The Story of Squad 8. -Chapter one.

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The Story of Squad 8
Chapter one

Jamal VS. Shinjitsu.

Jamal: Ughhh -yawns- What a Beautiful day.

Jamal walks to the window and looks outside.

Jamal: HE GUYS WHERE ARE YOU 2 GOING!

Theos: Don't yell so hard Bro :|

Shinjitsu: We are going to the Training Field remember we have to train today.

Jamal: Oh Shit i forgot Damn I'll be there in a few minute's.

Theos: Whatever Dude...

Jamal: Hope that we gonna learn a Great Jutsu today.

Jamal walks to the Clothes closet and pick some Closthes.
Then Jamal walks to the door and Klick's it open.


Jamal: Mom! I have to go to the training field today i have to Practise for the Mission.

Mom: Ok Honey Just eat your Breakfist.

Mom does some handseals and... some egs and bacon poof on the tabel.

Jamal: Thanks mom.

Jamal eats the Breakfist as fast as he can and run's outside


Jamal: Yahoooooo!

Jamal run's as fast as he can to Training Field.

Jamal: Guys i'm here.

Sin: You little!

Sin jumps high in the air and kick's him into the ground.

Jamal: Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhch!!

Theos & Shinjitsu: Hahahahahahahahahaha.

Jamal Try's to stand up.


Jamal: Why did you do that!

Sin: Because your 1 hour to late egghead!!

Jamal: Sorry but i forgot that we have to train today.

Sin: Not My Problem you Jerk!

Theos: Try to relax Sensei.

Sin: Thanks theos.

Sin: OK! Today we gonna spar with each other.

Sin: No Jutsu's Allowed.

Jamal: Great!

Theos: Hmpfff To easy.

Shinjitsu: Then lets start.

Sin: OK! THEOS VS. ME AND JAMAL VS. SHINJITSU.

Jamal: Ahhh man he is to strong.

Sin: Try it.

Jamal: Ok Shinjitsu lets try it.

Shinjitsu: Bring it on My Friend!

Jamal runs to Shinjitsu and when Jamal is close to Shinjitsu Jamal Try's to hit him but Shinjitsu Dodge it.
Then as quikly he dodged it he try to kick Jamal in his Face with a high kick.
Then when Shinjitsu Kicked Jamal He try to give him a Punch in his face but jamal dodge it and make's a summersault backward.
Then when Shinjitsu Runs at Jamal... Shinjitsu Kick's Jamal 4 time's in the face and 3 times in the stomach.


Sin: Shinjitsu Take it easy on him.

Shinjitsu: Ok Sensai.

Jamal Jumps in the air and when he almost landed he kick's Shinjitsu right on the face as Quikly that Shinjitsu Feeled the kick Jamal make's quik
a Combo he Punch Shinjitsu in the stomach and 4 time's against his right side of his face.
While they are fighting Shinji says.


Shinjitsu: You want to fight like that... then Bring it on Fella.

Shinjitsu Runs at Jamal with a very high speed to jamal and kick's jamal in the balls and 5 time's agains the chin.

Jamal: I will get you for that!

Jamal Runs into a tree and when Shinjitsu is right under the tree Jamal Jumps out the tree and Kick's Shinjitsu with both Legs into the face of shinjitsu.
And when Shinjitsu is kicked in his face he begin to bleed.


Jamal: Are you ok.

When jamal see Shinjitsu opend his eyes Jamal Startled Shinjitsu Kick's jamal as Hard as he can in the chin then you hear Krak.

Sin: Jamal!

Jamal: Awhg!!

Sin: Land her hand on the chin of jamal and begin to heal.

Sin: Are you ok?

Jamal: Yeah.. Yeah i'm fine.

Jamal: Shinjitsu Good work Bro Resp.

Shinjitsu: Sorry bro but you have to become hard you know

Jamal: I know i will train till the end!

End of the Chapter.
Next Chapter: Theos VS. Sin.
 
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lmao, so I will die in Chapter 2 :T_T: it was just too good to be true :T_T:

This the first fanfic I read since ages, I mean it o_O, but anyway, its a great idea and I hope you keep it up, however, you should consider each of are characterizers such as Shinjutsu, he always call others sir and fella, also, sin is far more dangerous when she is angry, trust me, I have been there o_O.
and use more smilies, also don't let your mother get into this fan fic, if you want, make people from konoha or people near to us such as princess GaGa <3 .

I loved it, keep it up and keep linking me :)
 
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