[CFS] They'll Call us Coldhands

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Alright, so before I teach you the jutsu, here's how the updated fbf looks, read it.

(Tōshō no Ken) - Frostbite Fist
Type: NinTaijutsu
Background: Inchato Yuki was a rather unskilled at taijutsu, preferring to fight with a sword when in a close range. When he joined Konohagakure, he observed the way that the Hyuuga clan members utilized their chakra to attack the bodies of their opponents in their Gentle Fist fighting style. Inchato realized that, although he could not use his chakra to shut down a body the same way a Hyuuga does, he could inject ice chakra into the body of his opponents in a similar manner, causing the body of his opponents to feel varying degrees of frostbite. And thus, Frostbite Fist was created. After a long amount of study and practice, Inchato was able to master this unique fighting style, and was even capable of forcing the 'waves' to travel through the air in the most advanced techniques in the fighting style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The technique works by charging one's hands with ice chakra and striking an opponent. As the strike lands, the user forces the chakra into the opponent's body in the form of a freezing 'wave' of chakra. The tissue and organs that this wave pass through will experience various degrees of frostbite and freezing depending on the amount of chakra put into the wave. As the jutsu was inspired by the Hyuuga, the actual fighting style is quite similar to that displayed in Gentle Fist in that the user will typically attempt to make rapid, light strikes against their target. After mastery in the standard hand-to-hand style has been achieved, a user of frostbite fist is capable of forcing the waves of chakra to travel through the air a small distance before freezing the opponent, though this greatly diminishes the effects compared to a direct contact technique. Although releasing these waves through the hands is by far the most effective way to use this fighting style, true masters of the technique are capable of releasing waves from other parts of their body as well.

Although the style is derived from the Hyuga's Gentle Fist Style, the two are quite different. Rather than usage of byakugan to find and target chakra points in order to close them, thus damaging the victim's internal body systems as the Gentle Fist users do, the Frostbite Fist users apply their chakra waves in a more direct and simple manner. Simply put, Frostbite Fist has nothing to do with the Chakra Points of the opponent. Rather, Frostbite Fist targets the muscles, flesh, and blood of the section of the body that the user chose to strike.
Example Techniques:


Additional effects and Restrictions:
To learn Frostbite Fist, one must be a member of the Yuki clan, and have already mastered Ice.
Frostbite Fist users tend to be quicker and more agile with their movements than standard strong style taijutsu users, though they lack some of the physical strength and power that a strong style user possesses.
Frosstbite Fist users have an increased resistance to cold due to the amount of time that they have spent practicing working with and producing freezing effects.

Any questions about it?
 

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Yeah you could use it on yourself.

If that's all, time for the jutsu!
(Tōshō no Ken: Furosutonippu)-Frostbite Fist: Frostnip

Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will gather and focus ice chakra into their fists and strike at a target. As they make contact with the target, the user will push an amount of ice chakra into the target's body in the form of a cold 'wave.' This wave of chakra rapidly freezes the tissues of the surface skin in the area that the punched. The result of the skin being frozen is initially itching and considerable pain, however, after a full turn of feeling pain, the afflicted area will go numb, which can make using this body part to fight difficult. After four turns of numbness, the skin and tissues thaw, allowing the body part to function normally once more.
Note: A maximum of three punches can be performed per time this jutsu is used.
Note: Punching the same location multiple times will yield no additional affect.
Note: Can only be used by Ice Style Users.

It's pretty simple. Focus ice chakra in your fists, and then strike out at your opponent with your fists, releasing waves of ice chakra as you do so. The function of these waves is to reduce the temperature of the body parts you strike considerably, causing frostnip. You can read in the description what the results of frostnip are. Go ahead and try it. o-o
 

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Hmmm.....I see. I like it.

*focuses chakra into his knuckles, and spreads it throughout his hand*

Now, I just gotta punch something.

*reaches over and touches your shoulder*

How's that?
 

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You have to release the chakra from your fist as well. Also, you get three punches with this one... But I'm in a good mood, so I won't be that guy and make you redo it.

When using it, bear in mind that aside from the slight difficulties using numb body parts, this isn't going to do to much in battle, unless you hit certain body parts. A couple of good uses for it: hitting someone's eye will obviously render it unusable. Hitting someone's hands will make it much more difficult to use hand seals. This should slow their hand seal time down considerably.

