Yes, well it is working so great job!Hehe, what I've found myself doing a lot with this work, is that I end each chapter on a somewhat high note, only to track back even a few days to headline some other stuff. I'm not sure how you readers interpret this, but personally I think it's working decently at least.
Yukimura is probably one of few characters that I'll give a broader perspective on for this fic. So yeah, I thought I would have to flesh him out some early on. For those of you who are familiar with the Sengoku (Warring States Period) in Japan, several names should already have crossed your mind while reading this.
As for the wager, it is often seen in cultures as such back then. I don't really know how to explain it properly, but for those who are familiar with such historic times in both Japanese and Chinese history alike, this shouldn't come off as such a shocker.
In fact, to help make things even more clear, I'm going to add something cool starting next chapter to further put empathy on the time period of the Sage, to help the reader get an even further insight into the Samurai culture
Thanks bro, really appreciate these reviews! For some reason, they always give me insight into something I feel like I have to do/include, which is kind of nice. I think your reviews so far has given me 5 new ideas, which is kind of crazy to think of xD I think I know where to incorporate them though!As for the dragon "reference" in this chapter, I think it would have made even more sense if you had completely read The Forgotten Tale. Then again, you might even have gotten that far by the time you see this reply, haha
Much to come indeed! I'm going to try pick up my pace now that I seemingly got two new readers on board for this work.
I see, well that is very kind of you clarify further and should be very interesting! =D
You’re welcome! ^^ I find that so cool-that my reviews actually aid you =D And as brilliantly as you are, you’ve already decided where to incorporate your new ideas! ^^ I kind of see what you meant by the dragon and The Forgotten Tale lol I’m so happy to hear that there are new readers as that is always refreshing! Keep going my friend!