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In Hamilton, Ohio, USA. The population is made of 46.4 % Males and 53.6 % Females. The ages that is under 5 years old are 7.0%. Ages of Ages of 5-17 is 15.6%. Ages of 18-29 is 14.9%, Ages of 30-44 is 19.2%, Ages of 45-64 is 24.64% and Ages of 65+ is 18.6%. The relationships are these: Singles that never married is 25.5 %. Married people are up to 48.4 % and the divorced rate is at 13.3%. The last one is the people who are Widowed is at 7.4%. The Annual crimes in Hamilton is total up to 4,325 %.
In the outskirts of the Hamilton in a rural arena. There is a family called "Den". They are the nicest family but somethings they are goofy. The main character of this story is about Daniel Den and his family in the first chapter. How he live and in react with others of his age or younger or older. Some reason even at food stores. Once while strange things happen to him like one time he help his mom getting some food to take home. When he looked back to see a baby in a shopping kart. The baby saw him and raise their stumpy arms as if he/she want him to hold her/him. The mother of the baby was shock but smiled at Daniel. Daniel smile back.
That was when he was teenager. When he was in Elementary School named, "Brown Elementary School". He went there for K-4 but he wasn't there for 3 grade cause he went to Marie Elementary School. After that he wen to the Weavers Elementary School for fifth grade. Then he went to Collins Middle School that was for 6 grade to eight grade but after that he went to Collins High School for ninth and 12 grade.
While he was in the fourth grade he had crush on this one girl. That girls name was Raff Fen. Who asked him and other boy named Dean Dawen. Some how Raff Fen find out that he likes her. So She asked the two boys to go being a recess sign. She asked them to kissed her but Daniel wanted to but he was too shy. He regret ever since then.
Later in life when he turn 18 years old. This girl was 16. They are only 3 years apart in age a gap. That girls name was Aby Bay. Who was the oldest daughter of the pastor Neral Bay. It was on a trip to a religion fest called, "Snowfest." They believe in one god but who has three parts to him. The called him the Alpha King. His son, Alpha Prince and their help Alpha Helper. Cause they are one being. Daniel Den and Aby Bay are the Followers of the Wolion.
Daniel's father name is Garth Den who once was a Party Animal in his youth while his mother Jeune was like church Mouse. Whose focus on her spiritual life. Daniel have a brother, Nate Den.
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CHAPTER 1
On a red moon lit night. Daniel Den got a bad feeling that he could not understand. Shivers went down his spine like he could feel something bad was about to happen. Daniel Den has a INFJ type of personality. He's creative, he’s a dreamer not a realist, attracted to sad things, fears making the wrong decision, an observer, avoidant, fears the spotlight, anxious, cautious. He is somewhat easily frightened, offended, and hurt : socially uncomfortable. He values private, a moody person, and doesn’t like stares. He’s a perfectionist, self sabotaging, he can be wounded at the core, guarded, does not like crowds, organized, always second guessing, doesn't support marijuana legalization, he focuses on peoples hidden motives, prone to crying in his room or far away from others, he is competitive, prone to feelings of loneliness, not spontaneous, prone to sadness, longs for a stable relationship, fears rejection, frequently worried, can feel victimized, prone to intimidation, low energy, and a strict followers of the Wolion. He's a gentlemen to both men and women. He also is kind to kids. He has a low self-esteem due to all the rejections he had and his first break up.
Ever since his Brother’s, Cousins' and church friends’ weddings, he wished he could find the right girl. He keeps being told that he'll one day find some one special. Those who says that are mostly married couples or are in some relationship. He wants some one but every once while he imagines he’s the last man on earth.
Daniel's family was loving and caring family. They played pranks each other, mainly Daniel and Garth Den. Which is basically against the law of the USA. The Government is over stepping their authority. Garth Den was a hunter and Fishermen while his mother was Gardener and a knitter . So they kinda taught him how do stuff like that. How to build fires and among other things.
Unbeknownst to Daniel Den. On the West Coast of the USA. In the San Francisco, California. There was family named, "Danette." The girls' name is Avril. This family was totally against any people who worship material things. They are referred to as Followers of the Mind. Her family isn't normal but she was born from rape. Her parents didn't want her at all. They don't want to tell the authorities either. So they put her up for adoption. While she was treated like slave only doing the disgusting chores. She eats only the leftovers.
