The Rise of Killick
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Intro
Killick was born in a small village on the outskirts of the the land of fire. His farther, Zhao, was a former rogue ninja who had once bean a member of the akimichi clan in the village hidden in the leaves. Zhao never explained to his son why he left the village, which always bugged him.
From the age of 5 killicks father trained him in the basic ninja arts of battle, though mainly in the ways of bojutsu, the art of fighting with a bo staff. As he got older he grew stronger and stronger, though he could never rival his father. By the age of 13 he had masted a wide variety of ninjutsu, including the akimichi special arts.
As he grew older he began to make friends with the other villagers the same age as him such as Maxi and Trey. In his spare time he would hang around with them or practice his sparing techniques with them.
Trey
Maxi
From the age of 5 killicks father trained him in the basic ninja arts of battle, though mainly in the ways of bojutsu, the art of fighting with a bo staff. As he got older he grew stronger and stronger, though he could never rival his father. By the age of 13 he had masted a wide variety of ninjutsu, including the akimichi special arts.
As he grew older he began to make friends with the other villagers the same age as him such as Maxi and Trey. In his spare time he would hang around with them or practice his sparing techniques with them.
Trey
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Maxi
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Part 1 - Unfortunate events
One day, killick was out training and messing around with Trey and Maxi. Trey was a sword user, very skilled for a 15 year old, but also very lazy. Maxi on the other hand used nunchucks, though he trained hard, he was aways messing up, hurting himself in some way or another. After training for 2 hours, they all sat around laying by a tree having a break:
Killick: What do you guys wanna do where you're older?
Maxi: I want to travel the world and see all their is to see.
Killick: Yeh, it would be nice to see the world, but i like my home here with my family, what about you Trey?
Trey: Meh, nothing, just go with the flow...
Maxi: You can't live your entire life like that!!!
Trey: Why not? Its worked well for me so far...
Maxi: Thats not how the real world works, you have to plan, you have to work, and...
Killick: Put a sock in it Maxi, you're not going to change his mind you know?
Maxi: Im just trying to help him...
Trey: You really wanna help me?
Maxi:Of corse we are friends!
Trey: The shhh and let me sleep...
Maxi: I give up...
For the next half an hour they all sat around lazily, Trey fell asleep, Maxi was messing around with his nunchucks and Killing lay on his back in the grass staring up at the clouds. Suddently Maxi jumped upright.
Maxi: Guys...!
Trey: What now? I don't wanna hear your life plans...
Maxi: Didn't you hear that?
Killick: Hear what?
Maxi: That explosion?
Trey: What explosion?
Killick: What are you talking about?
Maxi: I just heard an explosion coming from over there... where the village is...
Trey and Killick jumped up onto their feet and up into a tree looking in the direction on the village to see smoke rising from above the trees between them and the village. In a fast motion then lept from the tree grabbing their weapons rushing towards the village
Killick: Maxi, hurry, the village is in trouble
Trey: Who the hell would attack our village, weve never done anything to anyone!
Grabbing his weapons, Maxi rushed after Killick and Trey as they rushed through the trees. As they grew closer to the village they heard more explosions and cries of pain. The more they heard the fast they moved.
After 10 minites of leaping/running through the trees they arrived at the edge of the woods, now able to see the village. Smoke rose from all over the village, it seemed as though the entire village was burning.
After 10 minites of leaping/running through the trees they arrived at the edge of the woods, now able to see the village. Smoke rose from all over the village, it seemed as though the entire village was burning.
Killick: Mother!!! Father!!!
Killick began to move faster. Maxi and Trey tried to keep up but he was too fast for them. Two minites later he was running through the main gate of the village, the guards were lay on the floor dead, covered in blood. Killick fell to his knee and checked their pulses. But it was to late. His emotions overwelming, fear... sadness... anger... hatred all building up inside of him.
Killick ran into the village to his home, desperate to see his parents alive, but when he arrived at his home, his dad lay infront on the broken door on his back, coughing on his own blood. Killing ran to his side kneeling down by his farther.
Killick ran into the village to his home, desperate to see his parents alive, but when he arrived at his home, his dad lay infront on the broken door on his back, coughing on his own blood. Killing ran to his side kneeling down by his farther.
Killick: Dad! What happened! Who did this too you?
Zhao: It was orochimaru... (struggling to say this coughing at the same time)
Killick: But why? What did we ever do to them? Why attack us?
Zhao: Hes looking for someone.... we didnt know who they were, or where they were *cough*.... so he set his ninja known as the sound 4 to destroy the village...
Killick: How could he do this... its not right! Wheres mother? Is she ok...
Zhao: Im sorry son i couldnt protect her... *cough-blood coming out of its mouth*... one of orochimaru's henchmen got to her before i could... i tried to save her... im sorry...
Killick: Its not your fault... its his... Orochimarus...
Zhao: Son look out!
In a swift motion, Zhao had grabbed killick by the shoulders pulling him round, rolling over so hes on top of him. In that moment Killick lost himself, only hearing the sound of blades peicing flesh, though he felt nothing. Only then, when he looked up, hed realised what had happened, seeing a spear sticking through his farthers chest.
Zhao: Im sorry i couldn't save your mother but atleast i could save you...
Zhao fell to the floor at Killicks side...
Zhao: Son, i know you will become a great ninja... im sorry i wont be their for you... ive taught you everything i know, now use it... (his dying words)
Killick: FATHER!!!
Random rogue ninja: heheheheh.... how pathetic....
Anger filled Killick, he felt a burning flame within him...
Killick: What did you say....
With a daemonic look of rage on his face, killick began to stand up, then suddening errupting like flames, waves of chakra began to surround him. The chakra moved wildly like it was out of control. Killick to one last look at his father laying motionless with his eyes closed on the floor with a smile on his face.
Killick: Your gonna pay for that ... with your life
Killicks voice filled hatred. He turned around to face the rogue ninja who was not of the sound 4. The ninja held up a spear prepared to throw it at killick, but before he had chance, killicks spear was being thrusted into his stomac with intense force. In agony, the rogue ninja dropped the spear grabbing his stomac with both hands, but before he knew it there was a smashing force on his back from killicks spear.
Killick: Thats for my mother... and father... and this ones from me!
Killick began spinning his staff above his head, which began to ignite, forming like a helcopter blade of flames. The after spinning it for 5 seconds building out the speed and intense flames he began to swing his staff down at high speeds...
Killick: Feel the pain you caused my family and friends to suffer...
The flaming staff came crashing down on the rogue ninjas back, breaking his spine, burning through his clones and into his back itself. The impact was so hard it caused a small, shallow crater around killick and the rogue ninja. The ninja let out a great scream of pain then lay motionless, dead...
Killick:*with tears in his eyes* I should of been here for you mother, farther...
Killicks eyes began to go blurry, exhaustion took its toll on him as his body wasn't used too this kind of strain, falling to his knee leaning on his staff, then falling to the ground, unconcious...
Next chapter: The path of revenge...
If people don't like it, then i just wont make more, i made this purely out of bordism...
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