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Naruto Fan Fiction
By: Max, Miles, and Casper
X-Reading an object X-Someone talking to me X-Me talking to someone X My thoughts
Background
Chapter 1- Banished
By: Max, Miles, and Casper
X-Reading an object X-Someone talking to me X-Me talking to someone X My thoughts
Background
I'm 12 years old, and I am 5 foot 3 inches. My name is Kai Uzumaki. At the age of 6 me and my brother Takashi Uzumaki lost our parents to a man named Gokishi. Since then we have craved for revenge on for parents. We studied at the academy school to hone are skills. When I was 9 a terrible drought came to our village. Soon there was no food or water for anyone so we were forced to fight each other. One day we went too far and killed our classmates. The village turned on us. We left, but not with ought a prize to make us stronger. We went back to the boys we killed and stole their sharingan. My bother transferred my right eye with the sharingan and I did the same to him. We decided together are destination is Hidden Leaf Village.
Before I left I went to our parent's hidden shrine. There was a stone tablet with a
box underneath. The inscription on the tablet said
"Son, when you're ready take this sword. Use it for justice".
I had read it many times before, but today I thought I was ready to open the box.
I opened it and pulled out a black sword with a note attached to it which read
"This is a preserved fresh sword. You will be able to add any of your own techniques you wish".
I studied the sword. It had a leather hilt and bronze top. The actual sword was something I have never seen before. I packed it up in cloth and left the shrine.
Before I left I went to our parent's hidden shrine. There was a stone tablet with a
box underneath. The inscription on the tablet said
"Son, when you're ready take this sword. Use it for justice".
I had read it many times before, but today I thought I was ready to open the box.
I opened it and pulled out a black sword with a note attached to it which read
"This is a preserved fresh sword. You will be able to add any of your own techniques you wish".
I studied the sword. It had a leather hilt and bronze top. The actual sword was something I have never seen before. I packed it up in cloth and left the shrine.
Chapter 1- Banished
*Hidden Cloud Village*
I walk through the cloud village gate. I feel the eyes staring at me. I hear a yell from the distance.
“I hope you rot Kai, you and your bother.”
I slowly approach the exit. I turn around with anger in my eyes. My sharingan
changes from 1 tomoe to the 2 tomoe. People gasp and start yelling.
''No one wants you! Get out of here!"
I turn back. I start to run and keep running. I realize it starts to become
nightfall. I take out my rations and have a meal. I start to drift off.
“*Nightmare* I slash my kunai at him. He jumps back bleeding from his left arm. I
throw my double shuriken. He blocks the first but was unaware of the second.. He's
stunned and falls to the floor. I finish the job with my kunai. I then grab his face and move my hands to his eye. I open his eye and the sharingan falls into my hand I then put it into a bottle and run away from the scene."
*Somewhere a bit outside of hidden cloud village.*
I wake up at dawn. Thinking I was back in the village and that incident was just a nightmare. I stand up yawning. I open my eye to see the branches of trees. A sudden realization came to me. I'm a wanted criminal now. I pull out my map. I am suppose to meet my brother at the kage's summit. I have about a day's worth of travel left. I pack up only to hear a chuckle from up in the trees. I throw my kunai at the direction of the sound. I look up to see a boy about 2 years older than me holding my kunai.
"So you're a wanted criminal.”
Upon closer look I realize it's a boy from my own village.
I relax a little but still very cautious
“What do you want with me?”
“I want the reward that’s on your head”
I then understand im going to be forced in a fight no matter what. I grab for my shurikens. I realize I couldn’t find my bag.
“Looking for these?”
He holds up my bag of weapons.
He must have grabbed them when I was sleeping.
"My sword"
I still have it attached to my back. I pull it out. The black of the sword glistens from the sun. Time then seems to slow down to a stop. My mind starts have thoughts on what I need to do
*A while later (Couple seconds in real life)*
I pull out my sword and point it at him.
“What’s that going to do to me? I’m the number 1 student in my class.”
I start to focus my chakra into the sword.
My sword starts to grow then zooms towards him at high speeds. It impales him right through the chest.
“Damit…”
Blood spatters across the trees. My sword then slowly retracts to the normal size.
I then re wrap it and start walking towards the kage’s summit. I am still amazed of what I was able to accomplish. I meet up with my brother at the summit. We tell each other our adventures on the way up here.
We rest up knowing we have a big couple days coming up.
I walk through the cloud village gate. I feel the eyes staring at me. I hear a yell from the distance.
“I hope you rot Kai, you and your bother.”
I slowly approach the exit. I turn around with anger in my eyes. My sharingan
changes from 1 tomoe to the 2 tomoe. People gasp and start yelling.
''No one wants you! Get out of here!"
I turn back. I start to run and keep running. I realize it starts to become
nightfall. I take out my rations and have a meal. I start to drift off.
“*Nightmare* I slash my kunai at him. He jumps back bleeding from his left arm. I
throw my double shuriken. He blocks the first but was unaware of the second.. He's
stunned and falls to the floor. I finish the job with my kunai. I then grab his face and move my hands to his eye. I open his eye and the sharingan falls into my hand I then put it into a bottle and run away from the scene."
*Somewhere a bit outside of hidden cloud village.*
I wake up at dawn. Thinking I was back in the village and that incident was just a nightmare. I stand up yawning. I open my eye to see the branches of trees. A sudden realization came to me. I'm a wanted criminal now. I pull out my map. I am suppose to meet my brother at the kage's summit. I have about a day's worth of travel left. I pack up only to hear a chuckle from up in the trees. I throw my kunai at the direction of the sound. I look up to see a boy about 2 years older than me holding my kunai.
"So you're a wanted criminal.”
Upon closer look I realize it's a boy from my own village.
I relax a little but still very cautious
“What do you want with me?”
“I want the reward that’s on your head”
I then understand im going to be forced in a fight no matter what. I grab for my shurikens. I realize I couldn’t find my bag.
“Looking for these?”
He holds up my bag of weapons.
He must have grabbed them when I was sleeping.
"My sword"
I still have it attached to my back. I pull it out. The black of the sword glistens from the sun. Time then seems to slow down to a stop. My mind starts have thoughts on what I need to do
*A while later (Couple seconds in real life)*
I pull out my sword and point it at him.
“What’s that going to do to me? I’m the number 1 student in my class.”
I start to focus my chakra into the sword.
My sword starts to grow then zooms towards him at high speeds. It impales him right through the chest.
“Damit…”
Blood spatters across the trees. My sword then slowly retracts to the normal size.
I then re wrap it and start walking towards the kage’s summit. I am still amazed of what I was able to accomplish. I meet up with my brother at the summit. We tell each other our adventures on the way up here.
We rest up knowing we have a big couple days coming up.
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