One day she decided that she'll would run away during the night from her foster home. That's when she gets kidnapped by a UFO. Creatures that had a Torso of an Alien but a monkey resembling lower half. She's on the experiment table of the ship. They injected two DNAs into her body. That cause her silky black hair to change into a dark red hair color. It also changes her left eye to blue and her right eye green. Now on her cheeks are freckles. Now she has all of the blood of the world except for Irish, British and German blood in her.
The UFO just got too close to a planet called, "Banville". Which shoot at the UFO. Unknowing to the other Alienkies their half-ling cousin is named Caen Kicig. He launch himself from a pod and go back to his home planet Futictis. He claims that the earthlings had killed their leader. So they are the fighters and warriors of Futictis. They are more advanced in technology than the humans on earth. After all of the most important people on the planet left for the War room/command center. Caen Kicig smirked and said, "Hi father. I'm carrying out orders."
A evil set of eyes opened in the shadows and said in creepy voice, "I know my son. You are half demon and half Alienkey. You are the first of it's kind. We'll take over the pathetic earth that we should've took over long time ago. I have to go now son. I'll since our Alpha Emperor is calling me back to our realm." Caen Kicig said, "See ya father."
Back on Earth and in the family of Den. Daniel just got fed up with his dad saying, "All of the lights in the house is on." Only when 3 lights were on at the most. One day Daniel heard his father just drove into the drive. So Daniel had crazy idea. He decide to turn on every lights from the main floor to the basement and even all the lamps as well. Few months later. Garth Den and Daniel Den had father and son prank war with each other. One day while Garth was at work. Daniel decide to get his long underwear of both bottom and top. He fill it up with rolled socks. He had a wresting masked and a stuff chimp doll. He put the head in the long sleeve long johns. Where you put your head come out of. He put the wrestling masked on the chimp's head. He put two long swords as the legs. While the short sword was in one of sleeves. The rest was of his wrestling figures. When Jeune came home from work. She was shock and cause Daniel put the dummy on Garth's chair. Daniel didn't mean to surprise his mom. They both start laughing. The Prank war went on for two months until Garth threw in the trowel. At the end of the Prank war. Garth had 20 wins and Daniel had 22 wins.
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Summary:
Summary:
In Hamilton, Ohio, USA. The population is made of 46.4 % Males and 53.6 % Females. The ages that is under 5 years old are 7.0%. Ages of Ages of 5-17 is 15.6%. Ages of 18-29 is 14.9%, Ages of 30-44 is 19.2%, Ages of 45-64 is 24.64% and Ages of 65+ is 18.6%. The relationships are these: Singles that never married is 25.5 %. Married people are up to 48.4 % and the divorced rate is at 13.3%. The last one is the people who are Widowed is at 7.4%. The Annual crimes in Hamilton is total up to 4,325 %.
In the outskirts of the Hamilton in a rural arena. There is a family called "Den". They are the nicest family but somethings they are goofy. The main character of this story is about Daniel Den and his family in the first chapter. How he live and in react with others of his age or younger or older. Some reason even at food stores. Once while strange things happen to him like one time he help his mom getting some food to take home. When he looked back to see a baby in a shopping kart. The baby saw him and raise their stumpy arms as if he/she want him to hold her/him. The mother of the baby was shock but smiled at Daniel. Daniel smile back.
That was when he was teenager. When he was in Elementary School named, "Brown Elementary School". He went there for K-4 but he wasn't there for 3 grade cause he went to Marie Elementary School. After that he wen to the Weavers Elementary School for fifth grade. Then he went to Collins Middle School that was for 6 grade to eight grade but after that he went to Collins High School for ninth and 12 grade.
While he was in the fourth grade he had crush on this one girl. That girls name was Raff Fen. Who asked him and other boy named Dean Dawen. Some how Raff Fen find out that he likes her. So She asked the two boys to go being a recess sign. She asked them to kissed her but Daniel wanted to but he was too shy. He regret ever since then.
Later in life when he turn 18 years old. This girl was 16. They are only 3 years apart in age a gap. That girls name was Aby Bay. Who was the oldest daughter of the pastor Neral Bay. It was on a trip to a religion fest called, "Snowfest." They believe in one god but who has three parts to him. The called him the Alpha King. His son, Alpha Prince and their help Alpha Helper. Cause they are one being. Daniel Den and Aby Bay are the Followers of the Wolion.
