[Horror] The Jungle of New Found Terror

[Latios]

The jungle, the jungle! How fun you can be,
After all you showed me how fun painting with dismembered corpses can be!
Your blood stained leaves, your beautiful sight, who wouldn't appreciate the jungle fright?
I love how you take passersby under your wing,
You fling their dead bodies across the jungle canopy!
Where is everyone? I need more paint.
After all, the blood curdled screams are getting quite faint.

This is my first Horror poem, so please give me some constructive criticism! And be honest xD

 

[loj]

I hate Horrors but this is quiet nice gj

 

[Latios]

I hate Horrors but this is quiet nice gj

Thanks

 

[Joon]

Alright, childishly written tho, whatever that means.

 

[Ryóma]

Scary...

 

[Ryu Kishi]

not bad, keep it up

 

[Latios]

Alright, childishly written tho, whatever that means.

Oh. it was supposed to sound like it was a young girl/boy saying it.