The way I would end Naruto

[Lightbringer]

Its very creative and it is very interesting, but I don't think that the Ninshou connecting everyone can be done in an instant like that, if it was that easy the Sage would have done it rather than run around teaching everyone.

From the sound of it, its more along the lines of a religion that everyone has to accept by their own choice and would require generations to put in place.

You have a point

Although one explanation might be that Hagoromo traveled around the world to spread peace(as told by Jiraiya)

But this current age, the Shinobi alliance gathered together, there wasn't a need to travel since it was the accumulation of all villages and it was easier to spread Ninshu with them since they all accepted the idea after the war.

I suppose one way I could write it in is that Ninshu was spread across the shinobi. Envoys would be sent to other regions of the globe to do the same thereafter.

 

[shelke]

Hopefully, Sasuke won't be defeated. That had me slightly upset. The rest was good. Better mail this to Kishimoto after the rectification at the appropriate part. Maybe this mind jog his shitty memory that good plot is important to any story.

 

[Lightbringer]

Hopefully, Sasuke won't be defeated. That had me slightly upset. The rest was good. Better mail this to Kishimoto after the rectification at the appropriate part. Maybe this mind jog his shitty memory that good plot is important to any story.

Haha yeah lol sorry

I like Sasuke but ever since Part 1, I always wanted Naruto to be victorious in the end since he is the main character after all.

At least in my version Naruto would only win by a small margin. I tried to balance it out.

Call it plot


I'm glad you liked the rest though haha

 

[paratise]

I expected Oro to end, i don't see him as being a head of some forces.

Also if there was a battle occured, imo Kabuto would side with Sasuke and Obito would be with Naruto.

Regardless, it was a good read.

 

[Lightbringer]

I expected Oro to end, i don't see him as being a head of some forces.

Also if there was a battle occured, imo Kabuto would side with Sasuke and Obito would be with Naruto.

Regardless, it was a good read.

Well it's kind of hard to see Orochimaru turning evil again. His best bet would be fighting alongside Sasuke if he turns against Naruto.

Orochimaru gained a second chance and so far has shown to try to redeem himself. Death at this point won't really be justified I think.

I wanted Kabuto to side with Naruto because I just wanted to see him fight against Orochimaru haha.

Obito and Kabuto are bros. They need to have a tag-team match

 

[Scryed]

I personally wouldn't like Madara becoming the villain again but everything else you came up with was cool!

Yin Zetsu and Yang Zetsu. Her plot to place everyone under IT in the past. Etc.


Even if I don't agree with the Madara parts, it's undeniable that you came up with a cool direction to the series.

Good job!

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

I LOVED the concept of Obito/Kabuto VS Orochimaru but think it's verrrry unlikely.

I also enjoyed the Kaguya flashback and the Yin/Yang deal with Zetsu but personally stopped reading when Madara returned and became the main villain again. That's just wishful thinking and would make the last month obnoxious and awkward. Sorry, he's gone- he won't be main villain.

That said I have to give credit to other users like myself who really get creative and put effort into their threads, even if I disagree with it nice job man.

 

[Lightbringer]

I LOVED the concept of Obito/Kabuto VS Orochimaru but think it's verrrry unlikely.

I also enjoyed the Kaguya flashback and the Yin/Yang deal with Zetsu but personally stopped reading when Madara returned and became the main villain again. That's just wishful thinking and would make the last month obnoxious and awkward. Sorry, he's gone- he won't be main villain.

That said I have to give credit to other users like myself who really get creative and put effort into their threads, even if I disagree with it nice job man.

Well like I stated, this isn't a prediction, it's just what I would do with the story.

I'm almost certain that everything I've written won't happen lol

I always wanted Madara to be the final villain, so I was determined to bring him back.

Again, like I said, it's merely a fan-service to myself, not a theory of what's going to happen

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

Well like I stated, this isn't a prediction, it's just what I would do with the story.

