The major differences between Naruto and Bleach

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By differences I'm not going to talk about the obvious ones, I'm going to talk about the way the story is told and how things are revealed throughout the story.

We are all very familiar with Naruto and how Kishi goes about telling it. If we can say anything for certain, its that Kishi is unpredictable. Can anyone say they truly expected the manga to be where its at now? I think not. But in addition to being unpredictable, Kishi is also historically inconsistent. I don't want people to take this the wrong way, but its true. It is extremely common on NB to see threads about plot holes and mistakes in Naruto. Now while these threads are common, most claims of 'plot hole' are unfounded and not accurate. But if you ask me, there are however, at least 1 or 2 true plot holes in the Naruto story. Others may claim there are more, but I don't think its necessarily true.

The point I'm trying to make with this is that, at the very least, Kishi creates circumstances to where he is setting himself up to be criticized. Now its not that he has created various plotholes, but he has certainly created various circumstances that cause people to question his work. And if a writer is consistently creating situations that cause his readers to question his work, is he truly going about things the right way? Now I know I will get flack like 'Well why don't you try making your own manga and see if you can do better?', or 'Well then why don't you stop reading the manga?', but I'm simply accessing Kishi's way of story telling and comparing it to another author. With that, I want to talk about Bleach a little bit.

Now when it comes to the popular manga titles of our age, Bleach's writer Kubo has the infamous reputation of being a troll. Now why is he considered a troll? I guess its mostly the way he will often leave a chapter with a cliff hanger and not come back to the issue several chapters later. He goes about things his own way and some people don't like it. But in all honesty, can any Bleach reader ever say in a million years that Bleach has any plotholes? Please rack your brain and tell me with a straight face that you can claim Bleach has even 1 plothole. I think you'd be hard-pressed to do so. The reason you can't is because Kubo has never introduced anything that conflicts with what he's already revealed.

Now the primary reason for this is that Kubo has simply been very vague with the details of his manga. Many things he reveals seem out of left field because its a topic he never really covered or only quickly passed over without revealing much. In addition, while its very common for him to give his characters upgrades, they don't really break any rules of his manga because, honestly, he has left his manga world open to almost any possibility. The point here is that Kubo will often leave things extremely vague or unexplored so that when he later sheds light on the topic, you honestly have no room to question it.

In conclusion, I guess what I'm saying is that Kishi is a much more detail-oriented writer than Kubo. While Kishi undoubtedly had the major plotlines of his story figured out from day one, he is very likely guilty of changing things along the way. The more detailed he made his story, the more complicated it became for him to make small story changes down the line. In at least one or two cases, I feel this has created a true plot hole in the story. This is in addition dozens of lines of story that might not be plot holes but are at the very least questionable decisions on Kishi's part and might have benefited from better planning. While some people consider Kubo to be a troll in Bleach, he is certainly not guilty of creating plot holes and has achieved that by keeping his manga generally simple, thus creating no real room to question his work when new things are revealed.

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The meaning of this thread was to compare two very popular mangas created by two very different writers. I feel that while Kishi's work is very good and worthy of praise, it contains numerous examples of questionable lines of plot that cause people to question his work. Most of these inconsistences can be explained and are not true plot holes. But can you look at all these instances that cause people to question it and say that there is not at least something wrong about the writing? Surely Kishi could have changed some things to not create so much controversy. I feel that this is largely a result of over-complication of his manga. By adding more and more depth as the story went on, Kishi made it more and more difficult to keep things in one consistent line. I think he eventually strayed from this line and we are seeing the results of it.

I feel this differs greatly from a writer like Kubo who may get flack for trolling his readers, but never creates instances that make his readers question his work. I think he owes this largely to the simplicity of the manga he created (when compared to Naruto). He wrote his manga in such a way that whenever something new is revealed, there is truly no significant room to question things and call 'plot hole'. He simply never introduces anything that could contradict his own story.

Anyway, I just wanted to explain my thoughts when comparing these 2 mangas because while they are both highly successful mangas I feel that the level of depth of story differs greatly between them and creates a completely different community of discussion based on them. Thoughts, comments, concerns, suggestions?
 
