The Legendary Sage of Konoha 2

[Gin-Sama]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

Not cool when naruto said tsunade LOL

anyway nice story

 

[Amat3ra5u]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

I see.. thats why he doesnt refer him as sensei..because theire both jounins...
but doesnt sakura still call iruka "sensei", eventhough their both chunins...
but who cares anyway..not all that important. xd

 

[Michael92]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

Whoo hoo Naruto finally gets laid!!!
Good job putting Shino in there. He always gets left out of fan fiction.

Once again, there is no real evidence pointing towards him being the Hokage yet, but oh well. Maybexd

Oh he does? I always thought of him as one of the strongest in Konoha along side Neji and Rock Lee in the manga/anime, so he just had to be in

So cool! cant wait for next chapter!

Glad you liked it

Check my last sentence in this post for your reply on the next chapter

Not cool when naruto said tsunade LOL

anyway nice story

Well he could have said "Granny oh ba chan" or whatever he says, but i thought that wouldn`t be as cool anymore He could also said Gondaime Hokage or 5th Hokage, but that didn`t really fit in in the middle of the conversation.

I find that more fitting as an introduction instead of "Hey" for example, when there is something important to say, or if a person generally shows respect towards the Hokage.

Thanks glad you liked it

I see.. thats why he doesnt refer him as sensei..because theire both jounins...
but doesnt sakura still call iruka "sensei", eventhough their both chunins...
but who cares anyway..not all that important. xd

Hehe Well he could have said it anyway, but he thinks he`s cool and better than others at time, and it is only his father that he normally has the out most respect for.
Maybe I`ll add something on that in upcoming chapters

UPDATE:​

Chapter 3 will be released within half a hour to 40 minutes, so stay tuned for it.

I`ll provide links to everyone that has read and/or commented on and/or thanked chapter 2

 

[Christyan]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

Nice one m8

 

[Michael92]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

Nice one m8

That fast Glad you liked it

Here`s the link for chapter 3:

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[Kuroi Honoo]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

I liked everything about the chapter with the exception of one thing. WHY IS LEE WITH SAKURA!!!??? Better yet having a baby? *forcefully jabs blade into abdomen slicing left to right* No-I think not even committing seppuku could erase what my eyes have viewed from existence (sarcasm ends). Well, it is your fanfic and it is your choices. I only had a reaction to that due to my fantasy of SasukexSakura but oh well -_- *shrugs it off* lol

So then I suppose Hinata is the wife or could it be someone else. Jiraiya apparently seems to be an exceptional shinobi at such a young age even surpassing his father in a rapid rate. I like how you are popping in and out of pre/post current fanfic time. I also like how you depicted the former rookies by means of their persona’s I’d have to say that they are pretty spot on Whoa! Already the action is beginning next chapter-nice looking forward to reading the following chapter, next lol ​

 

[Kansas Bred]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

Thumbs up, Good job...

 

[Michael92]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

I liked everything about the chapter with the exception of one thing. WHY IS LEE WITH SAKURA!!!??? Better yet having a baby? *forcefully jabs blade into abdomen slicing left to right* No-I think not even committing seppuku could erase what my eyes have viewed from existence (sarcasm ends). Well, it is your fanfic and it is your choices. I only had a reaction to that due to my fantasy of SasukexSakura but oh well -_- *shrugs it off* lol

So then I suppose Hinata is the wife or could it be someone else. Jiraiya apparently seems to be an exceptional shinobi at such a young age even surpassing his father in a rapid rate. I like how you are popping in and out of pre/post current fanfic time. I also like how you depicted the former rookies by means of their persona’s I’d have to say that they are pretty spot on Whoa! Already the action is beginning next chapter-nice looking forward to reading the following chapter, next lol ​

Well as I may have said I`ve been planning the story way ahead before even starting, and i`ll get back to the married thing later in my post.

Yeah, i do hope you`re not only saying you liked it when you in fact hated it because of not SasukeXSakura?

