The New Generation: Chapter 5 - Falling inside the dark.
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Akiza
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-facepalms to myself and laughs maliciously- oh dear ryuji, you still seem to fail to realize that i am partially evil...just not completely on nb...but here...-shrugs- i guess fully evil will do ;D
indeed. if you give me a description as to what that jutsu of mine did >.> im SOOOOOOOOOOOO gonna submit that. xDon Monday
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and now i realize you put me and kaito as a couple. xD or did you and am I just saying love as a tease xD
O_O
*ignores all except the bolded part*
wease:Hmm it's kinda stange that Akiza doens't have any related to roses or even black O_O as jutsus, maybe you could use the Hana Ninpo stuff on the NB jutsu list as base for the techs?you are not that evil
Btw, my twisted mind came up with some very cool black rose techniques which you will see in the next 1 or 2 chapters (depends on how fast the fight will end)
*wonders how you get those*
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Hey dude, there is an incorrect code in this past of your fanfic:
@Back at Zero and Minato.
Zero couldn’t believe what Minato was saying. He just couldn’t except it. Apparently Akisha knew about this and Jinbei too. It was hard for him to except that his best friends lied to him. He couldn’t bare the betrayal. He was sad, but his sorrow quickly turned into anger. He quickly remembered how everyone used to hate him for the past few months. He used to have friends, but it seemed like ever since that [/B]battle[/B], it was like people hated him. Well almost all – Akisha was the one who stood there for him and never betrayed him, he was the one to cheer him up when he was alone, he was the one to help him get up when he fell down…
The B code has a slash before it when there shouldn't be and good chapter by the way Off to the next one.
Off to the next one.