this would b wack does it sould like kishi

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Naruto 443:

?Naruto plunges into Pain with the Rasengan?

Pain: - Gaaahh!
Nagato: - *cough cough* ahggg?!

?Naruto and Pain hits the ground and slides into a block standing 5 meters away, the crash crumples the stone.?

?As the stones falls to the ground and the dust settles out of the rumble a shadow arises. Naruto, his shoulders hanging towards his sides and blood running from a wound in his chin lets his head fall back in exhaustion? His cloth are torn and covered in dirt from the collition. He looks up towards the sky, it?s so blue. He looks back down towards Pain. Pain lies incapacitated on the ground, a big wound in his chest and his arms broken. Blood is pouring from his mouth.?

Naruto: - What?s your name? Your real name.

At Hinata:

?Sakura looks tired?

Sakura: - There?I?ve done what I can. Let me see Pa?
Neji: - Will she be alright!?
Sakura: -Yes Neji..yes?It was a close call though.
Neji: - Hinata?why did you?.

?Sakura walks over to Pa?

Ma: - It?s to late Sakura?..he is gone?

?Ma starts crying. Sakura looks sad?

Sakura: - I?m sorry Ma?I was to late.
Ma: - It?s not your fault Sakura?we were not prepared to handle Pain. It is our misjudgment that made this reality?..and Naruto still fights for us..

?Neji looks towards Naruto and exclaims?

Neji: - It seems that Naruto have defeated his opponent!
Ma: - !! He did it! Did you hear that Pa! He did good?He is the destined child after all, you would be so proud..

?Ma starts crying into Pa:s chest?

At Naruto:

?Pain looks up towards Naruto, Naruto is standing in the light of the sun?
?Nagato see this Naruto through the eyes of Yahiko and his own eyes widen?

Nagato: - The?destined child?.
Konan: - What?s happening Nagato!?
Nagato: - He?.he has defeated us?utterly.
Nagato through Yahiko: - You have won this battle Naruto. My name is Nagato, this body is Yahiko.

?Naruto looks towards the location of Nagato then back at Yahiko?

Naruto : - I want to talk to you, the real you..Nagato.
Nagato: - If you wish to speak you have to come to me, you know where I am. Bring Yahikos body as a sign of trust.

?Naruto flinches and become more serious?

Naruto: - Trust??I don?t know what will go down or if we will fight. All I know is that I must speak to you.

?Naruto seems to be in deep thought?

Nagato: - That is fine for now, I ask you to bring Yahiko then, as a favor, even if you owe me nothing.

?Yahiko?s eyes turn normal and his body turns limb. Naruto stands silent for awhile.?

Naruto thinks: Jirayia, Father, Kakashi?Pa? is this what you mean? I?m starting to find my answers?.but?.I can?t forget about you?.what he has done?. I must be prepared.

?Naruto sits down, and meditate, pondering all he has learned?.loosing his physical self in thought, becoming still and gathering Natural energies.?

?Naruto awakes, stands up, walk over to Yahiko, picks him up and Jumps of?

?You see Naruto jumping through the air towards Nagato from the side. The one that is looking is Madara. He is standing on a tree branch very far away, his eye focused on the location of Naruto.?

Madara to himself: - The nine tail was suppressed it seems?but he did not do that alone, I felt it?he had help. This has become interesting indeed.

?Naruto lands in front of the place where Nagato sits. He doesn?t see Nagato because of Konana cover. Naruto puts down Yahikos body and as he stands up again, zoom into his eyes, he is in Sage mode again. He glares right towards the spot Nagato and Konan is They both feel the power of his resolution?

Naruto: - Reveal yourself!

How will the fated meeting between the pupils and destined children go? Next week:
- The Destined children, a fated reunion -
 
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It would be an unexpected twist, but Naruto going into sage mode again I think is not believable since he's lost so much chakra.....
 

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lol there is no way pain and naruto are going to start being friendly now. pain destroyed everything, and naruto killed all of pain's bodys. i doubt they are going to be talking of trust and wanting to chat like freinds.

it does sound like somthing kishi would do, naruto does want to talk to nagato but the whole trust thing...i dunno.
 

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Naruto 443:

?Naruto plunges into Pain with the Rasengan?

Pain: - Gaaahh!
Nagato: - *cough cough* ahggg?!

?Naruto and Pain hits the ground and slides into a block standing 5 meters away, the crash crumples the stone.?

?As the stones falls to the ground and the dust settles out of the rumble a shadow arises. Naruto, his shoulders hanging towards his sides and blood running from a wound in his chin lets his head fall back in exhaustion? His cloth are torn and covered in dirt from the collition. He looks up towards the sky, it?s so blue. He looks back down towards Pain. Pain lies incapacitated on the ground, a big wound in his chest and his arms broken. Blood is pouring from his mouth.?

