The Would-be King

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They say you can mend what's been broken
But I don't believe that's true for all things
They say you can forget what's been spoken
That's been proven untrue for even queens & kings

They say there's a next life to go to
I don't like the idea of eternal life without you
They say the sky is always blue
But all I see is black and that's all I ever knew

Now I know a lot less than I thought
I still know the difference between right and wrong
But I've lost all the good memories I sought
And I can't remember our favorite song

I once was great like a true king
I was not wealthy, or rich nor did I own lands
But to me I had everything
When the time came it all slipped through my hands

Now I've got plenty of new chances
And a new life to start
But I can't forget our midnight dances
And I cannot mend this broken heart

So hear I'll sit pondering the word never
You've confused me as to it's meaning
You said you'd never leave and it would be forever
But that tower fell after it started leaning

And now this would be king
Is lost in the wilderness of his mind
After the loss of his everyting
He's the one no one else can truly find..
 
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That was quite beautiful. You make nice poetry, despite the tragic breakup story that you keep writing about (personal?). +rep

EDIT: It seems I can't +rep you again yet.... well, eventually, I suppose.
 

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Wrong section. Cool poetry
Really? I got kicked to this section by a mod after posting in another one.
That was quite beautiful. You make nice poetry, despite the tragic breakup story that you keep writing about (personal?). +rep

EDIT: It seems I can't +rep you again yet.... well, eventually, I suppose.
Well.. It is personal.. Wish I could write like this without cause.. but I can't. :|
 

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Thank you. :cool:
I'm in a considerably better mood now.. I almost wonder if I couldn't write something positive for a change.
im glad that u are in a better mood and hopefully in a better place xd. and i hear u. i also couldnt write anything when im happy. i think writing when u are in the dumps is an outlet for people like us not to self-destruct :y. :lmao: atleast for me, its like that. but it really takes it toll emotionally. but anyways, u are really really good. i hope ul continue writing regardless but i dont wish for u to be in pain just to be able to write this magnificently. good luck and i wish u well :ice::D
 

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im glad that u are in a better mood and hopefully in a better place xd. and i hear u. i also couldnt write anything when im happy. i think writing when u are in the dumps is an outlet for people like us not to self-destruct :y. :lmao: atleast for me, its like that. but it really takes it toll emotionally. but anyways, u are really really good. i hope ul continue writing regardless but i dont wish for u to be in pain just to be able to write this magnificently. good luck and i wish u well :ice::D
Eh.. Life has a tendency lately of throwing wrenches if all my plans. And I've been in pain for more than 2 months now over my pregnant ex.. Because I do not understand why we aren't together. It just seems stupid to me.. I don't get how you can decide to have a baby with someone, then leave them, lie to them, about them, and basically **** up their whole life, after they gave you everything the are.
In short, that's what she did to me.
 
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