The Tale Of The Fourth "1"

[Seblax]

u can allways say ur opinion ppl ;P

 

[Gatsndshanks]

You gotta love microsoft word and its correction tools

 

[Xylon]

Its pretty good if u ask me
i would suggest you add more intellect in his tales and try to keep the audience interested as it is now
GL in future chapters and do tell me about them as on NB im perhaps Minato's biggest fan

 

[Seblax]

@ gat : no i dont use them, but nice try dummy

@ dark : am planing that too, and u cant be more then me , the next chapter will e epic and the theird is gonna be kinda romance .. as far as i am planing it .. but the proplem is .. the next one is sooo long