The Legendary Sage of Konoha

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Nice fanfic you got here Michael. A good start and let's see if you can keep up the good work. I'm really looking forward to this one, there's so much that I'm curious about. Like who is the new tsuchikage and what happaned to tsunade, but what I'm really curious about is what kind of new akatsuki members have arrived. The only thing that bothers me is that jiraiya( narutos son likely) refers to shikamaru by his first name and doesn't add sensei afterwards. It makes shikamaru look less superior. Or maybe it's just me being weird. Btw good job on your first ff.
 
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Nice fanfic you got here Michael. A good start and let's see if you can keep up the good work. I'm really looking forward to this one, there's so much that I'm curious about. Like who is the new tsuchikage and what happaned to tsunade, but what I'm really curious about is what kind of new akatsuki members have arrived. The only thing that bothers me is that jiraiya( narutos son likely) refers to shikamaru by his first name and doesn't add sensei afterwards. It makes shikamaru look less superior. Or maybe it's just me being weird. Btw good job on your first ff.
Oh thanks, nice comments on different aspects of the chapter, most of the peoples only write great one or looking forward to next time. Appriciate that you took yourself time to read it. Well if you`ve read chapter two you might have already found out why Jiraiya doesn`t act as formal as he might have should. Hope you will continue reading:);)

Chapter 3 will be released today so if you`re still at chapter 1, you "might" want to hurry;):p:)
 
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Wow I have to say this FanFic is awesome! I know I'm a tad late here but I saw the title and was tempted to read it for a while just never had the time. XD

But I'll read the next chapter and try to catch up! Although I can say the surprise isn't much of a surprise anymore about who the Hokage is. (I read the above posts... XD) Nether the less Awesome Writing pal! ^__^
 
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