The Legendary Sage of Konoha

[Sennin Jinchuuriki]

GREAT WORK DUDE can't wait to read the next one, please let me know when you are gonna release the next one. And quite interesting Jiraiya I really like this awesome work specially for your first time you will become very good in not time keep it up

 

[Michael92]

GREAT WORK DUDE can't wait to read the next one, please let me know when you are gonna release the next one. And quite interesting Jiraiya I really like this awesome work specially for your first time you will become very good in not time keep it up

I`ll notice you when it`s released

Good to hear that you liked it, I`ll release it soon.
I was thinking of Wedensday, but then it would crash with Naruto and same with Thursday.

So i was thinking tomorrow, but that might be a little too soon(I want the first chapter to be out there a little time before i release the second one), so it has to be either Wedensday, Thursday or Friday(most likely)..

EDIT: I was thinking about something.
If you liked my first chapter, then you could rate the thread(at the top of it). Would appriciate it

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Thank you for giving it a chance and no need to excuse your cred, you`ve earned it
I mean, you and pervy are the only ones left of the "old" crewU_U and you are one of the sources for my inspiration after all

Well as you might get the story hasn`t even got outside the Hokage office yet, so there`s many other characters`"fate" to reveal yet, including Lee, Neji, Kiba, and Sasuke among others, so no need to give up "hope" yet

The Hokage`s wife will be revealed soon, and as I`ve said, it`s not for sure who the hokage is yet..

Lastly, you did what I`ve hoped for and that is for someone to comment different aspects of the chapter like Kakashi entering through the window(may not be like his true character at all, but i wanted him to replace Jiraiya`s role on entering through itxd) and Akatsuki`s return

However, i still wanted someone to comment about the kages(Mei and Gaara still being Mizukage and Kazekage, Killerbee becoming Raikage, that Ònoki has left the kage role for somebody else(who recently died) and that the shinobi who fought off both Kabuto and Zetsu is rumored to become the next one), who the other "second in command" along side Shikamaru is, and who the Anbu leader is.

Even so, that doesn`t really matter, because it will be revealed in the upcoming chapters

Good to hear that i didn`t have too much grammar errors or similar.

Anyway, sorry if the reply was a little late everyone, got stuck on work and friends

Thanks, well your first chapter/part was so huge that I could not get to it all in one post there was just so much going on (which was good because it had me pulled in). Yes I did like what you did with the Kages. I think those were phenomenal choices. I still hope the Hokage's wife is not Sakura lol I wonder what became of former team taka and I am truly happy to hear that Sasuke will be making a comeback-I can hardly wait. You know-I am in your fanifc believe it or not; through Sasuke's character XD Fantastic beginning storyline/plot and great writing overall! ​

 

[Michael92]

Thanks, well your first chapter/part was so huge that I could not get to it all in one post there was just so much going on (which was good because it had me pulled in). Yes I did like what you did with the Kages. I think those were phenomenal choices. I still hope the Hokage's wife is not Sakura lol I wonder what became of former team taka and I am truly happy to hear that Sasuke will be making a comeback-I can hardly wait. You know-I am in your fanifc believe it or not; through Sasuke's character XD Fantastic beginning storyline/plot and great writing overall! ​

Yeah i thought so as well. I mean, first i was thinking of making it a short chapter, but then i felt like making it longer so that the 3 first chapter or so wouldn`t just be talking and such..

Anyway, arn`t you overdoing it a little? It might have been cool choices with the kages, but it`s most like not the best decision that could have been made..

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Yeah i thought so as well. I mean, first i was thinking of making it a short chapter, but then i felt like making it longer so that the 3 first chapter or so wouldn`t just be talking and such..

Anyway, arn`t you overdoing it a little? It might have been cool choices with the kages, but it`s most like not the best decision that could have been made..

Whoa, and here I thought your fanfic was initally made to go for awhile but you were actually thinking of making it short (which by all means is something great all in itself).

Not at all-Mei still a Kage meaning she has aged but has still remained the top of her village. Kirabi took over his brother's role either because he died in the battlefield, old age, etc. Onoki dying was simply epic and Gaara still remaining the Godaime Kazekage is just plain right! ^.^ The next Akatsuki must be something else seeing as he was able to defeat Kabuto/Zetsu. The mystery behind this ANBU it is all very interesting, just keep it up!​

 

[Michael92]

Whoa, and here I thought your fanfic was initally made to go for awhile but you were actually thinking of making it short (which by all means is something great all in itself).

Not at all-Mei still a Kage meaning she has aged but has still remained the top of her village. Kirabi took over his brother's role either because he died in the battlefield, old age, etc. Onoki dying was simply epic and Gaara still remaining the Godaime Kazekage is just plain right! ^.^ The next Akatsuki must be something else seeing as he was able to defeat Kabuto/Zetsu. The mystery behind this ANBU it is all very interesting, just keep it up!​

Nice points there, but it looks like you missunderstood at some points.

First i was talking about that i was thinking of making this chapter short and not my FF But i changed my mind and made the first chapter twice as long.

As for the FF, I can see that i need to make at least 10 chapters to complete my story

Furthermore, you missunderstood about Onoki.
He was(is in current manga time) the third Tsuchikage, and the Tsuchikage who died was actually the fourth(Onoki`s succsesor)xd

And lastly, "The next Akatsuki must be something else seeing as he was able to defeat Kabuto/Zetsu."