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Bleach has alot of a$$pulls, whereas Naruto doesnt.!!

in Bleach, one is just simply that powerful, there isnt any reasoning behind it.!!

Bleach power ups look pretty awesome all the time(esp. Ichigo)

power level is all jumbled up and Kubo doesnt think far ahead in the story(or should i say he is incapable of thinking far ahead)
 

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Bleach doesn't have enough plot to have a plothole U_U
This was essentially my point. Kubo keeps things quite simple, while Kishi loves to complicate things.

Bleach has alot of a$$pulls, whereas Naruto doesnt.!!

in Bleach, one is just simply that powerful, there isnt any reasoning behind it.!!

Bleach power ups look pretty awesome all the time(esp. Ichigo)

power level is all jumbled up and Kubo doesnt think far ahead in the story(or should i say he is incapable of thinking far ahead)
I think a lot of people would say Naruto has asspulls. I agree that Bleach power levels aren't well explained, but they are also all adults while Naruto characters are all kids or teenagers.
 

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Bleach has alot of a$$pulls, whereas Naruto doesnt.!!

in Bleach, one is just simply that powerful, there isnt any reasoning behind it.!!

Bleach power ups look pretty awesome all the time(esp. Ichigo)

power level is all jumbled up and Kubo doesnt think far ahead in the story(or should i say he is incapable of thinking far ahead)
The series has literally lead up to this final arc where everything is falling in place.
Masaki being a quincy.
Zangetsu looking like Juha Bach.
Explanation on why there's a hollow in Ichigo.
Kenpachi's backstory.
Unohana being the 1st Kenpachi.
The quincies planning secretly planning out war.
 

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Could you please VM me about Naruto plotholes ? I'd appreciate it .
I'll just post it here.

The major plot hole in the story revolves around Obito and the Mizukage. History of the Mist village tells us that the Mizukage was being controlled and is the reason the graduation exam was created. We see Obito controlling the Mizukage when he recruited Kisame. Yet, if you look at the timeline, a true plothole comes out of it. Zabuza is similar in age to Kakashi. We know Kakashi and Obito are the same age. This means Zabuza is roughly the same age as Obito.

Yet, when Zabuza graduated by killing his classmates, he was only 8 or 10 years old (I forget which) which puts Obito back in the Leaf village. Obito did not control the Mizukage when the graduation exam started. This directly conflicts with the plot we have been given and Kishi has yet to explain it. Outside of Madara somehow remotely controlling a Kage from miles away, there is no true explanation.

One of the many inconsistencies I mentioned that cause people to question the manga is Madara using Susanoo without eyes. Its not truly a plot hole, but it is a very questionable decision on Kishi's part and is not consistent with that we've seen previously. There are more, but the timeline one regarding Obito and the Hidden Mist is the primary plothole in the story.
 
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This was essentially my point. Kubo keeps things quite simple, while Kishi loves to complicate things.



I think a lot of people would say Naruto has asspulls. I agree that Bleach power levels aren't well explained, but they are also all adults while Naruto characters are all kids or teenagers.
Its not that complicated, everything basically's been cleared up to this point in the Manga. There's no sign of a plothole..
 

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Frankly speaking, I remember once upon a time Ira said that she reads every manga for a different reason, and that's my answer to you as a Bleach and Naruto reader. I read these mangas for different reasons.
Let me summarize some good points first.
Naruto:
-Excellent plot.
-Plot is nice tied up with mythologies and concept of love, peace, war and hatred.
-Some characters have an excellent development and may go down as one of the most remarkable characters in the manga history.
-Few twists are quiet awesome and detailing is good.
-Not that many power-scale problems, people know that there is a big difference between Tenten and SO6P.
Bleach:
-Excellent action, in some cases reminds me of DBZ.
-Aizen's character is one of the most interesting ones, so is Uryuu's or Ichigo's.
-Great use of metaphors and plot is vaguely related to basic concepts from nature, such as the 'everything but rain', episode series.
-Characters have distinct personalities and no two characters are alike, one can turn a blind eye towards few exceptions.
Now getting back to what I don't like.
Naruto
-Some panels were unnecessary, it seems like writer is trying to stretch the manga.
-Needs to develop female characters more, there is more too a girl's life rather than mingling around boys.
Bleach
-Plot isn't as good as Naruto, especially the way Hueco Mundo arc, just comes after Rukia and soul society part.
-Power-scale is inconsistent, and it almost looks like writer gives power-ups to characters according to 'will'.
Conclusion(tl;dr)
Naruto is better manga than Bleach, but Bleach is better anime than Naruto, that is my opinion. I read Bleach for action, Naruto for complexity of plot.


