The Storm

[Ryu Kishi]

The Storm​

A storm rages, striking and howling,
Like an animal cast from the
Depths of its cage.

It hungers now to rage away,
Unchained from its leash to
Play with its prey.

A storm of which has never
Been seen, it is a storm
That eats away dreams.

Nothing is spared, nor hopes or joys, they're taken away
Like stolen toys.

The storm does not care
For what it takes, it only wants
To shower you with hate.

For it is not a storm to be seen, this is a storm that howls within.​

 

[Kazehime Seirin]

awesome!ekoms2:

 

[New knight48]

That was a terrific poem dude. Best one I've seen in this website

 

[Ryu Kishi]

awesome!ekoms2:

Thank you!!

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That was a terrific poem dude. Best one I've seen in this website

oh wow! im glad you liked it thanks!

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[Byron123]

The last line was superb, at firs I thought it was a bit generic but the last line really did the trick for me, well done!

 

[SIR HERDERP PRESIDERP SDO]

Excellent use of figurative lanugage, great poem.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

The last line was superb, at firs I thought it was a bit generic but the last line really did the trick for me, well done!

Thanks byron san

Excellent use of figurative lanugage, great poem.

Thanks sir derp sama, i could have did a better job

 

[FunkyFatal]

Good job keep it up.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Good job keep it up.

Thanks

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

One of your best ones cupcake!

Ganbatte ne. :hug:

 

[Ryu Kishi]

One of your best ones cupcake!

Ganbatte ne. :hug:

thanks cupcake:bouncy:

 

[Luciform]

 

[Ryu Kishi]

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[Hotaruko]

:hugg: may our storms carry us through life

wonderful poem one i can relate to most at this time... thus one of my favs <3

 

[Tenshi Hikari]

thanks cupcake:bouncy:

Gomen for dislike, wrong button.

 

[Handsome Jack]

Pony rainbow > storm.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

:hugg: may our storms carry us through life

wonderful poem one i can relate to most at this time... thus one of my favs <3

Aww thanks hoto :hugg:

Pony rainbow > storm.

cake solos your fave jackXD

 

[fiend]

Wonderful poem with undeniable power brother . Really motivating.=D. Great one from you.