I'm almost certain that everything I've written won't happen lol

Oh dude dw I know, I did it myself once. To keep myself sane I just retcon'd the entire last arc and ended the war with Obito's defeat looool, I actually did this thread for the entire of Shippuden if you're interested- which is why I like seeing other people's versions so much aha- i'd love if you could read mine too and discuss that one as well lol

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I always wanted Madara to be the final villain, so I was determined to bring him back.

Again, like I said, it's merely a fan-service to myself, not a theory of what's going to happen

I can respect that the idea of the obito/kabuto team up alone made me fanboy a little. I tried to keep my fanservice bias to a minimum in my one as I was legit trying to see if I could in my opinion 'fix it' but even then a lil bit of Akatsuki and Obito/Kabuto love seeped through aha

 

[Lightbringer]

Oh dude dw I know, I did it myself once. To keep myself sane I just retcon'd the entire last arc and ended the war with Obito's defeat looool, I actually did this thread for the entire of Shippuden if you're interested- which is why I like seeing other people's versions so much aha- i'd love if you could read mine too and discuss that one as well lol

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I can respect that the idea of the obito/kabuto team up alone made me fanboy a little. I tried to keep my fanservice bias to a minimum in my one as I was legit trying to see if I could in my opinion 'fix it' but even then a lil bit of Akatsuki and Obito/Kabuto love seeped through aha

Yeah I would have changed a lot with the series given the chance. Some minor and some major. I think the biggest change would be Madara sticking with his EMS power and never gaining the rinnegan.

I never really liked the idea of Six Paths of Pain. I think Deva Path should have been the original body of Nagato.

Hagoromo should have stayed as the strongest character without having a brother or powerful mother in the series and the Juubi should have just been a monster, not Kaguya.

List goes on.



I think some fan-service is required though haha.

It might be cliche, but that's not always a bad thing. Branching out when not needed could be a formula for disaster(Like the Mass Effect 3 ending)



I always felt that Obito and Kabuto were bros haha

I've made a thread showing the parallels to each other. They're like best-friends, so I always wanted them to have some sort of tag-team. I always wanted Kabuto to fight Orochimaru. So this was the best approach imo.

 

[Peccavi]

I like everything aside from the Hamura transmigration to Orochimaru idea, everything is pretty good.

I'd read it!

 

[Lightbringer]

I like everything aside from the Hamura transmigration to Orochimaru idea, everything is pretty good.

I'd read it!

Haha thanks!

I know it was a bit farfetched, but I thought it be a good way to scale Orochimaru's power, especially since he is fighting both Kabuto and Obito in my version.

It would also be a good way to give some backstory to Hamura, since we know little about him.

 

[Bad Touch Yakushi]

I always felt that Obito and Kabuto were bros haha

I've made a thread showing the parallels to each other. They're like best-friends, so I always wanted them to have some sort of tag-team. I always wanted Kabuto to fight Orochimaru. So this was the best approach imo.

They are SO alike.

Kabuto wants to be somebody
Obito wants to be nobody

 

[sindi1997]

Read pls why sasuke got kaguya s eye

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[Lightbringer]

They are SO alike.

Kabuto wants to be somebody
Obito wants to be nobody

Well here's an image that speaks volumes I think haha

but check the comparison thread out if you're interested.

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[Xlad]

Something refreshing to read. The interesting parts were the contrast between Black and Spiral Zetsu, Kaguya's backstory, and Madara's return.
- Kaguya may have actually tempt everyone chakra in order to cast IT on them.
- Naruto may only be a temporary hold for this fight. It's likely they'll be pretty much free.
- If Madara returns, he would likely perform a special/forbidden Dojutsu.

Excellence prediction.

 

[Lightbringer]

Something refreshing to read. The interesting parts were the contrast between Black and Spiral Zetsu, Kaguya's backstory, and Madara's return.
- Kaguya may have actually tempt everyone chakra in order to cast IT on them.
- Naruto may only be a temporary hold for this fight. It's likely they'll be pretty much free.
- If Madara returns, he would likely perform a special/forbidden Dojutsu.

Excellence prediction.

Well to be honest, it's not really a prediction, just how I would write the story if I had the chance.

But thank you! ^_^