The next Akatsuki was able to defeat Kabuto/Zetus(team mates)? I`m betting that you missunderstood there as well(xd) It was an unknown Shinobi of the hidden rock village who defeated Kabuto/Zetsu after the 4th Tsuchikage died and that he was rumored to become the next Tsuchikage(the 5th)

But everything else was understood/logical/right/possible

 

[Konoha Rokudaime]

Thanks for the message. Otherwise i'm gonna miss a good FF. Congrats, its really nice to read. Especially on reading 1st part conclusion, i thought Jiraiya came back alive but on reading part 2, it happen that Jiraiya is none other than Hokage's son. (Naruto,eh? i couldn't think any other shinobi who would name his son Jiraiya). Also, can the leader of ANBU be Konohamaru(i just assume he would have fire element, so he might have mastered krs:katon rasenshuriken )?

Keep up and goog luck for the coming series.

Remember I'm waiting for the next series.

 

[Michael92]

Thanks for the message. Otherwise i'm gonna miss a good FF. Congrats, its really nice to read. Especially on reading 1st part conclusion, i thought Jiraiya came back alive but on reading part 2, it happen that Jiraiya is none other than Hokage's son. (Naruto,eh? i couldn't think any other shinobi who would name his son Jiraiya). Also, can the leader of ANBU be Konohamaru(i just assume he would have fire element, so he might have mastered krs:katon rasenshuriken )?

Keep up and good luck for the coming series.

Remember I'm waiting for the next series.

Hehe sure First one to comment the first part individually

Who knows, the Hokage and the Anbu leader could be anyone but a nice theory there.

Just take a look at Sasuke. He`s named after Hiruzen Sarutobi`s father..

 

[Jokey]

me gonna kill u if not read >.<

jk lol

its really good

You are really going to Chibi. :|

 

[Michael92]

You are really going to Chibi. :|

Off Topic:

You mean Chibi like in Red Cliff?O.O

 

[Michael92]

UPDATE:

I got some good news and i got some bad news.
Lets start with the bad ones:

BAD: I won`t be able to release the next chapter untill Monday because i have my weekend filled up with work:-/

GOOD: I`ve already written chapter 2 and 3, and chapter 3 will be released next Friday. So Chapter 2 at Monday and Chapter 3 at next Friday...

I might even post a preview of chapter two at Saturday if I`m able to.

Thank you for being patientU_U

 

[Hammy120290]

Leader of the Anbu has to be Konohamaru right

 

[Michael92]

Leader of the Anbu has to be Konohamaru right

You will just have to wait and see

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Nice points there, but it looks like you missunderstood at some points.

First i was talking about that i was thinking of making this chapter short and not my FF But i changed my mind and made the first chapter twice as long.

As for the FF, I can see that i need to make at least 10 chapters to complete my story

Furthermore, you missunderstood about Onoki.
He was(is in current manga time) the third Tsuchikage, and the Tsuchikage who died was actually the fourth(Onoki`s succsesor)xd

And lastly, "The next Akatsuki must be something else seeing as he was able to defeat Kabuto/Zetsu."

The next Akatsuki was able to defeat Kabuto/Zetus(team mates)? I`m betting that you missunderstood there as well(xd) It was an unknown Shinobi of the hidden rock village who defeated Kabuto/Zetsu after the 4th Tsuchikage died and that he was rumored to become the next Tsuchikage(the 5th)

But everything else was understood/logical/right/possible

Whoa! I am very embarrassed at the fact that I did indeed misunderstood a good portion out of your fanfic and for that I do apologize. That is highly unlikely as I do take my time when reading fanfics and I am pretty sure that I did the same with yours but you know, I suppose that simply amps up your fanfic more. I have to now play very close attention so that I may not miss anything however; the up side to this is that it makes your fanfic more complex which in turn makes your fanfic that much more appealing to me because when I do not understand something it tends to really draw me in

Also, like many others have hinted to I as well think that Konohamaru most likely will turn out to be the ANBU leader ^.^​

 

[Michael92]

Whoa! I am very embarrassed at the fact that I did indeed misunderstood a good portion out of your fanfic and for that I do apologize. That is highly unlikely as I do take my time when reading fanfics and I am pretty sure that I did the same with yours but you know, I suppose that simply amps up your fanfic more. I have to now play very close attention so that I may not miss anything however; the up side to this is that it makes your fanfic more complex which in turn makes your fanfic that much more appealing to me because when I do not understand something it tends to really draw me in

Also, like many others have hinted to I as well think that Konohamru most lickly will turn out to be the ANBU leader ^.^​

Hehe, nice to see that you didn`t give up on it just because you missed out at some pointsxd

Did you see my update btw? Then you better get ready for Monday(if i don`t get out a preview by tomorrow)

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Hehe, nice to see that you didn`t give up on it just because you missed out at some pointsxd

Did you see my update btw? Then you better get ready for Monday(if i don`t get out a preview by tomorrow)

Are you for real? How could I give up on your fanfic-that is just a disturbing thought lol I did see your update and will be there for the release ​

 

[Michael92]

Are you for real? How could I give up on your fanfic-that is just a disturbing thought lol I did see your update and will be there for the release ​

Hehe, some peoples tends to give up on something if there is something that they`re not understanding or if they missed somethingxd

Anyway, looking forward to then, if you don`t post your next part today/tomorrow

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Hehe, some peoples tends to give up on something if there is something that they`re not understanding or if they missed somethingxd

Anyway, looking forward to then, if you don`t post your next part today/tomorrow

I suppose you have a point but I like a challenge and anyways you are my best friend so it is only natural that I would continue to read but nevertheless I really like your fanfic ​

 

[Michael92]

I suppose you have a point but I like a challenge and anyways you are my best friend so it is only natural that I would continue to read but nevertheless I really like your fanfic ​

Arigato Hopefully I`ll be able to post a preview tomorrow, and if not, then you will just have to wait untill Monday unfortunatly:-/

 

[zapp42823]

nice epic, i like it! when will be the next issue nisan?