[Predictions] The strongest and most dangerous

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Kishi Uzumaki

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Page 1
Chapter starts with obito and naruto staring at each other .

Sasuke : you ?
Minato kcm clone : obito you why did you ?
(obito keep staring at naruto)
Sasuke : why doesn't he respond to anything .

Page 2
Obito : because i'm not interested in you . you traitor (thinks) jubbi was controlling me in first few seconds? i was weak . if i didn't had rinnegan it might have been impossible to defy it's control and that damn madara .
sasuke : hm
Naruto : juubi was controlling him . now he has taken control again .
Madara : did he noticed what I'm up to.

Page 3
(obito suddenly appear where madara is )
Madara : obito .
Obito : you think i can't see what you up to ?
(Panal shows madara in pieces . in moment obito appears right in front of naruto and kicks into his abdomen )
Naruto :oh , this fast ?

Page 4
All alliance and naruto's friends are stunned .
(obito appears above naruto to kick him again)
Minato : are you ok ? son
Sakura : naruto are you ok ?
Naruto : (splits blood and painfully) Yeah .

page 5
Minato : i will take care of him for now . (to sakura) take care of him for now .
Sakura : (comes to naruto) yes .
Sasuke :(comes where naruto is) naruto .you are weak as always .
Naruto : that speed i couldn't even move .
sasuke :even with my sharingan i couldn't see what happening ? (stares at obito)

Page 6

( minato with his clone clashing obito . obito gaining the upper hand as his cut down minato's kcm clone)
Minato : he is fast .even with kyubbi chakra i can't keep up with him .
obito : you worth of your name yellow flash .
Minato : obito you why are you doing this .
(obito cuts minato left arm off . minato jumps behind as his hand regenerates)
Obito : why sensei can't keep up .

Page 7

Sakura : naruto ! did he called your dad . sensei ?
sasuke : (looks back)
Naruto : yes . my dad was his and kakashi's sensei .
Minato : (while fighting obito) sasuke . shoot your arrows at him but be careful he will come after you
Sasuke : yes . susano'o ( activates his full form susano'o and jumps)
Kurama : naruto ! I'm ready to go .

Page 8

Naruto : sakura-chan ! it's enough
(Naruto stands up and go full kyubbi)
Sakura :(looks at both naruto and sasuke)(thinks) i thought i was in your level but -
Naruto : come here . sakura-chan (grabs sakura with a chakra arm and takes in to his cloak) you analyze the situation
from here . it will be hard to fight him and analyze at the same time .

Page 9

shikamaru : what about us ?
Naruto : you and others wait .
Kiba : we are not gonna hold back .
Akamaru : hm . hm .
Kiba : what is it akamaru ?
Naruto : when he become weak . then you can attack him .
Hinata : naruto-kun is right we must listen to him .


Page 10

Naruto : thanks . hinata . (to alliance) you fall back and take cover .
Sakura : naruto . hurry . sasuke-kun and your dad need help .
Naruto : yes . (shouts) dad,sasuke I'm coming .
(edo's are regenerating)
Hashirama : what speed is this ?
Tobirama : you had never fought a opponent this strong brother .
Madara : hashirama . me and the kyubbi was the your strongest opponent .


Page 11

Tobirama : it's your fault he is like that .
Madara : hm . it's because of you I'm like this .
(stares at tobirama)
Hashirama :(angrily) stop it . (tempers his chakra)
(sweat fall from tobirama)
Madara : you can't scare me hashirama besides I'm stronger than you .
Hashirama : it doesn't matter who is strong . we have to stop him .


Page !2


Madara : why would i help you ?
Hashirama : he is dangerous even to you .
Hiruzan : hashirama-sama we have to hurry minato and others want be able to hold much longer .
Hashirama : what you gonna do .madara !
Tobirama : he want help . brother let's go .
(panel hashi and madara looking at each other)
Hashirama :(Turns) let's go .

Page 13

(in kamui demension)

Kakashi : this body parts appearing here is different than before . what happened to obito .
(panel shows obito's body part appearing)
(kakashi tries to stand up)
Kakashi : ugh . this wound is deep and i can't use kamui again . i will get paralyzed right away .
(remember naruto's and old obito's smile)
Kakashi : i must use it one more time . (standup) kamui
(appears in battlefield and falls to the ground)

Page 14

Guy : kakashi ! are you . OK ?
Kakashi : guy . what happening here ?
Shikamaru : madara tried to get himself revived but that obito guy become the juubi's jinchuraki .
Kakashi :(shocked) what happened to naruto and sakura ?
Shikamaru : they are fighting along with sasuke and naruto's father .
Kakashi :(surprised) sensei !!!


Page 15

Guy : yes . yellow flash is fighting . obito .
Shikamaru : other hokages are there too . they are no match for him .
Kakashi : i got to help them too . (tries to stand up)
Shizune : Kakashi-san . wait i will heal you .
Kakashi : hurry up shizune .
Ino : i will help too .
shizune : ino !
Ino : besides i can't lose to that ugly forehead .


Page 16

(Tsunade and others appears in the battlefield)
Tsunade : you bastard madara .
Madara : (looks behind) hm .
Tsunade : this is for trying to kill me .
(punch madara sending him meters away)
Orichimaru : you will never change tsunade .
Madara : how did you survived . i left you in critical condition ?
Onoki : you underestimated us madara .

Page 17


(scene changes to minato and other fighting obito .)
Naruto :(panting) he is too strong .
Sasuke :(pants and thinks) this pain is unbearable but i must follow itachi's will .
sakura : this is getting dragged . what we will do naruto ?
Kurama : Naruto switch
Kurama through naruto : we have a chance still . he's not as powerful as sage .
Obito : Kyubbi . I'm the strongest and most dangerous you will be mine sooner .
Kages : like we will let you .


What will happen to them . will they be able to defeat obito
The end .
 
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Failed horribly with Sasuke...nice try though. Lol no one can get that guys emotions down, its like controlling a black hole.
 

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that would be something to see.
 

Atalaya

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Did Sakura really had to cry:nuts:
I really hope she doesn't for real.
Some lines were kind of off:(
 

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Lol I don't see the kages talking big like that after their fodderization by Madara.
 

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No offense but im going to be honest.
This was uhm.. kinda bad. :l

I apologize though
 

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Failed when minato bring naruto to sakura XD
 

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nice job !
I really enjoyed reading it !
 

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It was okay. Would have been better if I didn't have to translate the terrible grammar and spelling in my head.
 

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I liked is as usual, though Sakura was a bit underrated, she haven't even showed her yin seal abilities yet to tell them she isn't on their level, but i liked it. <3
 

Kishi Uzumaki

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I liked is as usual, though Sakura was a bit underrated, she haven't even showed her yin seal abilities yet to tell them she isn't on their level, but i liked it. <3

she was only going to think that way but got cut off by naruto .
 

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your opinions are appreciated i will try better myself next time .
 
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