Now for your opinion, I would like to disagree. Naruto as plotholes? Nup I don't think so, I would rather classify them as 'unexplained' things.:| Kishi has habit of writing story in complex ways, he never writes story in top-to-bottom approach, so we better wait until the manga ends, if then also things are unexplained then they become plotholes. It is just his way of writing story. I agree that Bleach is simple as compared to Naruto, but that is also the downside of this manga.:p
I'll just post it here.

The major plot hole in the story revolves around Obito and the Mizukage. History of the Mist village tells us that the Mizukage was being controlled and is the reason the graduation exam was created. We see Obito controlling the Mizukage when he recruited Kisame. Yet, if you look at the timeline, a true plothole comes out of it. Zabuza is similar in age to Kakashi. We know Kakashi and Obito are the same age. This means Zabuza is roughly the same age as Obito.

Yet, when Zabuza graduated by killing his classmates, he was only 8 or 10 years old (I forget which) which puts Obito back in the Leaf village. Obito did not control the Mizukage when the graduation exam started. This directly conflicts with the plot we have been given and Kishi has yet to explain it. Outside of Madara somehow remotely controlling a Kage from miles away, there is no true explanation.
This entire explanation revolves around the bold factor, which itself is wrong. It has been dicussed multiple times, there is a possibility that Obito and Kakashi aren't of same age, considering the fact that Obito was regarded as a failure and may failed multiple times during his academy days.
One of the many inconsistencies I mentioned that cause people to question the manga is Madara using Susanoo without eyes. Its not truly a plot hole, but it is a very questionable decision on Kishi's part and is not consistent with that we've seen previously. There are more, but the timeline one regarding Obito and the Hidden Mist is the primary plothole in the story.
@Madara using wireless Susano'o I agree that it was a questionable decision, but that's what Kishi likes to do, and you yourself said that in the OP.:p I know this habit in some cases, leads people to question to people Kishi's work, but people should learn to have patience. Few plots are like that and we should give writer a chance to complete the story and Naruto isn't the only one which has it.:p
 
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Now for your opinion, I would like to disagree. Naruto as plotholes? Nup I don't think so, I would rather classify them as 'unexplained' things.:| Kishi has habit of writing story in complex ways, he never writes story in top-to-bottom approach, so we better wait until the manga ends, if then also things are unexplained then they become plotholes. It is just his way of writing story. I agree that Bleach is simple as compared to Naruto, but that is also the downside of this manga.:p

This entire explanation revolves around the bold factor, which itself is wrong. It has been dicussed multiple times, there is a possibility that Obito and Kakashi aren't of same age, considering the fact that Obito was regarded as a failure and may failed multiple times during his academy days.

@Madara using wireless Susano'o I agree that it was a questionable decision, but that's what Kishi likes to do, and you yourself said that in the OP.:p I know this habit in some cases, leads people to question to people Kishi's work, but people should learn to have patience. Few plots are like that and we should give writer a chance to complete the story and Naruto isn't the only one which has it.:p
Your possibility of Obito and Kakashi being different ages is a fantasy, they are the same age. Want undeniable proof Obito did not start the Bloody Mist?

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The Bloody Mist that Obito apparently created was created before he became Tobi, its a fact and is therefore a plothole that is yet to be explained.
 

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I'll just post it here.

The major plot hole in the story revolves around Obito and the Mizukage. History of the Mist village tells us that the Mizukage was being controlled and is the reason the graduation exam was created. We see Obito controlling the Mizukage when he recruited Kisame. Yet, if you look at the timeline, a true plothole comes out of it. Zabuza is similar in age to Kakashi. We know Kakashi and Obito are the same age. This means Zabuza is roughly the same age as Obito.

