The Loveless Marriage......by Ino Yamanaka

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Chapter 1
A Not-So-Romantic Night

Five months ago, I married a man named Chouji Akimichi and they moved in with his two children: Konahamaru and Yakumo. This is where my story begins.....

As I stepped into the building, I was amazed Chouji could bring me here. There were lights, people socializing, atmosphere, and food! ?Oh Chou, thank you for bringing me here tonight. This is such a wonderful experience.? I said. ?Anything for you Ino? he said, smiling at me. As we went onto the dance floor, it was a magical time, until I noticed something was wrong. ?Oh Chou, you are so good to me, nothing could be better than this. Oh my!? I gasped, I noticed that Chouji had run off and I stood hugging a poll. ?Where is he, I wish that-oh no!? I said, with a frown. ? They are all so much better than Ino. Here I come babies.? Chouji growled, leaping into the air. As I saw him collapse on the food table, I knew the so-called romantic night was over. As I watched Chouji devour shrimp, lobster tails, salmon, and many more delectable items, I knew this night was almost over. As I sat, unhappy, in my seat, I felt a gentle tap on my back. ?Chouji, you have come back? I shrieked, filled with joy. But it wasn't Chouji...
 

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Chapter 1
A Not-So-Romantic Night

Five months ago, I married a man named Chouji Akimichi and they moved in with his two children: Konahamaru and Yakumo. This is where my story begins.....

As I stepped into the building, I was amazed Chouji could bring me here. There were lights, people socializing, atmosphere, and food! ?Oh Chou, thank you for bringing me here tonight. This is such a wonderful experience.? I said. ?Anything for you Ino? he said, smiling at me. As we went onto the dance floor, it was a magical time, until I noticed something was wrong. ?Oh Chou, you are so good to me, nothing could be better than this. Oh my!? I gasped, I noticed that Chouji had run off and I stood hugging a poll. ?Where is he, I wish that-oh no!? I said, with a frown. ? They are all so much better than Ino. Here I come babies.? Chouji growled, leaping into the air. As I saw him collapse on the food table, I knew the so-called romantic night was over. As I watched Chouji devour shrimp, lobster tails, salmon, and many more delectable items, I knew this night was almost over. As I sat, unhappy, in my seat, I felt a gentle tap on my back. ?Chouji, you have come back? I shrieked, filled with joy. But it wasn't Chouji...
you married chouji hahaha and hos behind you
 

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Chapter 2
Love at First Dance

It was not Chouji. Instead, my eyes met an unfamiliar face, someone I did not know. “Care to dance” he asked with a smile. As Donna Summer came on, playing “Last Dance”, my evening had just begun. We danced for hours, the most romantic time I ever had, and I did not even know who this person was! As we exited the dance floor, we headed toward the balcony. “Will I ever see you again after tonight Ino?” he pleaded. “I am married, and don’t even know your name.” I said. “You are in a loveless marriage, come with me” he said, taking hold of my hand. “I can’t, and…. Oh no! Chouji is coming, we must hide!” As I hid behind the swinging door with this mysterious figure, I heard Chouji barfing off the balcony. It sounded like he ate too much, to me personally. As we ran inside, he heard us. “Dive into the fountain” he shrieked and I did as he said. As Chouji saw me, I quickly dove underwater. There I felt safe. As we stood up, we had a small kiss and I was forced to go home. Would I ever see this mystery man again? I found a small slip of paper in my pocket, his address.
 

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Chapter 2
Love at First Dance

It was not Chouji. Instead, my eyes met an unfamiliar face, someone I did not know. ?Care to dance? he asked with a smile. As Donna Summer came on, playing ?Last Dance?, my evening had just begun. We danced for hours, the most romantic time I ever had, and I did not even know who this person was! As we exited the dance floor, we headed toward the balcony. ?Will I ever see you again after tonight Ino?? he pleaded. ?I am married, and don?t even know your name.? I said. ?You are in a loveless marriage, come with me? he said, taking hold of my hand. ?I can?t, and?. Oh no! Chouji is coming, we must hide!? As I hid behind the swinging door with this mysterious figure, I heard Chouji barfing off the balcony. It sounded like he ate too much, to me personally. As we ran inside, he heard us. ?Dive into the fountain? he shrieked and I did as he said. As Chouji saw me, I quickly dove underwater. There I felt safe. As we stood up, we had a small kiss and I was forced to go home. Would I ever see this mystery man again? I found a small slip of paper in my pocket, his address.
did you finish the 3th

i cant belive i cind of like this stuuf
 
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Chapter 3
The Deal with Yakumo

