jutsu. Doing so, i channel all the energy into my hands and continues my concentration. I then compress it into a ball of energy in my hands using shape manipulation ,as i pour more chakra into it making it more powerful. After building the power of the jutsu, i keep focus on controlling it, i then charge at my clone, slamming the ball of lightning energy into my clone. It causes a huge explosion annihalating my clone-
 

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-makes a clone-

-i gather my raiton chakra, i then focus and mold it while building high concentration for the jutsu. Doing so, i channel all the energy into my hands and continues my concentration. I then compress it into a ball of energy in my hands using shape manipulation ,as i pour more chakra into it making it more powerful. After building the power of the jutsu, i keep focus on controlling it, i then charge at my clone, slamming the ball of lightning energy into my clone. It causes a huge explosion annihalating my clone-
Good.

(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.
An advanced variation of the Four Pillar Bind in which you will form 16 pillars and form the pillars into an oven. The oven can then be used in combination with Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop and Fire Release: Firing Biscuit Technique.
 

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God you move fast with training:crazy:

-I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra and mold it in my stomach, while doing so, i make the needed handseals. I then convert my gather raiton chakra into electricity. I focus the electricity and release it. I concentrate the electricity into 16 pillars. I then use shape maniupulation to make the 16 pillars form a oven. I build high concentration on the enormous electricity oven and keep full control of the jutsu, i then release more chakra into the jutsu strengthining the oven prison-
 

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God you move fast with training:crazy:

-I build up an enormous amount of raiton chakra and mold it in my stomach, while doing so, i make the needed handseals. I then convert my gather raiton chakra into electricity. I focus the electricity and release it. I concentrate the electricity into 16 pillars. I then use shape maniupulation to make the 16 pillars form a oven. I build high concentration on the enormous electricity oven and keep full control of the jutsu, i then release more chakra into the jutsu strengthining the oven prison-
Use Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop and Fire Release: Firing Biscuit Technique if you know them o.o
 
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