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Question : can it be used to absorb the force of a rumbling wall or ground used by the opponent.


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Seeing the incoming clone, Bolin quickly assumes the bartholomew's trade mark sumo - like stance with his feet apart
and paws out in front, he exhales slowly gradually concentrating his chakra into the paws as it is covered by a bubble in shape of a paw with his
eyes fixed on the clone he finds it easy to deflect the clone's
punches with his paws which had focused chakra in it having like
a small bubble on it, the clone's attack were of great force and aim
as a normal attack would be but as Bolin swiftly deflects and made
contact with the fists he absorbs the kinetic energy and force
present in those attacks while delivering a final thrust to the very open rib of the clone. The clone was focused on attacks rather than defense so as he left his rib wide open, Bolin took advantage of the opportunity to deliver a final blow.
 

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Actually with the new update of this jutsu it can. Now i want you to go to the group and post the update here. Observe the new changes and tell me about it. And ask questions.
 

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Paw Paw Arts: Impact Dial (Nykyu
Nykyu no Mi: Inpakuto Daiaru)
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Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: Varies(Depends on
the rank of the absorbed technique.
When the absorbed force is expunged,
it can cause 60 damage if previously
used to absorb A-rank, 80 damage if
used to absorbed s-rank force)
Description: The user takes advantage
of their paws and, upon physical
contact, any impact is absorbed
instantaneously. This is seen by the
clan members as an invert push. The
impact is stored on the paw until the
user is able to catch his opponent off
guard, striking them with the full
power of the absorbed technique. The
absorbed force can be released also
as a focused blast of air pressure
from the paw that aborbed it. While
the paw instantenously absorb the
impact, the momentum of the jutsu or
technique in question stops totally
and either falls as a dormant entity
or deforms while proceeding no
further. The user can at the same
instance, release the absorbed force
instead of choosing to store it for a
while. Alternatively, the user can use
the paw in form of a suction through
reverse repel action to stop a
surrounding force be it push or pull
by absorbing the closely embracing
kinetic energy (only if they are close
to the user) like any remote force,
encapsulating the user. Also after
absorption, he can release the
absorbed force immediately.
*The user can simultaneously perform
a Paw Paw technique to add
damage*
*Can only absorb techniques one rank
above maximum, higher than that,
the paw will take half of the damage,
and will be useless for 2 turns. This
means it can absorb an impact from
upto S-rank jutsu, if it is normal
chakra, force, energy, tangible
matter/entity, earth, water, wind or
elements technique related to them
but can only absorb upto A-rank
impact from lightning and fire or
elements similar or related to them,
leaving the paw useless for 2 turns.
*Can only be used once every 2 turns
for normal members why Legends can
use this with no turn rest except when
their paw receives damage*
*Normal members can use this only 4
times, using it on an S-Rank allows
only 1 additional use*
*Bartholomew legends can use it 5
times per battle, regardless of what
rank is used on*

,............................
Almost like the old one but this is more a stronger
 

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The last technique for this level though.

Paw arts: Slapping thrust pressure cannon (Nykyujutsu: Tsuppari Pad Hō)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Bartholomew clan members first plant both their feet firmly on the ground by means of a sumo-style foot stomp. Then, throwing their palms forward multiple times, they fire a vast number of "pressure shots" at the enemy. The way they push their palms forward and the stance they take while performing this technique resemble those used commonly in sumo wrestling. Tsuppari is a thrusting open-handed strike about the upper chest and face, a technique in Sumo.
~3 times per battle
~no paw arts 2 turns after usage
~The pressure shots move extremely fast, only sharingan of 3 tomo can predict them or
any other sensoring ability.
~Because The stance is sumo-style one must remain completely still to preform this technique. Leaving him/her open to attack.
~only three tomo sharingan can predict and avoid the pressure shots.


