The Haiku Challenge

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Haiku (俳句) is one of the most important form of traditional japonese poetry. It consists of three lines with five, seven, and five syllables respectively. Often focusing on images from nature, haiku emphasizes simplicity, intensity, and directness of expression. Haiku is commonly written in the present tense and focus on associations between images. There is a pause at the end of the first or second line, and there is a kigo (season word), specifying the time of year.

As the form has evolved, many of these rules—including the 5/7/5 practice—have been routinely broken. However, the philosophy of haiku has been preserved: the focus on a brief moment in time, a use of provocative, colorful images, an ability to be read in one breath, and a sense of sudden enlightenment and illumination.

Examples:

On a withered branch
a crow has alighted:
nightfall in autumn.
—Bashō

Not quite dark yet
and the stars shining
above the withered fields.
—Buson

With ease
they reconstruct...
billowing clouds.
—Issa

I challenge everyone that posts on this section to try and create some haiku. Even the ones that don't usually post poetry, feel free to give it a try. But most of all, don't forget to have fun~
 

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Hello there
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"Rasengan!"


Jesus I was just saying hello, jerk
 

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I'm up for this. By the way, the haiku you posted don't have the syllables as 5,7,5.
 

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Yayyyyyyyy :x3:

I'm up for this. By the way, the haiku you posted don't have the syllables as 5,7,5.

Oh, that's because it was translated from the japanese, so it messes the counting a bit. But as I have said above, that rule isn't much used nowadays. Just remember to keep it short. And good luck! *_*
 

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Yayyyyyyyy :x3:



Oh, that's because it was translated from the japanese, so it messes the counting a bit. But as I have said above, that rule isn't much used nowadays. Just remember to keep it short. And good luck! *_*

Alright, shall we post them in this thread, or would you make another one?
 

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o will give it a shotXD
 

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Let's do it .

The coldness conquers the darkness
filled with stars that twinkles and bright
it's beauty of the night .
 
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Alright, shall we post them in this thread, or would you make another one?

I'll answer your question again. I would rather if everyone posted them here, but since Waindo started posting in new threads, it's okay to do it that way too. Whatever you prefer *_*

Let's do it .

The coldness conquers the darkness
filled with stars that twinkles and bright
it's beauty of the night .

You nailed it. <3
 
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