The story of Uchiha Madara part 2

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OK SO... I AM BACK HOPE YOU ALL ENJOY THE SECOND CHAPTER!!


As he drew the kunai he looked at his best friend for the last time.

Izuna: forgive me…

After these final words his hands were soaked in blood just as his brother’s was several nights ago.

Izuna returned to meet Madara again. It was midnight.

Madara: you little scum what have you done?
Izuna: what the hell are you talking about?
Madara: your chakra is different…its as dark as mine is…

Izuna activated his new Sharingan. It had a different shape than Madara’s.

Izuna: Madara come to your senses…you always said that in the name of power the bigger sacrifices are made…and I never heard you complaining about the fact that you fought with me almost to the death so that we could both awaken our 3 tomoe Sharingan . so why complain now…the senju almost defeated us last time.

Madara: (momentary closed his eyes) Hashirama…their leader…he surely was stronger than us…at least ten days ago that is…anyway what happened, happened…we cant bring the dead back…

Izuna: then what name do you suggest…
Madara: the shape is different…if we have to name this dojutsu that would be…Mangekyou Sharingan…

The next morning.

Some random Uchiha: Madara come right away!!
Madara: (murmuring) what happened?
Uchiha guy: our leader is dead!! He was killed by tobirama senju last night!!
Madara: what??

He rushed to the base where everyone was gathered.

Everybody was whispering things such as “we are done for now” or “who could possibly replace our leader”

Madara: silence!!

Suddenly everyone stopped talking…

Madara: if we panic now we surely are done for!! It’s a war!! An eye for an eye…we will attack them…
Uchiha guy: last time was devastating…
Madara: last time we were defending…now we are going all out…plus…Mangekyou Sharingan!!

He showed his eyes.

Now everyone was whispering “ what is this”, “its no normal Sharingan”…

Madara: its something only me and my brother managed to awaken…listen we can win…with this power…it was this power that enabled me to defeat Idate Yuki…

Uchiha guy: well…we don’t have any other choice do we…I mean they killed our leader…they undoubtedly want to destroy us…

Madara: are you with me?

Everyone activated their Sharingan.

Izuna: I heard that they are moving near the fire country…its not far away…
Madara: Uchiha…lets head out!!

Everyone rushed to the place that was about to become the battlefield.

As the sun rose Hashirama saw an horde of people approaching.

Hashirama: they are here
Tobirama: everyone attack!!

As everyone engaged in battle the most important fights began as well: Madara vs. Hashirama and Izuna vs. Tobirama

Hashirama: so you are the new leader of the Uchiha clan.
Madara: (gave him a furious glare) fire element magnificent fire destruction!!

As a huge mass of flames aimed at Hashirama he tried to defend

Hashirama: wood element wooden shield

10 pillars of wood rose from the ground shielding Hashirama however the flames destroyed the shield without any problem.

After several seconds the flames disappeared. Hashirama was burnt all over. He waved a single hand sign and the wounds instantly healed themselves.
Madara: (so that must be his ultimate healing ability).
Hashirama: earth element sinking earth!!

A pull of mud that sucked everything appeared. Madara jumped to dodge its effect.

Hashirama: wood element storm of a thousand bullets!!

7 wooden pillars appear that break and form tiny wooden bullets that are fired towards Madara.

Madara: (in mid air) fire element inferno destruction!!

The flames burned the bullets before reaching him.

Madara: wind element vacuum attraction!! (Madara has mastered all five elements as he is a skilled Sharingan user)

Hashirama was pulled towards his lake of mud so he cancelled the jutsu in order not to get sucked in.

Hashirama brings out a scroll. He bites his finger and then bleeds over the scroll.

Hashirama: summoning jutsu 3 tails, 4 tails!!

He releases wood from his hands that controls the 2 beasts.
Madara: (shit, he has two tailed beasts under his possession…however there is no time to panic)

Madara: if you think you are the only one who can control a tailed beast you couldn’t be more mistaken.

Hashirama: what?
Madara: summoning jutsu 6 tails!!

Suddenly the eyes of the six tails get the form of a Sharingan.

All three bijuu prepare the biju dama

Both Madara and Hashirama: (screaming) I will definitely not lose!!

The bijuu dama crush a giant explosion rocks the battlefield.

After a while.
Hashirama: (how could he survive such an explosion, I with my medical ninjutsu could barely stay alive)

Madara: ( so he is that strong…time to wrap this up)
Madara: Mangekyou Sharingan!!

