the return of the black zetsu

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the morning sun comes out gradually from it's sleep.people are already up and going about with their normal activities.In a big building like the building of the leader of the hyuuga's.sasuke is training two kids who are twins and are his kids.they seem to be sparring.
Saruna Uchiha:earth element terra shockwave(hits the ground with her two fists making the ground shake and sending static shockwaves towards sasuke.he jumps and tries to swerve that attack only to be countered by his son).Nb:sakura had mastered the earth element after the war and mostly uses these attacks with her fists the same goes for her daughter saruna.it's a kekkai genki something or heredity transfer.
sasuren uchiha: Fire element great dragon blast(shoots out a huge fireball in the shape of a dragon at sasuke while in mid-air.sasuke uses his sharingan to notice and counters it with his katana sword but the fireball explodes on impact)
sasuren uchiha:hmmph.we got him.uhhh..(notices that only a burnt log hits the ground).
Saruna uchiha:that flames should have got by now.
Sasuke uchiha:that was slow. but i will admit that you guys are doing well with you team work.but enough training for now.
(sakura stands by the door watching them with the new baby itachi jnr(because the baby looks like him.sasuke notices her and stop.)
Sasuke uchiha :eek:k what have you learnt from this training?
sasuren and saruna:it's important to know the weakness of your opponent while knowing your weakness and we should learn to work more often as a team rather than working solo.
Sasuke uchiha;well that's ok for starters.but you still need to overcome your limit.now it's time for you two to go to the ninja academy now or you will be .....(the children uses body shifting ninjutsu or in other words instant transmission ninjutsu to leave the house.sasuke notices it early and just smiles so as sakura)
Sakura :well i can see that you have continued your training with them dear.they seem to be nearly as perfect as you.
sasuke:yes but they still have a lot to do (looks at his sleeping son on sakura's arms).whenever i look at the children it reminds me of itachi and my self when we used to go and train in the woods.he didn't train me always so most of the time i have to train myself as a kid.i wonder how he would feel when he saw the kids.
Sakura:i think he will just tell them to train the more if they want to surpass you i think......(loud knocking on the door by a messenger).
Sakura:come in(messenger comes in with a letter)
messnger;good morning general sasuke and mrs sakura uchiha.naruto sama has sent for you sir.it's urgent.
Sasuke:that bastard ever since he became the hokage he has been sending the guys and i to every jounin mission.he sometimes pisses me off.
Sakura:sasuke you have to understand that he is now the hokage.
Sasuke;ok whatever.let's go.looks at sakura.take care of yourself and the child i will be back.
(at the hokage's office naruto is standing at the top of the hokage offices with sai,shikimaru,kiba,neji,rock lee,chouji and shino.all of them seems to be worried.then sasuke appears.)
Sasuke:what's going on that you have call for me.this better be good naruto).
kiba:hey sasuke can't you at least be polite to him.he also called for us it seem urgent.naruto what is it.
Naruto:i have disturbing news guys.i sent some ANBU to do some scouting around the village and make sure that there was no attack at the fire country..however three of them were killed and one of them barely managed to escape.
chouji;what happened
Naruto:it seems that some rouge ninjas from the hidden lightning village are behind this and are threathening to destroy konoha however there is more.
sai:what was it.
Naruto:(after a short silence).the black zetsu had somehow returned and has tagged along with the leader of those rouge ninjas.
Neji:impossible the black zetsu was destroyed by the mizukage.i'm sure that she destroyed him.
Naruto:apparently not,just before madara went to battle with all the nations he took a DNA of the black zetsu and gave it to him to redupilcate himself if he and the remaining akatsuki were defeated.that's not all the ninja said that they are after the sword of time which belonged to second hokage and it's located at an island just near the hidden Mist village.
Sasuke:how are we even sure that they haven't started going there already.
Naruto:that's why tomorrow some of us are going there.for this mission sasuke you are taking part since your susano'o can give us protection if we are attacked by a long range and besides you are a powerful ninja just like me.sai you are in and so is neji and shino.kiba,chouji you will stay and help shikimaru in getting the ANBU prepared for any surprise attack.we will leave in the morning .
Kiba:hey i want a part of this.i and akamaru will like to get a crack of those jerks.damn,naruto you really can be a pain.
neji:stop complaining you are even behaving like shikimaru.
Naruto:alright so tomorrow morning we leave for the port at the fire country.
In the night after sakura has tucked the kids and put the baby to sleep.she comes outside and notices sasuke standing outside at the compound starring at the stars looking worried.sakura comes stands by him.
Sakura:sasuke-kun what's wrong you have been silent since you came from naruto's office.i was told about the injured ninja and ino and karin are taking care of him.what is it
Sasuke just looks at her.he doesn't want her to worried again so he still remains silent but sakura is persistent.
sakura:sasuke please tell me .remember that when you were a boy and after itachi had arrived you never told me anything about it even when your fight with him and when you were leaving the village you won't tell me what was going on in your life.sasuke tell me i need to know.
Sasuke the notices that she is becoming sad and finally decides to tell her everything.sakura listens with close attention.after that sakura sighs.
Sakura:so the peace that we fought hard for is being threatened.sasuke kun i don't want to lose you again.please be careful and come back alive.\\\\\9she hugs him tightly)
Sasuke:take care of the kids and yourself sakura.don't worry i will be back.there is no way i will die.
the next morning all the guys going on the mission are there at the gate.hinata,sakura,tenten,temari and karin come to see them off at the gate so as kiba,chouji and shikmaru.
Naruto:if anything happens we will contact you by the messenger toad and the slug queen.take of the place and yourself guys.we are counting on you.
Shikimaru:it's a pain but don't worry we will be ready if anything happens.
Hinata uzumaki and the other guys:take care guys
naruto:we will.Ok guys lets go( then they start their journey using their ninja speed)
Watch out for the part 2 of the story after the guys get to the port and board their ship and head towards the hidden mist village to see the new mizukage).
 

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Yeah, a little bit of editing would go a long way (and make this FF far easier to read).

Just a bit of advice.
how do i do that if i may ask.but seriously this the first best story that i can come up with.at least it is even better than the wedding story because there was no action in the wedding story.just a mass wedding at least. the mass wedding story is for the ladies who like naruto anime and manga and like the narutoXhinata, sasukeXsakura, nejiXtenten, choujiXino(that is if it's possible) and shikimaruXtemari relationship.i wrote the return of the zetsu for the continuation of after the war.i promise the action is gonna be great and a little preview sasuke and naruto will unlock new powers.and there is a surprise that at the hidden mist that you will never forget.but thanks for the advice.just wanna ask how to do it?
 

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The best way to make something easier to read is spacing. If everything is jumbled together, it becomes a strain on the eyes.

That's why you should separate every paragraph with a line break.

As in the space between my paragraphs in this post. A paragraph will consist of one or more sentences focusing on a centralized idea. Also, you will want to separate lines any time a character speaks in a story.

Hopefully that all made sense to you.
 
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