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Page 1
Chapter starts with obito and naruto staring at each other .
Sasuke : you ?
Minato kcm clone : obito you why did you ?
(obito keep staring at naruto)
Sasuke : why doesn't he respond to anything .
Page 2
Obito : because i'm not interested in you . you traitor (thinks) jubbi was controlling me in first few seconds? i was weak . if i didn't had rinnegan it might have been impossible to defy it's control and that damn madara .
sasuke : hm
Naruto : juubi was controlling him . now he has taken control again .
Madara : did he noticed what I'm up to.
Page 3
(obito suddenly appear where madara is )
Madara : obito .
Obito : you think i can't see what you up to ?
(Panal shows madara in pieces . in moment obito appears right in front of naruto and kicks into his abdomen )
Naruto
h , this fast ?
Page 4
All alliance and naruto's friends are stunned .
(obito appears above naruto to kick him again)
Minato : are you ok ? son
Sakura : naruto are you ok ?
Naruto : (splits blood and painfully) Yeah .
page 5
Minato : i will take care of him for now . (to sakura) take care of him for now .
Sakura : (comes to naruto) yes .
Sasukecomes where naruto is) naruto .you are weak as always .
Naruto : that speed i couldn't even move .
sasuke :even with my sharingan i couldn't see what happening ? (stares at obito)
Page 6
( minato with his clone clashing obito . obito gaining the upper hand as his cut down minato's kcm clone)
Minato : he is fast .even with kyubbi chakra i can't keep up with him .
obito : you worth of your name yellow flash .
Minato : obito you why are you doing this .
(obito cuts minato left arm off . minato jumps behind as his hand regenerates)
Obito : why sensei can't keep up .
Page 7
Sakura : naruto ! did he called your dad . sensei ?
sasuke : (looks back)
Naruto : yes . my dad was his and kakashi's sensei .
Minato : (while fighting obito) sasuke . shoot your arrows at him but be careful he will come after you
Sasuke : yes . susano'o ( activates his full form susano'o and jumps)
Kurama : naruto ! I'm ready to go .
Page 8
Naruto : sakura-chan ! it's enough
(Naruto stands up and go full kyubbi)
Sakuralooks at both naruto and sasuke)(thinks) i thought i was in your level but -
Naruto : come here . sakura-chan (grabs sakura with a chakra arm and takes in to his cloak) you analyze the situation
from here . it will be hard to fight him and analyze at the same time .
Page 9
shikamaru : what about us ?
Naruto : you and others wait .
Kiba : we are not gonna hold back .
Akamaru : hm . hm .
Kiba : what is it akamaru ?
Naruto : when he become weak . then you can attack him .
Hinata : naruto-kun is right we must listen to him .
Page 10
Naruto : thanks . hinata . (to alliance) you fall back and take cover .
Sakura : naruto . hurry . sasuke-kun and your dad need help .
Naruto : yes . (shouts) dad,sasuke I'm coming .
(edo's are regenerating)
Hashirama : what speed is this ?
Tobirama : you had never fought a opponent this strong brother .
Madara : hashirama . me and the kyubbi was the your strongest opponent .
Page 11
Tobirama : it's your fault he is like that .
Madara : hm . it's because of you I'm like this .
(stares at tobirama)
Hashiramaangrily) stop it . (tempers his chakra)
(sweat fall from tobirama)
Madara : you can't scare me hashirama besides I'm stronger than you .
Hashirama : it doesn't matter who is strong . we have to stop him .
Page !2
Madara : why would i help you ?
Hashirama : he is dangerous even to you .
Hiruzan : hashirama-sama we have to hurry minato and others want be able to hold much longer .
Hashirama : what you gonna do .madara !
Tobirama : he want help . brother let's go .
(panel hashi and madara looking at each other)
HashiramaTurns) let's go .
Page 13
(in kamui demension)
Kakashi : this body parts appearing here is different than before . what happened to obito .
(panel shows obito's body part appearing)
(kakashi tries to stand up)
Kakashi : ugh . this wound is deep and i can't use kamui again . i will get paralyzed right away .
(remember naruto's and old obito's smile)
Kakashi : i must use it one more time . (standup) kamui
(appears in battlefield and falls to the ground)
Page 14
Guy : kakashi ! are you . OK ?
Kakashi : guy . what happening here ?
Shikamaru : madara tried to get himself revived but that obito guy become the juubi's jinchuraki .
Kakashishocked) what happened to naruto and sakura ?
Shikamaru : they are fighting along with sasuke and naruto's father .
Kakashisurprised) sensei !!!
Page 15
Guy : yes . yellow flash is fighting . obito .
Shikamaru : other hokages are there too . they are no match for him .
Kakashi : i got to help them too . (tries to stand up)
Shizune : Kakashi-san . wait i will heal you .
Kakashi : hurry up shizune .
Ino : i will help too .
shizune : ino !
Ino : besides i can't lose to that ugly forehead .
Page 16
(Tsunade and others appears in the battlefield)
Tsunade : you bastard madara .
Madara : (looks behind) hm .
Tsunade : this is for trying to kill me .
(punch madara sending him meters away)
Orichimaru : you will never change tsunade .
Madara : how did you survived . i left you in critical condition ?
Onoki : you underestimated us madara .
Page 17
(scene changes to minato and other fighting obito .)
Narutopanting) he is too strong .
Sasukepants and thinks) this pain is unbearable but i must follow itachi's will .
sakura : this is getting dragged . what we will do naruto ?
Kurama : Naruto switch
Kurama through naruto : we have a chance still . he's not as powerful as sage .
Obito : Kyubbi . I'm the strongest and most dangerous you will be mine sooner .
Kages : like we will let you .
What will happen to them . will they be able to defeat obito
The end .
