The mad hatter rhyme

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Please come and go,
as i am to and fro.
Have a cup of tea
for it is free.

My pals the chesire cat,
loves to steal my hat.
Tweedle dee and tweedle dum
like to sneak the rum.

The white rabbit is my friend
who is at times late
for a very important date, heh.

Joker is a good friend
he cheats at poker.
Alice is a wonderful gal s
he is the one
who fell down a rabbit's hole.

The white queen
she is not at all mean.
A dear friend of mine
please dont think you can dine


my enemy the queen of hearts
comes and go with her beast the jeckawacky.
That is no fun
she cant be done.

If you have a matter
come talk to me the mad hatter.
Thank you for the time
I must flip on like a dime.
 
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Poems help relieve the stress I go through my life. I don't mind you guys commenting on it on how bad or good it is but please don't tell me that I need to stop for the night. That's all I ask. I am not demanding or anything but please, don't tell me what I can and can not do. Thank you though all for your opinions on my poems.
 

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Poems help relieve the stress I go through my life. I don't mind you guys commenting on it on how bad or good it is but please don't tell me that I need to stop for the night. That's all I ask. I am not demanding or anything but please, don't tell me what I can and can not do. Thank you though all for your opinions on my poems.
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Poems help relieve the stress I go through my life. I don't mind you guys commenting on it on how bad or good it is but please don't tell me that I need to stop for the night. That's all I ask. I am not demanding or anything but please, don't tell me what I can and can not do. Thank you though all for your opinions on my poems.
Oh! By all means. ^_^ I was referring to myself. To your poem, it was alright.
 

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It's a great poem. Your results may benefit from a more rigid application of the meter though. Perhaps you could help me out with my Rhythm Assisted Poetry (RAP) sometime...
I feel you with regard to the whole
Poems help relieve the stress I go through my life
thing. I use it to deal with my violent tendencies and ADHD.
 

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It's a great poem. Your results may benefit from a more rigid application of the meter though. Perhaps you could help me out with my Rhythm Assisted Poetry (RAP) sometime...
I feel you with regard to the whole thing. I use it to deal with my violent tendencies and ADHD.
Heh im bullied, stressed from family problems and stressed from fake friends. Ill do my best to help
 
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