Now this is the reason I asked you about balance and pose. The above requires them and you must be quite still as the technique is quite deadly and might be op depending on how you use it.
You strike a pose like that of a sumo wrestler then you jab your paws forward continously releasing paw shaped bubble of air pressure that move at intense speed only someone with doujutsu and sensory can percieve without difficulty.
Even at that, only someone with a sharingan 3tomoe reaction speed can completely/safely avoid the shots. This means you don't have to have 3T sharingan but if your reaction speed overall is equivalent to that of 3T sharingan, then you can avoid it.
The pose and balance is neccesary for you not to suffer recoil damage from the technique.
You can however use other means to achieve stillness and balance. Imagine an opponent uses and earth technique to bind your legs. With that you have the right balance and you only need to jab your hands and assault your opponent. Viola, you just used your opponents jutsu to your advantage.


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Now lets discuss about this one.
 

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Hearing instructions, Bolin plants his feets on the ground in the sumo style stance. Flowing chakra into his paws and jabbing the air profusely as he releases paw like air pads aimed at priest. Since he did not possess the stipulated tracking speed, Priest would suffer greatly by these wounds since it'll be really fast to catch up with.
"Told you that i'll kill you, now you have to go to NB's hospital for treatment ........... LOL"
 

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Who told you I can't react to it. I'm a bartholomew you brat. Bartholomews can react to their own jutsus.

Now tell me how you'll combine this with other techniques. Make a scenario.
 

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After pushing a boulder away for a number of turns, Bolin with a mental command would bring it back from behind priest moving at a great speed. With effectiveness, he would go on by releasing pressure shots from said paws to further damage priest. Now he has to defend from behind and in front.
Question : can bartholomews react from the pressure pad tech i.e without the 3 tomoe thingy
 

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Its only logical, we create the pressure shot, we can see thus we should be able to react to it. But only if you have a relatively fast jutsu like the "Train Wreck" only with that can you fully evade it without taking damage.

Apply for the next level
 

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Good grief, Why does Priest always have me babysit the new ones
The Crimson Eyed Bartholomew walks to the training spot located in the bartholomew Island, hands in pocket and eyes closed, he felt like taking a nap but his responsibilities seem to always appear when he doesn't want them to, realizing he had to make a good first impression, he slowly opened his eyes until to see the red headed Bartholomew, Ban. Hell No.
Uh?
He simply turned as if no one was there and headed back the way he came from, there was no way he was teaching this annoying thief the Secret Paw Paw Arts, but then an image flooded his mind, he imagined Priest pulling bayonets from his sleeves with that wicked and sly smile on his face.
You didn't teach him because you wanted to take a nap, huh? That's great, now, don’t move an inch.
With a loud sigh, he turned to face the new Bartholomew Legend.
Analyze the second and last pilgrim.
Paw Arts: Train Wreck - Nykyu No Mi: Toren Keigei
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Despite the bulkiness of the founder of the clan, he is able to move as light as a feather. The trick behind this prowess is nothing but the paw's power to repel. A simple jutsu developed by the bartholomew to execute simple but swift movement. Using the repulsion power of the paws, a bartholomew is able to move or perhaps, cover a fair distance in a very miniscle amount of time, a feat way past the ability of a normal ninja. There are three variants of this art:

First Pilgrim
The first variation of the Bartholomew movement jutsu is a simple but rather delicate process which requires high level of skill and balance. The Bartholomew would focus chakra into his paw(s) and repel the air before them upto 15meters around a 90-180 degrees area originating from the user. The repulsion can not be blocked nor negated as it does not interact with anything but the surrounding air friction. Upon repulsion, he would have removed the entire air resistance/friction in the affected area for a very short period of time. By running within the affected area, a bartholomew member would be running without limits thus his speed increases 2 folds. Due to the area affected by this being narrow, the Bartholomew may be limited interms of movement, depending on how he wants to move. The removal of air friction however is temporary and only last for 2 turns before everything returns to normal. The affected area can only be utilized by Bartholomews that have received training in the art. This ability requires the user to spend chakra equivalent to A-rank and it can only be used once every 3 turns. A Bartholomew legend could use it once every 2 turns. Can be used 3x per battle for normal bartholomew while a legend is able to utilise this 4x per battle.