Hashirama: (what is that?)

Hashirama spits out blood.

Hashirama: (shit I cant perfectly control two tailed beasts at a time yet)

He undoes the summoning.

Madara’s Mangekyou start to bleed.

Madara: (damn I ll also have to release the summoning)

So he does.

Hashirama: wood element infinite poison forest!!

Hashirama’s ultimate jutsu is released!! Poisonous trees that bring instant death cover the whole area…

Hashirama: (exhausted) finally its over…

Madara: (with the evil smile) hahahahaha!!! Its not going to be that easy

Hashirama: what?? How…how can you still be alive?

Madara: so this is its power in its completed form…susanoo
 

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Ummm...why didn't Hashi just make a forest, why make a sheild that doesn't work and Madara never had 6 tails, Hashi had them all except Kurama, why would Hashi be using these miniscule wood techs, its not Yamato for Pete's sake, and vomiting blood from controlling tailed beast? this is absolutely pathetic trolling, why would Hashi vomit and what time would Madara even get the six tails? he saw it on the way to the Senju territory? And what's with Tobirama assasinating their leader? Nobody even knew what happened that night with Tobirama's large scale Water Release? Perhaps the greatest trolling is Madara mastering the Five Elements, something only Rinnegan can do, why would Bijuudama clash wound Hashi or anybody? Did he stand in the middle? Didn't you watch Naruto and The five Bijuu? As long as nobody is stupid enough to stay in the middle of the clash, nobody gets hurt. Izuna and Madara slaughtered their best friends on the same night in the manga, well...its a fanfic.
 
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dude its a fanfic i am not kishi!! and only to answer to your questions first of all kakashi a non uchiha with one sharingan has mastered four elements: doton,raiton,suiton,katon

second of all madara has just mastered mangekyou sharingan and has still ways to go...if i gave hashirama all of his powers at once it would be ridiculous, like not having anything more about hashirama. whats more i know its a spoiler for the next chap but i intend to have 6 tails given to hashirama as a condition for peace, so senju will have all the bijuu.
finally the bijuu dama is a jutsu so powerfull that it could destroy a whole mountain at once. i know that naruto and tobi didnt get hurt but i think its more realistic after 3 bijuu dama some damage to be inflicted...and as you said its a fanfic
 

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Ummm...why didn't Hashi just make a forest, why make a sheild that doesn't work and Madara never had 6 tails, Hashi had them all except Kurama, why would Hashi be using these miniscule wood techs, its not Yamato for Pete's sake, and vomiting blood from controlling tailed beast? this is absolutely pathetic trolling, why would Hashi vomit and what time would Madara even get the six tails? he saw it on the way to the Senju territory? And what's with Tobirama assasinating their leader? Nobody even knew what happened that night with Tobirama's large scale Water Release? Perhaps the greatest trolling is Madara mastering the Five Elements, something only Rinnegan can do, why would Bijuudama clash wound Hashi or anybody? Did he stand in the middle? Didn't you watch Naruto and The five Bijuu? As long as nobody is stupid enough to stay in the middle of the clash, nobody gets hurt. Izuna and Madara slaughtered their best friends on the same night in the manga, well...its a fanfic.
why would anyone give hashi the powers he had later in life :flaw:, i think this is written very well
 

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Ummm...why didn't Hashi just make a forest, why make a sheild that doesn't work and Madara never had 6 tails, Hashi had them all except Kurama, why would Hashi be using these miniscule wood techs, its not Yamato for Pete's sake, and vomiting blood from controlling tailed beast? this is absolutely pathetic trolling, why would Hashi vomit and what time would Madara even get the six tails? he saw it on the way to the Senju territory? And what's with Tobirama assasinating their leader? Nobody even knew what happened that night with Tobirama's large scale Water Release? Perhaps the greatest trolling is Madara mastering the Five Elements, something only Rinnegan can do, why would Bijuudama clash wound Hashi or anybody? Did he stand in the middle? Didn't you watch Naruto and The five Bijuu? As long as nobody is stupid enough to stay in the middle of the clash, nobody gets hurt. Izuna and Madara slaughtered their best friends on the same night in the manga, well...its a fanfic.
If you don't like his story don't comment, and don't get so mad about it because you are a fanboy. I think he did a good job writing it, and it is hard to stay canon with the manga when you are writing fan-fics.

Also Hashirama is not as great as you make him out to be, he can't control the other tailed beasts he can only suppress their powers.
 
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