The New Generation: Chapter 7 - Surprise surprise...

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People are being killed off like flied xD
And people who are supposed to be dead, suddenly gets revived >_<
I like the fact that you gave Dan a gay pink to go with his talking xd (No offense)
Nice chappy :3
 

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oddly the link to the past chapters didnt work for me. that and i couldnt find chap 5 or 6 anywhere....did you just skip straight to 7?

otherwise good chapter^^
 

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I just re-read 4 and afterwards read 5/6/7 and what a ride. You definitely have a good imagination. Zero reminds me more and more of Sasuke which I love. I wonder if any troll reading these chapters would degrade Zero's character as they've done to Sasuke. This chapter was the best by far as some characters are seemingly dead and it just had something different that made it stand out. It will be interesting to see how Xylon will assist Akisha. Also, in case you may want to edit this:​

@Back to Axle and Ryuji and Jamal.

Ryuji had grabbed Jamal onto his neck and was holding him into the air. The pitiful ninja was trying to take a breath but the strong hand of the Dragon [STRIKER] Lord [/STRIKE] Slayer wouldn’t allow him to do so. His eyes were starting to close as he was about to collapse.

The first part of the code has an extra r which spells striker instead of strike.​
 
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