Second Pilgrim
The second variation of Bartholomew movement jutsu deemed as near instantenous due to its speed.
The Bartholomew focuses chakra into his paw and repels himself to a desired location upto a 200m distance if he so wishes. Unlike the first variant, the Bartholomew is not actually running but rather pushing himself at near instatenous speed. Just like (Paw Arts: Repel), upon repulsion, the bartholomew vanishes from view and appears at his destination in a near intanteneous manner. This ability requires the user to spend chakra worth of S-rank and can only be trained and used when a bartholomew have attained a legend title. This ability can only be used twice per battle with a 2 turn rest inbetween usage.

Last Pilgrim
The last variation of Bartholomew movement jutsu. This is normally used by the Bartholomew legends to traverse between very long distance e:g miles, without having to walk or go through traveling hassle. The Bartholomew focuses chakra into his paw and repels himself in the direction he wishes. Upon repulsion, he vanishes out of sight and moves at immense speed while he is coated in a rather tough paw bubble. The bartholomew encapsulated in the bubble, traverse through a space a little above above the atmosphere, i.e: The troposhpere. Upon reaching the destination, the bubble containing the bartholomew descends and crashes on the ground leaving a fair crater in the shape of a bubble, though the user within the bubble would not be harmed in any manner. The bartholomew is able to use this to transport his comrade through long distance if he wishes. This ability is S-rank and can only be used once every 4 turns. This ability can be used only for oneself, allies or techniques/objects and can not be used to transport enemy ninja away from a position.

NOTE: When First Pilgrim is used, the user can't use paw arts above S-rank in the same turn
NOTE: When Second Pilgrim is used, the user can't use S-rank and above in the same turn. In the next turn, he won't be able to use paw arts above S-rank
NOTE: When Last Pilgrim is used, the user can't use any paw arts for 2 turns
NOTE: Second and Last Pilgrim can only be used by Bartholomew legends.
NOTE: Paw Arts used in the first pilgrim also are influenced by the no friction zone and thus their speed is increased two folds.
 

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It was high time to continue his long left training in the Clan's secret arts. He ran away from the training when the evil holy Priest had frustrated his life with undue stress. But now he was ever determined for breakthrough no matter the condition.
"Baka! Scratch that readers, why on earth would this blond be assigned to my training? I prefer Priest, where is P-Priest?
What went through his mind at that moment he saw Kura wasn't what anyone would wish for the other, even you wouldn't wish your enemies such.
Standing emotionless and carefree with his hands in his pocket as usual. It was a sight to see someone who was actually shorter than you are and still act bossy! Well, that was Kurapika.
"The second pilgrim is actually a teleportation technique as derived from the "instantaneous" clause. A Bartholomew focuses chakra into his paws and upon placing it on him self, he repels his being to another location that is not more than 200m. It is similar to the first clan's technique (B rank repel). The user disappears from his position and reappears at the new location.
Its quite versatile and open to many usages depending on individual's discretion.
The Last Pilgrim on the other hand is rather direct in execution than the second. The user coats his paws and repels him self to another location but in a direction he wishes. Plus, he moves above the atmosphere (the troposphere) while being covered by a rather tough bubble in shape of a paw. It can be used to transport comrades and allies to another location. It is advisable to note that when the bubble makes contact with the ground upon arrival at its destination, it leaves behind a huge crater.
 

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You have to ask questions, personally, I wouldn't want to but Priest made that a rule in Bartholomew training.
Kurapika continues mockingly, eyeing Ban with a smug look
Or maybe you're not smart enough to ask questions?, I'm not surprised really. Besides, tell me how'd you'd use both in/out of battle.
You have to ask questions.
 
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The Second Pilgrim can be used to escape battles rather easily when faced by a rather formidable opponent.
Can allies, comrades, summons, enemies be repelled like this? There's no place in the technique that states this.
The Last Pilgrim.
While the user is coated with the paw, is he visible to the normal and eye and Dojutsu? Define this "at immense speed" using the Speed chart as basis for your reply?
 

