[Mystery] The Legendary Sage of Six Paths 3

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Hehe, what I've found myself doing a lot with this work, is that I end each chapter on a somewhat high note, only to track back even a few days to headline some other stuff. I'm not sure how you readers interpret this, but personally I think it's working decently at least.

Yukimura is probably one of few characters that I'll give a broader perspective on for this fic. So yeah, I thought I would have to flesh him out some early on. For those of you who are familiar with the Sengoku (Warring States Period) in Japan, several names should already have crossed your mind while reading this.
As for the wager, it is often seen in cultures as such back then. I don't really know how to explain it properly, but for those who are familiar with such historic times in both Japanese and Chinese history alike, this shouldn't come off as such a shocker.
In fact, to help make things even more clear, I'm going to add something cool starting next chapter to further put empathy on the time period of the Sage, to help the reader get an even further insight into the Samurai culture ;)

Thanks bro, really appreciate these reviews! For some reason, they always give me insight into something I feel like I have to do/include, which is kind of nice. I think your reviews so far has given me 5 new ideas, which is kind of crazy to think of xD I think I know where to incorporate them though! ;) As for the dragon "reference" in this chapter, I think it would have made even more sense if you had completely read The Forgotten Tale. Then again, you might even have gotten that far by the time you see this reply, haha :p
Much to come indeed! I'm going to try pick up my pace now that I seemingly got two new readers on board for this work.
Yes, well it is working so great job! ;)

I see, well that is very kind of you clarify further and should be very interesting! =D

You’re welcome! ^^ I find that so cool-that my reviews actually aid you =D And as brilliantly as you are, you’ve already decided where to incorporate your new ideas! ^^ I kind of see what you meant by the dragon and The Forgotten Tale lol I’m so happy to hear that there are new readers as that is always refreshing! Keep going my friend! ;)
 

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Yes, well it is working so great job! ;)

I see, well that is very kind of you clarify further and should be very interesting! =D

You’re welcome! ^^ I find that so cool-that my reviews actually aid you =D And as brilliantly as you are, you’ve already decided where to incorporate your new ideas! ^^ I kind of see what you meant by the dragon and The Forgotten Tale lol I’m so happy to hear that there are new readers as that is always refreshing! Keep going my friend! ;)
Haha, well when I look back, I must say that this one sure has been more of a success than The Forgotten Tale: A Link Through Time, which was kind of clunky at times. This one feels more fluently overall though which is good. As for A Link Through Time, there's actually a reference to the Zelda franchise in the actual name of it, which nobody has caught yet. Alas, I didn't expect anyone to either at this stage, but if you must know, there are two Zelda games that are called: A Link to the Past, & A Link between Worlds. So yeah, that one was a nod towards it, but it also made sense to call it A Link Through Time since Naruto traveled to the past.
 

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Haha, well when I look back, I must say that this one sure has been more of a success than The Forgotten Tale: A Link Through Time, which was kind of clunky at times. This one feels more fluently overall though which is good. As for A Link Through Time, there's actually a reference to the Zelda franchise in the actual name of it, which nobody has caught yet. Alas, I didn't expect anyone to either at this stage, but if you must know, there are two Zelda games that are called: A Link to the Past, & A Link between Worlds. So yeah, that one was a nod towards it, but it also made sense to call it A Link Through Time since Naruto traveled to the past.
I would have to agree with you but that just shows how we continue to evolve and only get better with practice-well at least you as me on the other hand, have a much longer time getting things to stick to my brain lol

Yeah, even though I’m not a Zelda fan, my brother is one so I recognized the title to be related and I can see why you’d name it that as it’s fitting due to Naruto’s time traveling :)
 

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I would have to agree with you but that just shows how we continue to evolve and only get better with practice-well at least you as me on the other hand, have a much longer time getting things to stick to my brain lol

Yeah, even though I’m not a Zelda fan, my brother is one so I recognized the title to be related and I can see why you’d name it that as it’s fitting due to Naruto’s time traveling :)
Haha, and you're not giving yourself enough credit bro =p

That's cool I suppose ^^ But yeah, my main focus now is to get this story done.
 

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Wow..now I see what you meant at the end of chapter 2 when you said 3 will move at a fast pace ^^
Another awesome chap!
Thanks bro ^^ I still can't believe that you have actually begun on this tale. I mean, I never thought I would get more that 3 avid readers, but they seem to be coming in from all corners lately, haha. If I can be lucky enough, I might have as much as 6 people which is insane by today's standards, haha. Thanks again and really appreciate the comments bro ^^ ;)
 

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Thanks bro ^^ I still can't believe that you have actually begun on this tale. I mean, I never thought I would get more that 3 avid readers, but they seem to be coming in from all corners lately, haha. If I can be lucky enough, I might have as much as 6 people which is insane by today's standards, haha. Thanks again and really appreciate the comments bro ^^ ;)
Probably the fan fiction section is slowly but surely coming back to life? XD
 

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Probably the fan fiction section is slowly but surely coming back to life? XD
Haha if only... Alas, we're just pushing through with the little we got nowadays and even I, as naive as I was in the past, can sense that. It's still enough to go by though, but it's basically on the last run if you ask me. The good old days... I don't know how often I say just that these days, haha xP
 
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