The New Generation: Chapter 7 - Surprise surprise...

[Gobi Gobletsson]

I ish no more a steam monster, Akisha. ~_O...

 

[Akisha]

Thanks all

@Jinbei you will be surprised when you see what I am planning on doing with ya xd

 

[DJ Malik]

-_-" Nice chapter.

 

[ZK]

People are being killed off like flied xD
And people who are supposed to be dead, suddenly gets revived >_<
I like the fact that you gave Dan a gay pink to go with his talking xd (No offense)
Nice chappy :3

 

[Black Butler]

Nice Chappy bro....Dan v Xylon. xd

 

[Jinbei]

Thanks all

@Jinbei you will be surprised when you see what I am planning on doing with ya xd

Release.Next.Chapter.Now.

 

[Akiza]

oddly the link to the past chapters didnt work for me. that and i couldnt find chap 5 or 6 anywhere....did you just skip straight to 7?

otherwise good chapter^^

 

[Akisha]

oddly the link to the past chapters didnt work for me. that and i couldnt find chap 5 or 6 anywhere....did you just skip straight to 7?

otherwise good chapter^^

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[Akiza]

you didnt have to post it and vm me it lol

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I just re-read 4 and afterwards read 5/6/7 and what a ride. You definitely have a good imagination. Zero reminds me more and more of Sasuke which I love. I wonder if any troll reading these chapters would degrade Zero's character as they've done to Sasuke. This chapter was the best by far as some characters are seemingly dead and it just had something different that made it stand out. It will be interesting to see how Xylon will assist Akisha. Also, in case you may want to edit this:​

@Back to Axle and Ryuji and Jamal.

Ryuji had grabbed Jamal onto his neck and was holding him into the air. The pitiful ninja was trying to take a breath but the strong hand of the Dragon [STRIKER] Lord [/STRIKE] Slayer wouldn’t allow him to do so. His eyes were starting to close as he was about to collapse.

The first part of the code has an extra r which spells striker instead of strike.​

 

[Scary Yamato]

nice chapter, but there is a serious lack of Yamato xd

 

[Lord of Kaos]

nice chapter, but there is a serious lack of Yamato xd

*waits on new Yamato's Day Out chapter*

:lili:

 

[Scary Yamato]

*waits on new Yamato's Day Out chapter*

:lili:

LOL next chapter is Yamatos day Out: Yamato becomes a mod and Fvcks with people

 

[Lord of Kaos]

LOL next chapter is Yamatos day Out: Yamato becomes a mod and Fvcks with people

xd

 

[Akisha]

nice chapter, but there is a serious lack of Yamato xd

LOL next chapter is Yamatos day Out: Yamato becomes a mod and Fvcks with people

Your time will come Im saving you for later ^^

 

[Scary Yamato]

Your time will come Im saving you for later ^^

Yamato finally gets into someones friggin FF! ... and then refers to himself in the 3rd person like a douchebag

 

[ZK]

Yamato finally gets into someones friggin FF! ... and then refers to himself in the 3rd person like a douchebag

Douchebags are not allowed back-stage, sir. I'll have to ask you to leave.

 

[Scary Yamato]

Douchebags are not allowed back-stage, sir. I'll have to ask you to leave.

you can ask but it wont do anything