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No, You can't use the second Pilgrim on an ally.
The last Pilgrim doesn't follow the speed chart, It's instateneous similar to Paw Repel, you disappear from the battlefield and appear inside the bubble above the atmosophere which travels at your speed, analyze this.
Paw Arts: Pulsus Coration (Nykyujutsu: Chiyu Oshi)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/attack
Range: Short-long (If the bubble is directed
at the opponent)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Bartholomew legends will put
their hand on themselves or their kinsmen
and using the power of their KG, they "push"
any pain and exhaustion that they have endured through the entire battle. Once
done, a huge red air bubble in the shape of a
paw appears behind the person, containing
all the pain and exhaustion extracted, which
can be then redirected to a new person. If
the bubble happens to burst without touching anyone (if hit with a strong enough power [S
rank and above]) the bubble explodes violently and the damage inside the bubble will cause a catastrophic shockwave that can level a large area.
~This jutsu can only be done 1 time per battle, and the chakra strain will only allow the user to perform 2 jutsus in the next turn.
~If the user pleases he can direct the bubble
at anything, whether it be the opponent or
even a simple tree, once the bubble comes in contact with it, depending on the bubbles
size, it will explode.
~Can only be used after the two turns have passed.
~No Paw jutsu for the next 2 turns
Note: Pulsus Coration means Healing Push, in Latin
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So, Let me slide in my questions before analysing.
1. This can push any type/form of pain, does this include extreme ones like 3rd degree burns, loss of a limb, an arm, a deep cut ect.
2. Assuming the user's pain is from a meter long cut across is back, would healing push remove the pain - would the spot be healed? Or would it just remain there but inactive?
"Alright, Pulsus Coration meaning "Healing Push" is a paw technique that is achieved when the user focuses chakra into their paws and repels fatigue and pain from their body. Once this is done, a huge red bubble appears and is sent towards the opponent. The bubble moves peacefully but when it comes in contact with another object, it goes KABOOM! releasing a shockwave of devastating destruction."
 

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Yes it can as long as it's pain, the wound won't heal, you'd just stop feeling the pain.
Last jutsu. Analyze and ask questions and then it's my turn to ask questions.
Paw arts: Ursus Shock (Nykyujutsu: Urususu Shokku)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: Bartholomew Legends gather air with their palms and compress it into a giant bubble which resembles a paw-print. Once the bubble is compact enough to fit within their hands, they releases the compressed air and sends it toward his opponent. The air quickly decompresses, causing a massive explosion in the form of a bear paw. This technique has the power to destroy entire islands near instantly. However the drawback is that it takes a considerable amount of time to compress the air and the user must remain completely still, But once the technique is launched it is nearly unavoidable, as the size and speed of the explosion is great, if the opponent isn't able to block it during the Compression time, he/she has only few instants to preform a jutsu to counter it. Nevertheless, the jutsu itself is basically a chakra explosion.
~Takes 1 turn to compress the air
~Once the user sends out the bubble, it travels to the opponent extremely fast. Furthermore it has been compressed so much that it is invisible to the naked eye(due to it being so small). Any doujutsu can easily see it though. And chakra sensor.
~While the user is compressing the air he must remain completely still
~does 40 damage to the user as it requires extreme concentration.
~Only one other paw jutsu for the rest of the battle
~Only 2 jutsu in the following turn
~No more forbidden rank techniques for the rest of the battle
 

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Back when i just joined the clan in 2014, i read this technique and said..."This is going to be one of my less used technique. Why? This is actually not feasible in this RP, like who would wait for a whole turn for you to compress chakra and they're just gonna stand there?".
But then I was naive, this is actually a one move pawn if used wisely and in conjunction with some stuffs (???). Basically, As I saw in the anime Kuma took like 10secs to compress the bubble and then when he shot it! The destruction was marvelous. So, yeah it takes time but it has nice outcome.
The user focuses air within both of his paws forming a giant bubble with a paw shape which he compresses momentarily to fit within his palm making it invisible to the naked eye but not to dojutsu or sensors. Taking one full turn to mature, the mi-nute paw is released at insane speed that can't be defended from if the opponent hasn't stopped the compression since the beginning. Though this is useless against space time users as they can teleport away from its range.
 
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