The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 18 [33]

[Flash]

What? Are you nuts? This chapter was

Epic!!

I dunno what you didn't like in this. This was one of the best reads of your FF ever. No kidding.

The length was perfect according to my interest. The narration of the fight was Outstanding. I could literally imagine what you wanted to convey. The fight scenes were so amazing. Actually even in the manga/anime, you don't see ppl using jutsu against a jutsu. They simply keep dodging. (Shikamaru vs Tayuya, Deidara vs Gaara, Kakuzu vs Ino-Shika-Cho etc.) So this felt a bit more realistic. When you say they're size is 4 times larger than the jubi!!, I would literally laugh if you were to give Naruto a super duper jutsu to one shot these beasts xD
I liked the fact that Naruto could defeat only one of them and that was using his brains.
You gave a reason as to why he was just running and not attacking. Very satisfactory.

So finally there was a toad that was his summon lol. The boss toad was super cool. His attitude lol. Good use of dialogues as well.

I really don't think there was any negative feed back in this chapter. You could perhaps change the dialogue of Naruto from "fcuk" to "siht". Lol


Funfacts:

1. Lol We know it already xD
2. Don't care. Cuz I'm always on my phone so its not possible for me to listen to it.
3. U r mad :|
4. I enjoy big chapters
5. Disagrees. I liked the whole story.
6. *thumbs up*

 

[Michael92]

What? Are you nuts? This chapter was

Epic!!

I dunno what you didn't like in this. This was one of the best reads of your FF ever. No kidding.

The length was perfect according to my interest. The narration of the fight was Outstanding. I could literally imagine what you wanted to convey. The fight scenes were so amazing. Actually even in the manga/anime, you don't see ppl using jutsu against a jutsu. They simply keep dodging. (Shikamaru vs Tayuya, Deidara vs Gaara, Kakuzu vs Ino-Shika-Cho etc.) So this felt a bit more realistic. When you say they're size is 4 times larger than the jubi!!, I would literally laugh if you were to give Naruto a super duper jutsu to one shot these beasts xD
I liked the fact that Naruto could defeat only one of them and that was using his brains.
You gave a reason as to why he was just running and not attacking. Very satisfactory.

So finally there was a toad that was his summon lol. The boss toad was super cool. His attitude lol. Good use of dialogues as well.

I really don't think there was any negative feed back in this chapter. You could perhaps change the dialogue of Naruto from "fcuk" to "siht". Lol


Funfacts:

1. Lol We know it already xD
2. Don't care. Cuz I'm always on my phone so its not possible for me to listen to it.
3. U r mad :|
4. I enjoy big chapters
5. Disagrees. I liked the whole story.
6. *thumbs up*

O___O So you're disagreeing with Kyon?? xD Well that's a good thing I suppose, as I did not get the right feeling about this chapter myself, and when you tell me it's one of my best, I... Well thanks mate, means a lot ^_^
I'm glad you liked it as this was kind of the first chapter to a new battle, and not only a new battle to this FF, but also a totally new experience for me (battling wise). So yeah, hearing that I managed to portrait what I was trying to show off, as well as you enjoying it, is great to hear

6 - You know what I'm referring to by saying that, right?? XD There's no thumbs up or down here anyways, only... Yeah you know, haha

 

[MarBellarke]

Another great release!
It was not confusing one bit; I was with it from beginning to end.

You did great incorporating each Titan in the battle and in the right moment.

Adding that Giant Toad was a smart act. I mean it wasn't predictable and it did level the playing field for a moment. His backstory fit well and I loved his personality - he was quite amusing.

For the music... it's a wonderful addition. It's like a score in this anime. Yes I did say "...this anime", because while I'm reading I'm visualising each event as they occur, with SFX. xd

Keep up the great work man.

Another chapter bites the dust.

 

[Michael92]

Another great release!
It was not confusing one bit; I was with it from beginning to end.

You did great incorporating each Titan in the battle and in the right moment.

Adding that Giant Toad was a smart act. I mean it wasn't predictable and it did level the playing field for a moment. His backstory fit well and I loved his personality - he was quite amusing.

For the music... it's a wonderful addition. It's like a score in this anime. Yes I did say "...this anime", because while I'm reading I'm visualising each event as they occur, with SFX. xd

Keep up the great work man.

Another chapter bites the dust.

Good to know ^_^ Means that I still have it in me, even at this scale of battling And thanks, means a lot

Hehe, you're the first to actually comment the music man, glad you enjoy it

At this rate, you'll catch up to chapter 22 this evening

 

[syed47]

wao..... awesome.... can't wait for the next chapter..... well, when are you gonna release the next chapter????

 

[syed47]

oh... i got ur latest chaps.... well, u see.... i'm a newbie...

 

[darkstar94]

i like this chapter though got bit confused in part 1(before the summoning of great toad)...but i think i would manage to get grip on it by reading that part again