Chapter starts with obito and naruto staring at each other .
Sasuke : you ?
Minato kcm clone : obito you why did you ?
(obito keep staring at naruto)
Sasuke : why doesn't he respond to anything .
Page 2
Obito : because i'm not interested in you . you traitor (thinks) jubbi was controlling me in first few seconds? i was weak . if i didn't had rinnegan it might have been impossible to defy it's control and that damn madara .
sasuke : hm
Naruto : juubi was controlling him . now he has taken control again .
Madara : did he noticed what I'm up to.
Page 3
(obito suddenly appear where madara is )
Madara : obito .
Obito : you think i can't see what you up to ?
(Panal shows madara in pieces . in moment obito appears right in front of naruto and kicks into his abdomen )
Naruto
h , this fast ?Page 4
All alliance and naruto's friends are stunned .
(obito appears above naruto to kick him again)
Minato : are you ok ? son
Sakura : naruto are you ok ?
Naruto : (splits blood and painfully) Yeah .
page 5
Minato : i will take care of him for now . (to sakura) take care of him for now .
Sakura : (comes to naruto) yes .
Sasuke
comes where naruto is) naruto .you are weak as always .Naruto : that speed i couldn't even move .
sasuke :even with my sharingan i couldn't see what happening ? (stares at obito)
Page 6
( minato with his clone clashing obito . obito gaining the upper hand as his cut down minato's kcm clone)
Minato : he is fast .even with kyubbi chakra i can't keep up with him .
obito : you worth of your name yellow flash .
Minato : obito you why are you doing this .
(obito cuts minato left arm off . minato jumps behind as his hand regenerates)
Obito : why sensei can't keep up .
Page 7
Sakura : naruto ! did he called your dad . sensei ?
sasuke : (looks back)
Naruto : yes . my dad was his and kakashi's sensei .
Minato : (while fighting obito) sasuke . shoot your arrows at him but be careful he will come after you
Sasuke : yes . susano'o ( activates his full form susano'o and jumps)
Kurama : naruto ! I'm ready to go .
Page 8
Naruto : sakura-chan ! it's enough
(Naruto stands up and go full kyubbi)
Sakura
looks at both naruto and sasuke)(thinks) i thought i was in your level but -Naruto : come here . sakura-chan (grabs sakura with a chakra arm and takes in to his cloak) you analyze the situation
from here . it will be hard to fight him and analyze at the same time .
Page 9
shikamaru : what about us ?
Naruto : you and others wait .
Kiba : we are not gonna hold back .
Akamaru : hm . hm .
Kiba : what is it akamaru ?
Naruto : when he become weak . then you can attack him .
Hinata : naruto-kun is right we must listen to him .
Page 10
Naruto : thanks . hinata . (to alliance) you fall back and take cover .
Sakura : naruto . hurry . sasuke-kun and your dad need help .
Naruto : yes . (shouts) dad,sasuke I'm coming .
(edo's are regenerating)
Hashirama : what speed is this ?
Tobirama : you had never fought a opponent this strong brother .
Madara : hashirama . me and the kyubbi was the your strongest opponent .
Page 11
Tobirama : it's your fault he is like that .
Madara : hm . it's because of you I'm like this .
(stares at tobirama)
Hashirama
angrily) stop it . (tempers his chakra)(sweat fall from tobirama)
Madara : you can't scare me hashirama besides I'm stronger than you .
Hashirama : it doesn't matter who is strong . we have to stop him .
Page !2
Madara : why would i help you ?
Hashirama : he is dangerous even to you .
Hiruzan : hashirama-sama we have to hurry minato and others want be able to hold much longer .
Hashirama : what you gonna do .madara !
Tobirama : he want help . brother let's go .
(panel hashi and madara looking at each other)
Hashirama
Turns) let's go .Page 13
(in kamui demension)
Kakashi : this body parts appearing here is different than before . what happened to obito .
(panel shows obito's body part appearing)
(kakashi tries to stand up)
Kakashi : ugh . this wound is deep and i can't use kamui again . i will get paralyzed right away .
(remember naruto's and old obito's smile)
Kakashi : i must use it one more time . (standup) kamui
(appears in battlefield and falls to the ground)
Page 14
Guy : kakashi ! are you . OK ?
Kakashi : guy . what happening here ?
Shikamaru : madara tried to get himself revived but that obito guy become the juubi's jinchuraki .
Kakashi
shocked) what happened to naruto and sakura ?Shikamaru : they are fighting along with sasuke and naruto's father .
Kakashi
surprised) sensei !!!Page 15
Guy : yes . yellow flash is fighting . obito .
Shikamaru : other hokages are there too . they are no match for him .
Kakashi : i got to help them too . (tries to stand up)
Shizune : Kakashi-san . wait i will heal you .
Kakashi : hurry up shizune .
Ino : i will help too .
shizune : ino !
Ino : besides i can't lose to that ugly forehead .
Page 16
(Tsunade and others appears in the battlefield)
Tsunade : you bastard madara .
Madara : (looks behind) hm .
Tsunade : this is for trying to kill me .
(punch madara sending him meters away)
Orichimaru : you will never change tsunade .
Madara : how did you survived . i left you in critical condition ?
Onoki : you underestimated us madara .
Page 17
(scene changes to minato and other fighting obito .)
Naruto
panting) he is too strong .Sasuke
pants and thinks) this pain is unbearable but i must follow itachi's will .sakura : this is getting dragged . what we will do naruto ?
Kurama : Naruto switch
Kurama through naruto : we have a chance still . he's not as powerful as sage .
Obito : Kyubbi . I'm the strongest and most dangerous you will be mine sooner .
Kages : like we will let you .
What will happen to them . will they be able to defeat obito
The end .
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