As I was forced home, I rushed into our bedroom. I looked at all the pictures and knew I had to see him again. I needed to figure out a plan. As I slept that night, actually unable to sleep. Chouji's snoring and rustling kept me wide-awake. I figured out a plan to see my mysterious figure once again. The next morning, I prepared the cereal for breakfast. I then saw Yakumo, and had to put my scheme into action. “Yakumo, mommy needs your help” I pleaded. “What is it?” Yakumo asked. “I need you to keep your daddy busy for a couple of hours. Kick, scream, do whatever, just make sure he doesn’t notice I am missing.” “I don’t know, but…” she grumbled. I bribed her with a couple fruit roll-ups and a snickers bar from Halloween. That evening around five o’clock, I made my escape into the pinkish yellow sky. I ran away as fast as I could, and found the house. I knocked on an apartment door. “Guess he is not rich” I mumbled. As he answered the door, he greeted me with a hug.

Chapter 4
Inside the Mysterious Home

“I see you found my note,” he said, grinning. “Yes and I came to say…. I can’t see you, I am happily married.” He laughed so hard that he fell over. After that, we ate a small dinner of fish and undercooked vegetables. Apparently, the fish was bad and he got food poisoning. I felt so bad for him; I stayed a long time. “What is your…. “ I heard a bell ring, it was 9 o’clock. I knew my deal with Yakumo would end soon. I rushed out the door and ran home as fast as I could. The door was locked when I reached home. I tried to get in. Chouji came and knew I was missing. I had to do something. I climbed the fence and was in our backyard. I smashed open our sliding glass door and knew I needed to buy an alarm system. “What’s that noise” Chouji screamed. “Its me Louis, I…I was washing the car, and it turned on, breaking the door.” “YOU ARE SO STUPID INO.” I can’t believe he bought that. Who did I think he was? No Albert Newton I knew for sure!
 
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Chapter 3
The Deal with Yakumo

As I was forced home, I rushed into our bedroom. I looked at all the pictures and knew I had to see him again. I needed to figure out a plan. As I slept that night, actually unable to sleep. Chouji's snoring and rustling kept me wide-awake. I figured out a plan to see my mysterious figure once again. The next morning, I prepared the cereal for breakfast. I then saw Yakumo, and had to put my scheme into action. ?Yakumo, mommy needs your help? I pleaded. ?What is it?? Yakumo asked. ?I need you to keep your daddy busy for a couple of hours. Kick, scream, do whatever, just make sure he doesn?t notice I am missing.? ?I don?t know, but?? she grumbled. I bribed her with a couple fruit roll-ups and a snickers bar from Halloween. That evening around five o?clock, I made my escape into the pinkish yellow sky. I ran away as fast as I could, and found the house. I knocked on an apartment door. ?Guess he is not rich? I mumbled. As he answered the door, he greeted me with a hug.

Chapter 4
Inside the Mysterious Home

?I see you found my note,? he said, grinning. ?Yes and I came to say?. I can?t see you, I am happily married.? He laughed so hard that he fell over. After that, we ate a small dinner of fish and undercooked vegetables. Apparently, the fish was bad and he got food poisoning. I felt so bad for him; I stayed a long time. ?What is your?. ? I heard a bell ring, it was 9 o?clock. I knew my deal with Yakumo would end soon. I rushed out the door and ran home as fast as I could. The door was locked when I reached home. I tried to get in. Chouji came and knew I was missing. I had to do something. I climbed the fence and was in our backyard. I smashed open our sliding glass door and knew I needed to buy an alarm system. ?What?s that noise? Chouji screamed. ?Its me Louis, I?I was washing the car, and it turned on, breaking the door.? ?YOU ARE SO STUPID INO.? I can?t believe he bought that. Who did I think he was? No Albert Newton I knew for sure!
where are you copyng this things
 

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Chapter 5
A Holiday Surprise

It was early December, my favorite time of the year for my favorite activity: shopping. Our whole family went out to buy presents but I was the only one who actually did so. My other members, Chouji, Konahamaru, and Yakumo, all stayed by the food court. As I went into a store, I could smell a donut hole right behind me. “Chouji, if you want a present, you can’t watch me buy it for you” “Well maybe it’s to expensive,” he said. I knew that was not Chouji. He may have smelled like some nasty food but he never cared about me spending for him. As I slowly turned around, it was that mysterious man, once again. “Are you stalking me?” I asked him. “No, just waiting until you accept the fact that you love me more that that other guy” he told me. Everyone in the store didn’t notice but Chouji did. He rushed over and was ready to kill the other guy.

