The way I would end Naruto

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It doesn't seem like it, yeah. There's still a chance though

But like I said, this is my adaptation of what I want to happen.....and I want them to fight! lol

well right on man, more power to you:win:
 

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If kishi goes from madara to kaguya then to madara again. I'll really hate this manga :|
 

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Nice work mate! I like your writing style. Too bad it's a little better than what Kishi has been doing recently......
 

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that's good . I liked the part "Heart is the Eye" and Obito awaking susano'o .. nice prediction .. not in detail but I liked it

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good reading, but i don't think that edo kages will play any role outside of diversions in current battle.
 

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Yeah this was a good read. I doubt Madara would want peace even if he knew it was all a lie and shit.
 

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good reading, but i don't think that edo kages will play any role outside of diversions in current battle.

Well maybe in Kishi's version lol

You can't just throw away powerful characters such as them like nothing as soon as Naruto/Sasuke get a power-up.

I was honestly disappointed that all the Kage, except Hashirama, didn't live up to the hype. Having them aid in the final battle, and show off new techniques, would be a way to redeem their reputation in my eyes.
 

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Not bad.Tho the real thing will be much more unpredictable...I predict.
 

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It's because of things like this that people throw a strop when things don't turn as they wanted/expected.
 

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The two opposing forces will never work together , if they win against Kaguya or Madara or what ever which will never happen ,

Naruto and Sasuke will never work together unless Sasuke becomes Naruto's ***** like Gara and Nagato and Obito .

Madara and Hashi are the best example .
 
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Great effort. This would definitely save the manga.
 

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They should return Chakra back to the Shinju.

I doubt that would happen. As it was stated, Ninshuu only failed because of Black Zetsu.

Also returning chakra to the tree means the Bijuu will cease to exist. One reason is that Naruto is fighting for their freedom.

If all chakra is sent back to the God Tree, then a new Juubi fruit would be born and someone else would eat it and become like Kaguya. Way more risky than the other way around.


With my version at least, Naruto and Sasuke's difference of opinion leads their final conflict. Naruto wanted to preserve chakra, Sasuke wanted to get rid of it.

Not bad.Tho the real thing will be much more unpredictable...I predict.

Yeah I know, but like I said this is kind of my fan-service to myself haha

These are the things I wish would happen







It's because of things like this that people throw a strop when things don't turn as they wanted/expected.

Everyone have their preferences. I'm sure even you to some degree wished certain things would have happened.

This is just my version of the story's end, not a prediction, because I'm certain almost none of this would happen.
 
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Nice, better than Kishimoto's manga. You should be the one continuing this manga :cool:
 

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Its very creative and it is very interesting, but I don't think that the Ninshou connecting everyone can be done in an instant like that, if it was that easy the Sage would have done it rather than run around teaching everyone.

From the sound of it, its more along the lines of a religion that everyone has to accept by their own choice and would require generations to put in place.
 
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