If you have questions, include it with your next post.
(Tōshō no Ken: Furosuto no Sunappu) Frostbite Fist: Frost Snap

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will gather and focus ice chakra into their fists and strike at a target. Upon striking the target, the user will release the ice chakra in the form of a cold 'wave.' This wave is more powerful than the one used in Frostbite Fist: Frostnip. As a result, of this, in the area that was struck by the punch, the tissues of the surface skin will be frozen, and some deeper tissues will also be frozen. As a result, there will be greater pain than there was in Frostnip. In addition to this pain, the skin in frozen and hardens. After a full turn of dealing with this pain, the location will become numb, making usage of the body part difficult. Two turns after this jutsu was used, the skin hit will form painful black blisters, although, the target will be unable to feel the pain until the numbness wears off. After four turns of numbness, the skin will thaw, and the target will be inflicted with pain due to the blisters.
Note: A maximum of two punches can be used per time this jutsu is used.'
Note: Punching the same location multiple times will yield no additional affects.
Note: Can only be used by Ice Style Users.
Note: Can only be used three times

Works the same way as last time. Describe in detail how you perform it, and some ways that you would use it.
 

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Ahh. Use more chakra and release it. Gotcha.

*charges up chakra while screaming like goku
*runs towards you to deliver a punch to your thigh, and upon contact release a wave of hyouton throughout the point of contact.*

The uses I'm noting that I can see this being effective in are as follows,
Cooling something that would normally burn my hand if I touched it, freezing a cut on my person to prevent blood loss for a while, and of course, freezing and disabling my opponents by means of selective targeting. Sound about right to you?
 
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o_____o Ok, I'm glad I asked about the usage thing.

Unfortunately, this jutsu isn't going to have that kind of effect. Even if you were to use this on a burned body part, you would just further damage the skin by lowering the temperature of said skin to harmful levels. The best way to deal with burns without med jutsu is just to run the burn under cool water.

Nor can it be used to prevent blood loss. For that to happen with this jutsu, you would have to lower the body temperature in the desired area so much that the blood would freeze into its solid state, which this jutsu is not capable of doing. And even if it could, that would cause way more harm than good. Although, both of these usages give me ideas for future customs for FBF, so you should reap the benefits of that soon enough. o_o

The last one is correct. With this one it's smart to try targeting areas like the throat that have very important tissues close to the surface of the skin.

And, most unfortunately, I cannot teach you the last one at the moment. To teach s-rank CFS, you need to have a valid sensei status... Which is pretty dumb. But oh well. I'm planning on bumping the last one down to a-rank when I update it anyway, which is going to be in the next cycle. We can come back to this as soon as it's approved. I also plan on taking the sensei test, so soon enough it won't make a difference anyway. o-o
 

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Huh. In the CFS thread it says you need to be a sensei to teach s-rank+. But I think you're right. They probably just forgot to take it out when they changed the rule.

in any case **** it yolo here you go

(Tōshō no Ken: Tōshō)-Frostbite Fist: Frostbite

Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather and focus ice chakra into one of their fists and then strike a target with said fist. Upon striking the target, the user will release the ice chakra in the form of a cold 'wave.' The wave is roughly the size of the user's fist. This wave is more powerful than the one used in Frostbite Fist: Frost Snap. As a result of this, the muscles, tendons, blood vessels and nerves that were hit by this all freeze. Because of this, the skin in this area will turn hard and feel waxy, and the body part will become temporarily unusable, and the user will lose all feeling in said body part. After two turns, the afflicted area will form large purple blisters where the wave originally passed through. After four turns of being unable to use said body part, the target will once more be able to use it, though they will feel an extreme amount of pain in the inside of the afflicted area due to the freezing, though they will still have no feeling on the outside sections of the body part. Unless the target is treated by a medical ninja, they will have permanent loss of feeling in the afflicted area due to nerve damage.
Note: A maximum of one punch can be used per time this jutsu is used.
Note: Can only be used by Ice Style Users.
Note: The user will be unable to perform any Frostbite Fist jutsu for the following turn.
Note: No A rank or above ice ninjutsu the following turn.
Note: Can only be used twice.

Obviously this is the big one, and it's a hell of a lot more powerful than the other two. This one I suggest you never use on yourself. o-o It's performed in the same manner as the other two, just punch something and release the temperature lowing wave of chakra. However, the wave is going to pass through much more of their body, not just the skin like the other two. This means that if you hit someone in the right spots, it will kill them, as it can stop very important body parts from working. The heart is a really good place to aim for. If you hit someone in the arm or leg, know that it's effectively going to shut down whatever muscle that you hit, which is a lot more crippling than it sounds. Any questions?
 
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