Yet, when Zabuza graduated by killing his classmates, he was only 8 or 10 years old (I forget which) which puts Obito back in the Leaf village. Obito did not control the Mizukage when the graduation exam started. This directly conflicts with the plot we have been given and Kishi has yet to explain it. Outside of Madara somehow remotely controlling a Kage from miles away, there is no true explanation.

One of the many inconsistencies I mentioned that cause people to question the manga is Madara using Susanoo without eyes. Its not truly a plot hole, but it is a very questionable decision on Kishi's part and is not consistent with that we've seen previously. There are more, but the timeline one regarding Obito and the Hidden Mist is the primary plothole in the story.
It was already known as the Bloody Mist before Obito took control.
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Obito took control of the Mizukage sometime before the Nine-Tails attack, most likely for Intel on Rin and to start forming his Akatsuki.
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Your possibility of Obito and Kakashi being different ages is a fantasy, they are the same age. Want undeniable proof Obito did not start the Bloody Mist?

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The Bloody Mist that Obito apparently created was created before he became Tobi, its a fact and is therefore a plothole that is yet to be explained.
The only people who have said Obito created the bloody mist are the readers. Kishi obviously said it wasn't him, which means Yagura did start that child program, Obito took control, things got more hectic and weird, and The higher ups assumed everything Yagura did that was questionable was done by someone else.

But thats another thing, they only got so far as to assume he was controlled. They were never able to prove it. So you can't take their word for it.
 

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The point I'm trying to make with this is that, at the very least, Kishi creates circumstances to where he is setting himself up to be criticized. Now its not that he has created various plotholes, but he has certainly created various circumstances that cause people to question his work. And if a writer is consistently creating situations that cause his readers to question his work, is he truly going about things the right way?
Any work of fiction can be criticized, as any and every work of fiction is as imperfect as the writer. You're looking at it too subjectively. Every person to a degree is different. Different personalities, traits, tastes, styles, intellects, emotional maturity, inspirations, environments, etc, and this effects their interpretations and opinions of things. For example, many believe the Lord of the Rings is a perfect series, whereas I believe in certain parts it is too elaborated, esoteric, poorly paced, one-sided and anticlimactic.

Now when it comes to the popular manga titles of our age, Bleach's writer Kubo has the infamous reputation of being a troll.
Floydical...let me explain something to you, if wish for people to take your threads, opinions, theses and criticisms seriously, you shouldn't use urban dictionary terms. There's absolutely no literary objectivity to them. The correct terms you are looking for are deus ex machina and diabolus ex machina.

Now why is he considered a troll? I guess its mostly the way he will often leave a chapter with a cliff hanger and not come back to the issue several chapters later.
Wrong. People refer to him this way when they dislike a certain direction or cannot see it coming. When their favorite characters are defeated in a way they dislike, when there is a revelation or plot device they do not understand, etc.

He goes about things his own way and some people don't like it.
Exactly.

But in all honesty, can any Bleach reader ever say in a million years that Bleach has any plotholes? Please rack your brain and tell me with a straight face that you can claim Bleach has even 1 plothole. I think you'd be hard-pressed to do so. The reason you can't is because Kubo has never introduced anything that conflicts with what he's already revealed.
I agree. I believe he foreshadows most of his devices and is consistent, though I wouldn't say Bleach is without any plot holes or inconsistencies at all.

Now the primary reason for this is that Kubo has simply been very vague with the details of his manga. Many things he reveals seem out of left field because its a topic he never really covered or only quickly passed over without revealing much.
It's called minimalism. It's a literary principle used to keep a number of aspects in mystique and suspense in order to use them in later or on multiple occasions.

In addition, while its very common for him to give his characters upgrades, they don't really break any rules of his manga because, honestly, he has left his manga world open to almost any possibility. The point here is that Kubo will often leave things extremely vague or unexplored so that when he later sheds light on the topic, you honestly have no room to question it.
Agreed.

In conclusion, I guess what I'm saying is that Kishi is a much more detail-oriented writer than Kubo.
More or less. Kishimoto tends to constantly expand on lore throughout the series while Kubo either keeps it vague or reals it all at once. Kubo also still makes most of his supporting characters more pivotal to the story, yet keeps is antagonists vague, while Kishimoto in part two steered a bit away from that and focused almost primarily on the development of the two main protagonists and antagonists. I think they both suffer from pacing issues at times.

