The Tale Of The Fourth "2"

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The Tale Of The Fourth
chapter "2" : The Element Of Speed " 1"
Zamari's Sacrifice


We all want to protect the ones we dear, and even get over are straight limit for defending any pain that may be caused to them, but the question is .. are we fast enough to protect them all in the same time ?

" there is suppose to be an manga like wallpaper here but i cant find it >.< "

In the darkness of konoha, the door of the hokage office has been opened.. " hokage-sama .. you summoned me ?! " said an anbu with long white hair to the third hokage " yes.. you got a new mission .. an S-rank mission .. you must lead this mission with some randomly chosen chuunin toward The Land Hidden in The Mist " continued the hokage

" so its an jounin mission .. " the anbu thought as the hokage continued " the mission of retrieving mikorasaki " said the hokage

" HIM ??! " yelled the anbu even more confusingly then he was before

" yes .. Him .. " continued the hokage " Is there something bothering you about it ? "
" no but are you sure you want to send chuunin for a mission like this one " asked the anbu
" They are best chuunin of Konoha yet .. " said the hokage " but this is not the whole mission for you, you must kill him when you got near the mist .. "
" i see but .." asked the anbu " they still might return him his powers "
" .. remember he is dangerous .. don't let anyone feels that you killed him even the chuunins with you " said the hokage
" ok sir .. but what should i be called ? " asked the anbu
" hmm .. lets say .. tori " answered the hokage " now you are dismissed, remember i will be calling you tomorrow " as the anbu made an handseal and disappeared .

Its been six months since minato started making his new jutsu and so far he can only make an bubble that only explode with an limited wind blast U_U .

" hah .. why the hell this jutsu doesn't get any better from ages " said minato to himself while making another rasengen and blast it over the tree in the training field .. " this is the greatest time of the year .. the great summer .. i don't know why i feel its the worst but anyway .. sensei is out on an ((Sannin Mission)) <.< and my team are still genin so we don't really meet together because each one of us is training on his own training >.>' so am lifted now U_U , kind of boring but.. that how it is .." thought minato while expressing more chakra and making another rasengen that exploded in his face " too bad that the town has run out of water balloons because they are not used to this item being bought bought .. "

suddenly Zarami appeared from the bushes and said " mianto .. the hokage order me to call you "
" ok >.< " said minato confusingly as he made an hand seal and teleport to the hokage's mansion and walked to the office where he entered saying " hokage-sama .. did you call me ? "

" yes minato .. i called you .. there is a new mission for you " said the hokage " your mission to protect this prisoner till you all get to the mist "

" but my team is separated now .. " said minato
" i know that's why i made this mission an team .. " said the hokage " you, Zamari Uchiha and Kushina Uzumaki with tori as the mission's leader .. " as an white haired handsome man appear wearing jounin clothes " greetings minato ! am tori .. hope we enjoy this mission together " he said with an cheerful smile ..
" ok so zamari is coming .. and who ? " asked minato
" ME ! " yelled the red haired girl that attacked him before
" you are that girl ?? " said minato confusingly but tori said fast " ALRIGHT THEN.. lets get moving " as they got out of the office to the gate and find zarami waiting there " wait a minute i will get the prisoner " said the man as he teleported " so your name is kushina U_U , why did you attacked me that time ? "
" it was fun " said kushina smiling
" you attacked him already kushina ^_^ " said zarami
" yes :p " said kushina as tori returned with an weird looking guy that has sealing marks all over his body " this is mikorasaki, the man we are teleporting .. " said tori but the man didn't commented " ok then lets go ^_^ " he continued.
" Finally .. " said zamari as they began walking through the fields from grass to mountains .. " so am stuck with you now ?! >_> " whispered zamari to minato .. " i don't want to be with you .. hokage ordered me to be in this mission and that's the only reason am not talking about your smell <.~ " answered minato

" what smell ?" said kushina " i don't smell anything, maybe it's your smell xd " as she and zarami laughed .. " stop that, you are a team remember .. now focus on are mission "
" ok " said zarami as he activate his sharingan and looked around while they all kept walking ...

they stopped to have a break at an restaurant and so zarami and minato stayed near the prisoner while tori and kushina went to a nearby store to buy some drinks ... they waited for a long time then from nowhere six ninjas appeared making the hidden mist jutsu, so zamari activates his sharingans while minato get two kunais out, four of them attacked zarami how dodged and attacked them one by one as minato throw kunais at them and defeat them while they look back finding out that mikoasaki was missed then heard a voice in the mist " say bye to your sensei kids for me .. mist style : stream slashes ! " as two mist fused with wind waves came fast toward them, zarami dodged it but minato couldn't and closed his eyes ... am liquid got over minato's face so he opened his eyes slowly expecting it to be his death, but unfortunately it was zarami's blood ...

 

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because they can see things and realize them faster O.O
and in this case, sasuke and naruto are the ones like minato and zarami
btw : this mission got alot to keep on in 3 which am gonna post it in those two days
this chapter is nothing like wats coming
 

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O_O Send me the Microsoft Word or something....>_> I seriously hate reading stuff typed like that. Anyhow, it was a good chapter...O_O Keep it up. xd
 

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not a bad fanfic tcs
thanx sis :D

chapter was good .. but few mistakes ..

Sharingan cant see in Mist U_U
its not in the blind mist mode, just a mist coz mikoasak's jutsus are mist attacks

O_O Send me the Microsoft Word or something....>_> I seriously hate reading stuff typed like that. Anyhow, it was a good chapter...O_O Keep it up. xd
hehe, i write it here in the new thread section, sure i can allways keep on editing it for more then 3 times O.O, but sorry i wont send it to u and i told u y ... anyway thanx for helping bro ! :D that was kind of an fantastic thing to do to others
 

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cooool..nice chapter dude...i think next chapter will be the best

i think there is some mistakes like:

-some times you write (zarami) and times (zamari)
-and in the last paragraph i didn't understand it compeletly
 

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cooool..nice chapter dude...i think next chapter will be the best

i think there is some mistakes like:

-some times you write (zarami) and times (zamari)
-and in the last paragraph i didn't understand it compeletly
yea i thought i would do such thing .. buts its zamari
its a hard name o keep writing
.. hmmm y ?

nice one basel :)
keep up the good work :)
am willing to
and thanx

i think u should stick with fanfcs! :D
heheh .. thanx :D great that you like it
3 will be down soon too
 

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Using internet emoticons in a fanfic that's supposed to be serious
That just proves what a ****ing cretin you are
this fanfic is so lame i wouldnt wipe my ass with it
 
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