Chapter 6
A Proposal Not Made

I grabbed hold of the new guy, and we hid in a clothing bin. We stayed until we heard him leave. As we both freed ourselves from the clothes, he handed me a box. Inside it was a small ring, with a small diamond in the center. “What is this for?” I asked. “Ino, will you mar--” I cut him off there. As I threw the ring as far away as I could, I said to him, “I am married and will not leave that engagement.” As he stood up, he looked at me and smiled. “You will change your mind soon, I know this for a fact. If you didn’t like me, why are you hiding me from your husband? Why aren’t you telling him about me to put an end to my visits? You know inside you have more love for me than him” As he walked away, I ran and picked up the ring I had tossed. No way was I leaving this, it was worth something! Money value of course but maybe more, one day it will. “Who was that man” Chouji grumbled. “Salesperson helping me find you size.”

Chapter 7
In the Garden of Eden

Later on in that week, I had an urge to see my mysterious figure once more. I went walking in the park around eight o’clock. There I saw that strange man, how did he know I would be here? I walked over, trying not to see him. He suddenly grabbed my hand. “Where are you taking me?” We ran through the gardens and waterfalls, as the sprinklers came on. “How do you like this small park in Konoha town at night?” he asked me. “It was truly magical” I replied. We strolled along, and I completely forgot about Chouji. “So, how is your happy marriage?” he inquired. “What other marriage” I said, “except the one I should be honoring.” “Stop it! Let me go!” Instead, we fell and rolled all the way downhill in the flowers. I had never experienced such a romantic time with Chouji. “I know this was an awkward meet, but this is the last time I will ever see you. I can’t marry you and I hope you understand” “Completely” he stated. I ran home as the clouds cast a dark shadow over the park.
 
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Chapter 8
The Truth is Revealed

I returned home, depressed, and found Chouji asleep. I walked into the bedroom and fell asleep. I awoke the next morning to a loud ringing. It was Chouji's computer. As I walked into his office, I saw the awful truth. Chouji was looking at something inappropriate on the web. Crushed, I ran to the bathroom and vomited. I cried my eyes out and finally came out, hoping the day would go better. Chouji awoke and told me today he was expecting a package, very special and he needed it ASAP. The phone was ringing at noon and I answered it. “Hello?” “Chouji, I gave you the package, I’ll left it under the doormat.” Immediately, I ran and found a zip-lock bag, filled with a white powder. I ran back to the telephone. “Who are you? WHO ARE YOU?” I screamed. I was left with the dial tone. I learned from Chouji's e-mail that he had many other drugs ordered and what he had been doing Saturdays. I nearly died from the shock and only one person could console me. I ran to the mysterious man’s apartment. I stayed for hours, and he said nothing. “Why would Chouji do such a thing?”

Chapter 9
The Prevail into a Better Place

As I returned home, I felt like killing myself. There was nothing left to live for. My husband had betrayed me, my life was ruined, and I could not marry the mysterious figure. I walked home and went straight to bed. That night, everything changed. At one o’clock in the morning, I heard a crash; it was our bedroom window. I ran and turned on the light as the black figure walked over to the bed. I tripped on the blankets and hid out of sight. The black figure knocked me out, and all I heard was a huge bang, me falling to the ground. I woke up at five o’clock and switched on the light. There, I saw my room ruined. Everything messed up and there he was. There was Chouji, on his face, dead, with a knife pierced through his heart. Konahamaru and Yakumo walked in the room. “What happened last night? We heard crashes and everything?” they questioned. “It is okay, Chouji is in a better place know.”

Chapter 10
Marriage and Murder

I was going to die. My life had been completely burned to the ground. The only thing to save myself was marrying the mysterious man. Police came with the FBI, searching for whom killed my husband and the drug deliverers. I walked to the apartment and knocked on the door. This is it Ino, Chouji would want you to be happy. “Ino, why are you here?” he said with a puzzled look. “I will marry you,” I said, showing him the ring he gave me in December. A week passed and all preparations were made. I was to be married and hopefully live a happy life. As I walked down the aisle, I could feel Chouji there with me. I reached the altar and we said our vows. “Do you take Ino Yamanaka to be your wife?” the priest said. “I do” he stated. “And do you take—“ he said, interrupted. “Stop the wedding!” A police officer and the FBI ran towards me. Ino, this man murdered your husband. “We found traces of his hair, footprints, and DNA. We also discovered he set your previous husband up. The drugs and websites, he broke in and put them on his computer.” The officer said, slowly. I turned to my husband-to-be. “Is this true?” I asked. “Your right! I wanted you and I was better. If I can’t be your husband, no one can!” He pulled out a knife and was about to stab me. There was a shot fired and the police shot him dead.

..... Ino in shock, fell to the floor, crying. As Ino felt Chouji comforting her and saw the man she had loved, she knew it was the end.
 
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my computer silly, i wrote it in a word document so i could save it. I wrote this like 2 months ago and i just saw the fanfiction section so i decided to edit some and post
 
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