the tale of the fourth "3"

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The Tale Of The Fourth
chapter "3" : The Element Of Speed "2"
Mission failed



As one fall, another stands.. it's the circle of life that all of us obey, thats why we live our life building the next generation, they will build thier next generation..

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Minato still can't believe what had just happened, how could his rival protect him, he suppose to be hurt him, suddenly zarami fell down over minato ...
" zarami, why ? " whispered minato confusedly
" .. because .. i can't let others kill you before i do, hah .. i hate being a sharingan user .. to be able to see things moving slowly, and give you enough time to think over it a thousand times .. at the end, it was you the reason .. the reason of my .. " said zarami as he fainted .
Minato was still shocked and stunned, hearing the enemy running away .. as Tori appeared with Kushina "minato .. what happened ?" he asked
But minato could not reply as kushina set near him and began healing zarami.. " you bathetic scum .. what did you do to him ? " she shouted at Minato as the mist began disappearing.

Then tori grabbed minato from his neck and hold him up "what happened ?? tell me now !" he whispered coldly "who attacked zarami? "

minato waked up from the shock and looked at tori saying " the prisoner .. Mikoasaki .. "

" .. but how did he attack ?? all of his energy were sealed before we got out of the village ! " said Tori

"they must have release it .." said minato as tori dropped him saying "so you were attacked .. and they used the mist to blind you .. "
"yes and they shouldn't be away from here now" Minato answered "lets get after them"
" no we are calling backups first " argued Tori
" i will do that .. you two go ahead " said Kushina seriously
" ok lets go then .. minato .. " Tori agreed as they ran out
" i hope you got enough money to pay for the damages " the chief of the restaurant said to Kushina looking at him with a smile :D and made a hand seal to teleport with zarami .

Tori began making hand seals at the forest then he slam his palm over a tree summoning 5 dogs of different sizes that kept on running with them "so .. why did you summon us?" said the small one running near Tori as he replied "we need you to track this scent"

"alright" the dogs said at once after smelling a shirt with Tori, as they were running through the forest .

"they are near" the small dog said after a while the six ninjas appeared with Mikoasaki in ahead of them, Tori shouted "stop right there!"

"so The White Fang finally came" said Mikoasaki as they approached them,
"so you knew it was me" Tori asked "then you must heard of my powers"

" yeah .. i know all about your powers ... attack ! " said Mikoasaki
" shadow clone jutsu " said Tori making a hand seal evoke 4 clones that attacks the six others while Minato made hand seals then slapped the ground summoning Gamabunta who shouted "Minato .. why did you summon me?"

"i can't lose this battle .. gamabunta, please help me !" Mianto said as he jumped over gamabunta.
"well it's my tea time .. but what the hell i still would like to crush some insects" Gamabunta replied as he got his sword out .

The clones bodies were so flexible so thier taijutsus attack was impressive that it didn't took long before they defeat the six ninjas, Mikoasaki shouted "lets kill you NOW Tori"

"you got it" said Tori as he released lightning bolts at Mikoasaki but it were dodged easily by him as he got his sword out and appeared next to Tori in a glance aiming his sword to kill him .. at the same second a guy appeared next to them with a kunai that stopped Mikoasaki's sword "huh .. so .. you are still a live .. Mikoasaki .." he said with a cold tune
"YOU ?!" said Mikoasaki confusingly
"yes, me" said the man as wind began spinning around them making Tori fly back "what is happening ?" he wondered.

" your battle with him has ended go away and take your student with you" said the man
" but our mission is to get him safe to- " Tori tried to say, but the man interrupt him "no, don't stay here for another moment, or i will consider you an enemy of mine"

Gamabunta ate the six ninjas as minato jumped down throwing three kunais at the man and Mikoasaki, but in one glance the kunais turned to ice and got destroyed "you really got nerve to attack us like that kid!!, you mikoasaki .. i will end everything with you now " the man yelled as the two of them disappeared within a tornado, Tori and Minato run away with Gamabunta who disappeared saying " hmmph "

they returned back to Kushina and zarami who seemed to be recovered "zarami !" yelled Minato "how are you now?"

