The Tale of Wesobi - Chapter 1 ±±Invasion±±

[Toruk-Makto]

nice

 

[Scorps]

Really good job Scorps.

Tks ^^

its awesome
can i be in the next one pwease

Sorry but the caracteres are already chosen

Lol nice man =DD

tks

looking good.

Tks

That's it, I'm joining the story. U_U

Climbs in through a hole created by a worm program.

... It's nice in here.

Weirdo

(didn't read the first chapter .-.)
xd nice scorps i like it.

tks

*destroys everything with sand*

>: Kill AKIZA!

(great chappy ^^, lol Pop killed Akisha, wonder how Akisha is going to react to this xd. Pop finally gets the rep he deserves =DD)

Well it was a bit of a plot twist. Who would expect it?

Very well done my friend I thoroughly enjoyed it. I can't wait to see the fight

Yeah the fight will be memorable and quite surprising

nice

tks

 

[Yūsuke1]

Sorry but the caracteres are already chosen

List? =DD

 

[Scorps]

List? =DD

You shall have to keep reading ^^

 

[Mephistopheles]

Awesome! +rep ^_^

 

[Wesobi]

Why does everyone enjoy my agony

 

[Jokey]

Awesome =DD

 

[Akiza]

very nice scorps (bout time i get linked to something that isnt a training thread >.>)

and jeez, overkill on the flattery of me much? i would say im very skilled but perhaps not as powerful as rei xD

though i really do like it overall...me v izuna...hmmm....i dont think ive ever had the pleasure of fighting izuna yet, or in my time faced him in the battle arena, though we were both ABO at one time (before the ninja world system and all of this xD)

overall, very nice and keep it up ^^

 

[Scorps]

very nice scorps (bout time i get linked to something that isnt a training thread >.>)

and jeez, overkill on the flattery of me much? i would say im very skilled but perhaps not as powerful as rei xD

though i really do like it overall...me v izuna...hmmm....i dont think ive ever had the pleasure of fighting izuna yet, or in my time faced him in the battle arena, though we were both ABO at one time (before the ninja world system and all of this xD)

overall, very nice and keep it up ^^

Tks! Next chappie will be awesome! Just need to write it :| lol

 

[Wesobi]

Write it :|

 

[Scorps]

Write it :|

I will :| Too much going on right now. I have worked a bit on it but still need to finish the details

 

[Zwei]

this just became one of my favorite fan fictions around here. O__O

excellent work, sensei. =DD

 

[hawaiianmike]

No don't kidnap Wesobi, he's teaching me how to drown people! lol
Anyway nice fan fic Scorps, good imagery.

 

[Bimbonium]

Nice......

 

[Osmon]

All Hail Lord POP SAMA U_U

 

[ItachiDaSoloKing]

Very Good. As expected.