Naruto: - What?s your name? Your real name.

At Hinata:

?Sakura looks tired?

Sakura: - There?I?ve done what I can. Let me see Pa?
Neji: - Will she be alright!?
Sakura: -Yes Neji..yes?It was a close call though.
Neji: - Hinata?why did you?.

?Sakura walks over to Pa?

Ma: - It?s to late Sakura?..he is gone?

?Ma starts crying. Sakura looks sad?

Sakura: - I?m sorry Ma?I was to late.
Ma: - It?s not your fault Sakura?we were not prepared to handle Pain. It is our misjudgment that made this reality?..and Naruto still fights for us..

?Neji looks towards Naruto and exclaims?

Neji: - It seems that Naruto have defeated his opponent!
Ma: - !! He did it! Did you hear that Pa! He did good?He is the destined child after all, you would be so proud..

?Ma starts crying into Pa:s chest?

At Naruto:

?Pain looks up towards Naruto, Naruto is standing in the light of the sun?
?Nagato see this Naruto through the eyes of Yahiko and his own eyes widen?

Nagato: - The?destined child?.
Konan: - What?s happening Nagato!?
Nagato: - He?.he has defeated us?utterly.
Nagato through Yahiko: - You have won this battle Naruto. My name is Nagato, this body is Yahiko.

?Naruto looks towards the location of Nagato then back at Yahiko?

Naruto : - I want to talk to you, the real you..Nagato.
Nagato: - If you wish to speak you have to come to me, you know where I am. Bring Yahikos body as a sign of trust.

?Naruto flinches and become more serious?

Naruto: - Trust??I don?t know what will go down or if we will fight. All I know is that I must speak to you.

?Naruto seems to be in deep thought?

Nagato: - That is fine for now, I ask you to bring Yahiko then, as a favor, even if you owe me nothing.

?Yahiko?s eyes turn normal and his body turns limb. Naruto stands silent for awhile.?

Naruto thinks: Jirayia, Father, Kakashi?Pa? is this what you mean? I?m starting to find my answers?.but?.I can?t forget about you?.what he has done?. I must be prepared.

?Naruto sits down, and meditate, pondering all he has learned?.loosing his physical self in thought, becoming still and gathering Natural energies.?

?Naruto awakes, stands up, walk over to Yahiko, picks him up and Jumps of?

?You see Naruto jumping through the air towards Nagato from the side. The one that is looking is Madara. He is standing on a tree branch very far away, his eye focused on the location of Naruto.?

Madara to himself: - The nine tail was suppressed it seems?but he did not do that alone, I felt it?he had help. This has become interesting indeed.

?Naruto lands in front of the place where Nagato sits. He doesn?t see Nagato because of Konana cover. Naruto puts down Yahikos body and as he stands up again, zoom into his eyes, he is in Sage mode again. He glares right towards the spot Nagato and Konan is They both feel the power of his resolution?

Naruto: - Reveal yourself!

How will the fated meeting between the pupils and destined children go? Next week:
- The Destined children, a fated reunion -
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lol there is no way pain and naruto are going to start being friendly now. pain destroyed everything, and naruto killed all of pain's bodys. i doubt they are going to be talking of trust and wanting to chat like freinds.

it does sound like somthing kishi would do, naruto does want to talk to nagato but the whole trust thing...i dunno.
btw naruto is the destined child..
and he's not evil..
like what jiraiya said, naruto will change the ninja world :naruto:
 

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btw naruto is the destined child..
and he's not evil..
like what jiraiya said, naruto will change the ninja world :naruto:
I'm not saying Naruto is evil, and I believe he is the destined child, i'm just saying that after this huge fight and all these people dying Naruto and Nagato are going to be talking about trust and what not, I def. predict them talking but Naruto has to kill Nagato by the end of all this.

It would seem weird that Naruto would bring back Yahiko as a sign of "trust". Naruto has to move fast and finish off Pain before Konan and Nagato can move.
 

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I'm not saying Naruto is evil, and I believe he is the destined child, i'm just saying that after this huge fight and all these people dying Naruto and Nagato are going to be talking about trust and what not, I def. predict them talking but Naruto has to kill Nagato by the end of all this.

It would seem weird that Naruto would bring back Yahiko as a sign of "trust". Naruto has to move fast and finish off Pain before Konan and Nagato can move.
NAruto has never killed anybody yet he'll beat them down then somebody like Kakashi would do it for him like the first time he landed frs he didnt kill Kakuzu Kakashi came and finished him off...
 
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