Daniel's father name is Garth Den who once was a Party Animal in his youth while his mother Jeune was like church Mouse. Whose focus on her spiritual life. Daniel have a brother, Nate Den.
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CHAPTER 1
On a red moon lit night. Daniel Den got a bad feeling that he could not understand. Shivers went down his spine like he could feel something bad was about to happen. Daniel Den has a INFJ type of personality. He's creative, he’s a dreamer not a realist, attracted to sad things, fears making the wrong decision, an observer, avoidant, fears the spotlight, anxious, cautious. He is somewhat easily frightened, offended, and hurt : socially uncomfortable. He values private, a moody person, and doesn’t like stares. He’s a perfectionist, self sabotaging, he can be wounded at the core, guarded, does not like crowds, organized, always second guessing, doesn't support marijuana legalization, he focuses on peoples hidden motives, prone to crying in his room or far away from others, he is competitive, prone to feelings of loneliness, not spontaneous, prone to sadness, longs for a stable relationship, fears rejection, frequently worried, can feel victimized, prone to intimidation, low energy, and a strict followers of the Wolion. He's a gentlemen to both men and women. He also is kind to kids. He has a low self-esteem due to all the rejections he had and his first break up.
Ever since his Brother’s, Cousins' and church friends’ weddings, he wished he could find the right girl. He keeps being told that he'll one day find some one special. Those who says that are mostly married couples or are in some relationship. He wants some one but every once while he imagines he’s the last man on earth.
Daniel's family was loving and caring family. They played pranks each other, mainly Daniel and Garth Den. Which is basically against the law of the USA. The Government is over stepping their authority. Garth Den was a hunter and Fishermen while his mother was Gardener and a knitter . So they kinda taught him how do stuff like that. How to build fires and among other things.
Unbeknownst to Daniel Den. On the West Coast of the USA. In the San Francisco, California. There was family named, "Danette." The girls' name is Avril. This family was totally against any people who worship material things. They are referred to as Followers of the Mind. Her family isn't normal but she was born from rape. Her parents didn't want her at all. They don't want to tell the authorities either. So they put her up for adoption. While she was treated like slave only doing the disgusting chores. She eats only the leftovers.
One day she decided that she'll would run away during the night from her foster home. That's when she gets kidnapped by a UFO. Creatures that had a Torso of an Alien but a monkey resembling lower half. She's on the experiment table of the ship. They injected two DNAs into her body. That cause her silky black hair to change into a dark red hair color. It also changes her left eye to blue and her right eye green. Now on her cheeks are freckles. Now she has all of the blood of the world except for Irish, British and German blood in her.
The UFO just got too close to a planet called, "Banville". Which shoot at the UFO. Unknowing to the other Alienkies their half-ling cousin is named Caen Kicig. He launch himself from a pod and go back to his home planet Futictis. He claims that the earthlings had killed their leader. So they are the fighters and warriors of Futictis. They are more advanced in technology than the humans on earth. After all of the most important people on the planet left for the War room/command center. Caen Kicig smirked and said, "Hi father. I'm carrying out orders."
A evil set of eyes opened in the shadows and said in creepy voice, "I know my son. You are half demon and half Alienkey. You are the first of it's kind. We'll take over the pathetic earth that we should've took over long time ago. I have to go now son. I'll since our Alpha Emperor is calling me back to our realm." Caen Kicig said, "See ya father."
Back on Earth and in the family of Den. Daniel just got fed up with his dad saying, "All of the lights in the house is on." Only when 3 lights were on at the most. One day Daniel heard his father just drove into the drive. So Daniel had crazy idea. He decide to turn on every lights from the main floor to the basement and even all the lamps as well. Few months later. Garth Den and Daniel Den had father and son prank war with each other. One day while Garth was at work. Daniel decide to get his long underwear of both bottom and top. He fill it up with rolled socks. He had a wresting masked and a stuff chimp doll. He put the head in the long sleeve long johns. Where you put your head come out of. He put the wrestling masked on the chimp's head. He put two long swords as the legs. While the short sword was in one of sleeves. The rest was of his wrestling figures. When Jeune came home from work. She was shock and cause Daniel put the dummy on Garth's chair. Daniel didn't mean to surprise his mom. They both start laughing. The Prank war went on for two months until Garth threw in the trowel. At the end of the Prank war. Garth had 20 wins and Daniel had 22 wins.
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