"i am good, what happened with the prisoner?" asked zamari
"someone came and he is fighting him now in a tornado" said Tori
" but our mission?!" said kushina
" i know .. " said Tori
"so what should we do[ ?/COLOR]" zamari said
" tori sensei .. i want to go to that battle .. i can use wind element so it wont be hard for me to get inside it .." Minato suggeset
"NOWAY" said kushina "you can't just go there, you will get killed"
"no you can't" said Tori
"i insist" he said while making the hand seals and slap his palm on the ground screaming "summoning jutsu" as Gamaken appeared "Gamaken please don't let anyone fallow me" as he run back to the battle leaving Gamaken pushing everyone back "as clumsy as i am, i shall do as you want" gamaken replied.

Minato focused his wind chakra and jumped through inside the tornado, he opened his eyes watching Mikoasaki layed over the ground and that man holding a sword over Mikoasaki's neck, "give me back the scroll now.. "
"noway, not after what i get through, i was imprisoned for more than 10 years for them .. you cant just take them after all! " yelled Mikoasaki
"hehe, you scum" said the man as he make an ice sword that he directed toward Mikoasaki as Minato came and stopped it with a fallen sword nearby.
"you kid seriously think you can stop me, you really want to die! don't you?!" the man yelled as his ice sword transformed to needles that cut Minato and Mikoasaki, and destroyed that sword Minato's .
"ahh" whispered Mikoasaki as he fainted with blood all over his body
"you see, you can't stop me, no one can .. " the man said
"you had just get my mission failed, i must assure you that you will regret it " whispered minato as he get his hand in the moving wind of the tornado making an rasengen out of it which is more focused than before and larger making Minato's yellow hair waves with his power .." now i shall revenge for him .. RASENGEN !" as he hit that rasengen "ah .. good jutsu, but not complete as i see" the man said as the rasengen send him flying back "anyway, i will let you live .. to see how you will grow up .."
" STOP PLAYING GOD !" screamed Minato
"no am not a god, i am .. Koasaki, remember this name .. we will meet soon enough .. see yiah around " the man said as he disappeared in the waving wind of his tornado .
"hey .. kid .." whispered Mikoasaki "come here .."
"what!!! .. are you ok?" said Minato
"no.. i won't survive .. i knew it, but you, you need everything you can get for the hard feature you shall have, Koasaki has interests on you somehow.. and that won't be easy to overcome, so you should have the scroll hidden inside me .. i am dieing so release it before anyone come"

"what?!!! .." said Minato confusedly.
"as you heard me, now release it !" Mikoasaki murmured
" but .. " said Minato but Mikoasaki insest saying "DO IT NOW!"
Minato start making hand seals then slap his palm over Mikoasaki releasing a scroll of all the sealing drawn on Mikoasaki's body "ahh .. good now hide it" Mikoasaki hissed "good bye .. kid" ...

Weeks later ...

"good Minato" said Jarayia "now do it again with more focusing !"
"no sensei .. i want to have a break .." said Minato as he went to a nearby tree and opened a scroll with the title of " The Element Of Speed "


NeXt Chapter : kushina.
 

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next stop is fanfic contest :D

hope u all like it and please comment ;)
i need everyone's opinion
plz don't spam coz i want this thread to be clean
 

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Hmmm....it would take me perhaps an hour to sort out all the mistakes...U_U
At least capitilize and spell things right...:| It makes me want to redo the entire thing....U_U More people wits read it and you probably will get flamed less too. :|
 

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Nice work, you should pay more attention to your punctuation though, like capital letters, commas etc.

Btw; Edit your post in the ffotm thread. :p
 
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lol .. well story is gud !1
thanx ali :D

Nice work, you should pay more attention to your punctuation though, like capital letters, commas etc.

Btw; Edit your post in the ffotm thread. :p
yeah, this chapter took al my time since the last chapter so u see, I WORKED LIKE HELL OVER IT !!! ;)
anyway thanx, and am gonna edit it now :p
 

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nice chapter as always...we saw some good action in this chp..

but i want to ask u something ?..when minato formed rasengan, how did the man realized that it is not complete?? (do the man know about that jutsu?)
 

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thanx :D

no he didn't, but great ninjas knows if the jutsu that is in use is complete or not by several points like the distruction, does it make the user weak ..etc " like when minato was with kakashi and he formed a chidori, minato told him that it wasn't complete
 

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thanx :D

no he didn't, but great ninjas knows if the jutsu that is in use is complete or not by several points like the distruction, does it make the user weak ..etc " like when minato was with kakashi and he formed a chidori, minato told him that it wasn't complete
aha nice ...so the man is a great ninja..i am waiting to see his clash with minato
 
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