While Kishi undoubtedly had the major plotlines of his story figured out from day one, he is very likely guilty of changing things along the way.
Retcons are very common in fictional media, especially in comics, TV series, manga and graphic novels that continue as a series for years.

The more detailed he made his story, the more complicated it became for him to make small story changes down the line. In at least one or two cases, I feel this has created a true plot hole in the story. This is in addition dozens of lines of story that might not be plot holes but are at the very least questionable decisions on Kishi's part and might have benefited from better planning.
True, but this is often an issue with most mainstream mangakas. With more time, they can pace themselves and their concepts. That's why several of them only release chapters monthly. When they become weekly however, they become subject to a timeframe or deadline and annoying editors and publishers that favor their own ideas and those of the audience and often force the mangaka to do what they want. This has happened numerous times with Kishimoto and Kubo. Kishimoto was forced to cut Hidan's backstory and elaborated fight and techniques out because the editors wanted him to rush things in order to get to the hunt for Itachi arc faster so they could make their big bucks, while Kubo's publishers forced him to make his manga weekly rather than monthly, as was most of the SS arc, and his editors asked him to let several characters he wished to kill off such as Hinamori and Byakuya survive, due to the fan bash lash they feared. They also made him completely cut Ashido from the canon. It was the same thing I believe with Neji and Chouji in the Rescue Sasuke arc.
 
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It was already known as the Bloody Mist before Obito took control.
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Obito took control of the Mizukage sometime before the Nine-Tails attack, most likely for Intel on Rin and to start forming his Akatsuki.
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I just posted that image above.

The point was that he seemed to be defending the possibility that Obito and Kakashi are not the same age, thus opening the possibility that Obito controlled the Mizukage while Zabuza killed off his comrades.

My point is that the history books tell us that the rise of the Bloody Mist and the creation of the graduation exam were the result of the Mizukage being controlled. We saw Obito controlling the Mizukage as Tobi but he could not have controlled them when the Bloody Mist started. This is, by pure definition, a plot hole until it is explained who controlled the Mizukage in the years prior to Obito becoming Tobi. And don't try to tell me elderly Madara could control a powerful Mizukage without being in his direct vicinity like Obito was required to do.

The only people who have said Obito created the bloody mist are the readers. Kishi obviously said it wasn't him, which means Yagura did start that child program, Obito took control, things got more hectic and weird, and The higher ups assumed everything Yagura did that was questionable was done by someone else.

But thats another thing, they only got so far as to assume he was controlled. They were never able to prove it. So you can't take their word for it.
We met the real Yagura in Naruto's mind a while back. His character was completely contrary to creating the Bloody Mist. Its a plot hole buddy.
 

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I just posted that image above.

The point was that he seemed to be defending the possibility that Obito and Kakashi are not the same age, thus opening the possibility that Obito controlled the Mizukage while Zabuza killed off his comrades.

My point is that the history books tell us that the rise of the Bloody Mist and the creation of the graduation exam were the result of the Mizukage being controlled. We saw Obito controlling the Mizukage as Tobi but he could not have controlled them when the Bloody Mist started. This is, by pure definition, a plot hole until it is explained who controlled the Mizukage in the years prior to Obito becoming Tobi. And don't try to tell me elderly Madara could control a powerful Mizukage without being in his direct vicinity like Obito was required to do.



We met the real Yagura in Naruto's mind a while back. His character was completely contrary to creating the Bloody Mist. Its a plot hole buddy.
The Bloody Mist is still a vague timeline and plot, but I believe we learned enough to put things together. Madara clearly still possessed a powerful genjutsu with the sharingan he had after he gave his rinnegan to Nagato. And since Nagato was in another country, it was apparent Madara had to have gone there. Before you say he was immobile, you need to remember that the mazou could move on its own on or under ground and carried Obito in and Madara in the war. With these facts in mind, it's safe to say he could still have manipulated Yagura, or the unrevealed third mizukage, who is implied to be the true creator of the bloody mist. In further regards to Yagura, he stated to Naruto that though he appeared as a child, he was actually an adult.
 
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