By chapter 4 you will get a good idea of who`s married to who and who got childeren and who`s all alone yet:-/
Yeah i guess he has, but still only twelve thou

And now back to the married thing. Yeah i though every choice I`ve made fit well because i got something planned for Sasuke.
In fact, in chapter 5 you will see only a flashback(i think) on what happend to him and why Akatsuki retreated in the first place. I know you`re a Sasuke fanboy so that part will be exciting to see wheter you hate me for it, or accept itxd Then you might see why not SasukeXSakura

Thumbs up, Good job...

Oh thanks, hope you will continue reading

 

[demondaime]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

so who did naruto marry, i got to know

 

[demondaime]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

after this u should write more fanfic, i'm really into ur stories

 

[Michael92]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

so who did naruto marry, i got to know.

After this u should write more fanfic, i'm really into ur stories

Well i didn`t knew that you read my FF, Thanks for your support, hope you will continue reading

Anyway, you`ll find out in chapter 4 if you read the spoiler in the comments in chapter 3, but if not then you will find out by chapter 5 or 6

Hehe, who knows I mean, peoples at NB normally starts with a Naruto related FF, but then move on later on. So who knows, maybe i will make another one in the future

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

Well has I may have said I`ve been planning the story way ahead before even starting, and i`ll get back to the married thing later in my post.

Yeah, i do hope you`re not only saying you liked it when you in fact hated it because of not SasukeXSakura?

By chapter 4 you will get a good idea of who`s married to who and who got childeren and who`s all alone yet:-/
Yeah i guess he has, but still only twelve thou

And now back to the married thing. Yeah i though every choice I`ve made fit well because i got something planned for Sasuke.
In fact, in chapter 5 you will see only a flashback(i think) on what happend to him and why Akatsuki retreated in the first place. I know you`re a Sasuke fanboy so that part will be exciting to see wheter you hate me for it, or accept itxd Then you might see why not SasukeXSakura

I am dying to find out who Naruto is married to but am thankful that in part 4 the answers seemed to be revealed ^.^ No, no, no-I do in fact like your fanfic very much minus the LeexSakura pairing -_- lol That scares me "something planned for Sasuke" I do indeed hope it does not involve death for his future because if so I will be crushed -_- Well I am a Sasuke fanatic but it does not blind me from all of his faults, etc. or thinks he is Kami (God) which is literally what separates me from a true fanboy lol I do think I might now what you might have planned…and if so I would be mortified.​

 

[Michael92]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

I am dying to find out who Naruto is married to but am thankful that in part 4 the answers seemed to be revealed ^.^ No, no, no-I do in fact like your fanfic very much minus the LeexSakura pairing -_- lol That scares me "something planned for Sasuke" I do indeed hope it does not involve death for his future because if so I will be crushed -_- Well I am a Sasuke fanatic but it does not blind me from all of his faults, etc. or thinks he is Kami (God) which is literally what separates me from a true fanboy lol I do think I might now what you might have planned…and if so I would be mortified.​

I`m almost bursting the bobble here! You`re going to be shocked when i reveal Sasuke`s fate!

 

[desbes99]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

I'm a bit confused with the timeline can somebody explain it to me

 

[Michael92]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

I'm a bit confused with the timeline can somebody explain it to me

If you read chapter one, it said in the introduction that it is set 16 years ahead of the manga. Read carefully if you really want to get it

 

[MarBellarke]

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

i really love this FF... can't wait to read the next chapter

 

[Byron123]

Don't you think that you made Naruto far too serious?

 

[Michael92]

Retrospective After-thoughts Part 2:

Damn this thing was short I can't believe this is the same writer that eventually ended up breaking the 150k letter limits on the Base. At least it won't take that long to get to the good stuff I suppose, but still xD. Overall short and sweet chapter, but faaar from what I would consider to be even a decent one out of everything I released over the years, though I suppose it's not a fair comparison to make either considering what a noob I was at the time

6/10

Re: The Legendary Sage of Konoha, Chapter 2:

Muahahahaha Sakura and Lee _O-

This post Caliburn is probably the one and only active member at this point that commented on my 2 first chapters and that are still around on the Base today. Longevity