The New Generation: Chapter 4 - The enemy's plan.

[Axle]

*squeals like a girl when I see my name*

O_O use all my customs for this fanfic (only the ones I made......and the X-gloves)

^^

 

[Akisha]

Lol, this is great. Just the right amount of everything.

thanks ^_^ hey I remember fighting with you before Katonpwnz right ? I need to put you in too...Later

^_^ excellent, nice job. But yeah I found Scars lines annoying to read in bright yellow. But in all it was good.

THank you and I will change them next time ^_^

 

[Akisha]

*squeals like a girl when I see my name*

O_O use all my customs for this fanfic (only the ones I made......and the X-gloves)

^^

lol ok xd

 

[Jinbei]

I wonder why I was in a coma,since Zero was the one who used a forbidden jutsu. @_@

xd

Nice chapter,my friend. ^.^

 

[DJ Malik]

I wonder why I was in a coma,since Zero was the one who used a forbidden jutsu. @_@

xd

Nice chapter,my friend. ^.^

From exhaustion I believe. He told me I was still knocked out since the fight. xd

 

[Akisha]

I wonder why I was in a coma,since Zero was the one who used a forbidden jutsu. @_@

xd

Nice chapter,my friend. ^.^

From exhaustion I believe. He told me I was still knocked out since the fight. xd

people just need some rest from you two xd

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I did not think your fanfic would take these sort of twists and turns but it did and it is cool when you look at it from a different perspective. It seems as though this Narutoverse era is darker among other things. Keep it up! ​