The War For The Universe Ch.2

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Chapter 2: The Avatar Reborn


Roku:i know that Scent of destruction from anywhere....

*as Roku Sand surfed towards #72 he Jumped high Blocking the sun and casting a shadow over Rei and her guards and then Made a sword out of Earth Sharpend by sand and stabbed #72 on the forehead as he headed towards the ground killing him*

Natsu: W-Who are you? *raising his spear against roku*

Roku: My name is Roku, and i am the Avatar

*Roku then began to walk slowly towards Rei and Natsu but he quickly tripped and fell over, he then started to go unconsious*

Rei:Quickly Natsu! Help him To the Caravan!

*hours passed and Roku Began to come too he then sat up only to feel Soreness in his shoulder*

Roku: Where the hell am i? *gets out of bed and walks outside*

Natsu: ah i see your up Roku...

Roku: *takes a step forward and almost collapses but manages to press on*

Natsu: Careful Their your Body is weak right now

Roku: Who are you? and where am i?

Natsu: My name is Natsu i am the Queens Personal Assitant and this is the Planet Barun

Roku: Planet? *starts to have Flashabacks of General X* Thats right now i remember

* at that moment The Queen Rei began to walk towards Natsu and Roku, Natsu then Stood firmly and bowed to the queen while Roku just stood thier confused*

Natsu:*whispering* Roku *then jots a head movement*

Rei: its all right Natsu this Man saved our lives..which means he's not part of General R's Army but he does give off an unusual Aura tell me Roku what is you story?

Roku: we may want to sit down...its a long one

*Rei,Natsu and roku then sat down and roku Began telling his story of who he came to the Planet Barun from earth and how his planet was threatned by General D, he then went on to tell the defeat of General D and how his home Planet was taken over by General X, he also began to explain his position as the avatar*


Roku:....he Knew i was a danger to his Army so he sent me into space as this ball of energy which was really, really Cramped, right now i need to get back to my home planet if i want to Defeat General X.

Rei: Intresting Story Roku, so you say your the Avatar Correct?

Roku: yes i am...but..

Rei: but?

Natsu: (Wow what a story)

Roku: but for some reason i can only use the elements Sand and Earth....i have no idea why i cant use my other ones

Rei: Perhaps maybe our Preist Could Tell you, but he's not here, he was Captured by General R 2 weeks ago, and we dont know why i sent my best warrior Kirabi to Find Him but i havent heard from him im worried...but enough about that tell me...

Roku: tell you what?

Rei: How is it that Your The Avatar yet...the Last one was to have Died a Millenium Ago on the Planet Giga

Roku: :eek: What?!


Next Chapter: A New Quest: Find Him!
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its been a looooooooooooooooong Time Hasnt it?
 
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Yeah, a very long time O_O as I can't even remember that there was a chapter 1 of this xd

It's fun to read, but a bit plain in the looks. Also the base of the script looks a lot like that of Avatar: The Last Airbender >.>
I mean: Avatar, elements, disappeared for a long time...
The only difference is that this is on a way larger scale (1000 years instead of 100 and the universe instead of the world)

But hey I love Avatar xd
 

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Yeah, a very long time O_O as I can't even remember that there was a chapter 1 of this xd

It's fun to read, but a bit plain in the looks. Also the base of the script looks a lot like that of Avatar: The Last Airbender >.>
I mean: Avatar, elements, disappeared for a long time...
The only difference is that this is on a way larger scale (1000 years instead of 100 and the universe instead of the world)

But hey I love Avatar xd
glad you enjoyed it but...this is the second series of my 2 series project O_O so if you want to read the 1st series search up The war of the sages



so yea xd
 
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